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Please find Part II.. The plot is getting interesting and I was tooo eager to write this one..Geet's entry in KC as Assistant Architect.

Those who have missed Part I will not enjoy this.. so please make sure you go through

Chapter 1: I made love with stranger

As always, let me know your views..
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Chapter II ' I met Maan Singh Khurana

Geet reached Khurana Construction's office on time.. Today she had an interview scheduled with the MD of the company .. In first round, 5 candidates were selected and this was their second round with the MD itself. She was very much hoping for this job.. Last few days at Delhi.. was very hectic for her.. . she somehow managed to get a place to stay as paying guest.. but now all her money is running out.. she applied for job at so many places.. but no luck yet..She needed this job badly..

She looked at the name plate on the cabin door.. "Maan Singh Khurana"... and she looked at the girl who just came out of the cabin.. she was not looking very happy.. It made her nervous.. She wished herself all the best.. all the luck... and luck is what she was needing now most.. she has no more faith in her fate... otherwise how can she explain the events which has happened in her life in past one month... total roller coaster.. so fast..before she could think.... fate has brought her back to Delhi...

And she went back into her thoughts.. to that night... .

She left the hotel hurriedly with her bag, took the next bus to HP..and reached early morning. .. Next day. everyone was so happy to see her back..Mom-Dad... they were looking so proudly at her.. as if she has come after winning something... they were asking her lot of questions about the trip.. she managed to answer them but.. . she was feeling very low inside.. She was not able to face her parents.. what she is going to tell them....

The days were passing... she was feeling more restless.. she didn't wanted but her mind always use to wander about the stranger.. .. who was he.. and why he was there... and sometimes she used to wonder .. how he looked.. he was well built that she was sure... may be in late 20's.. not very old.. and yes he was very much drunk.. she can still feel the alcohal... she was able to catch a glimpse of him... but then she doesn't know anything about him... and remembering herself that night... she felt disgusted.. .. how she could do it.. so shamelessly, without any resistance... she gave herself into it.....

She still remembered the day... when life took another turn... .. Rohit parents came with the marriage proposal for her .. and her parents were so excited.. they were very happy for Geet.. Both of their parents were close friends.. and this could be the best thing that could happen.. but Geet she was feeling very restless.. She had known Rohit for quite long.. He was her best friend Meera's bro.. and very nice guy.. but she felt like cheating him.. She wanted to tell him everything before marriage.. but before she could do anything,, the engagement date was fixed... and she decided to accept the fate's decision silently, may be Rohit is the best guy for her...

Days just passed in the preparation of engagement.. she almost had forgotten about hotel incidence... She did all shopping.. She had started liking Rohit now more.. They discussed their marriage , honeymoon plans.. and she accepted the fact very much- she is going to be Rohit's wife....and was getting ready for her new life with Rohit... but then life ..full of surprises... she cannot understand.. what plans it is having for her...

That day..She was feeling uneasy since morning..and felt like vomiting... and she did vomit..it shocked her....."is she pregnant"..... She still remembered her nervousness.. when she watched the colour of the strip changing..and with that her whole world changed.....
She is carrying that stranger's child.. she could not believe herself....suddenly she felt herself maturing as woman....but she is only 18 now.. what she is going to do now..

Only thing she knew..She cannot face her parents now.. she cannot face Rohit now.. and she cannot explain anything.. how they will believe her.. .. that she has no clue of the father of the child..and how they will face everyone .. when everyone will know about the child.. She cannot go ahead with this engagement.. There was no option left to her... she decided to leave everything...... a day before engagement..... left a note.. for her parents.. she couldn't explain to them anything.. just to forget about her....


It brought tears into her eyes.. remembering her family.. everyone.. she doesn't know if she has taken right decision or not..only time will tell... she only knew she can not face her parents now..

"Geet Handa..." she came back from her thoughts.. when she heard her name called...

She looked at her dress.. and gave "all the best" to herself.. and knocked at the door..

"Yes Come in.." There were 4-5 people seating inside.. and one of them she looked closely.. he was looking very well dressed.. and she thought he is probably the MD as everyone was looking at him..

and she was right... he nodded her to take the seat.. and she took one of the chair..

" Sir...Thank you ".. She looked at him.. He didn't looked that old to be MD... must be in his late 20's .. lean.. handsome.. and well built...

He took her personal file from her.. and started going through it..

"You must be knowing , this position is for Assitant Architect.. You have done diploma in architecture.. but no experience.. so why you want me to take you.. "

The voice unnerved her.. she was sure she had heard it earlier.. She looked at him deeply.... Yes... she had seen him also earlier.. but where,, but then this she can think about it later..now concenrate .. concentrate....on interview and she came back..

"Yes, i don't have experience,,, but I think I am very capable to handle it.. and everyone has first time.." She answered him confidently...

"and you are new to Delhi.."

"Yes.. but I am now well settled here.."

There were few more questions and she answered them confidently.. but at the back of her mind.. she was not able to control ...."where I have seen him"

she was still thinking... ..while leaving.. and then it stuck her.....

"Oh my God... this is the same person who was with me in hotel room that day.." She could not believe.. she turned back and looked at him once again.... and now she was very sure.... she can recognize his voice... he was the one with her that night..

she came out of the cabin hurriedly.. and rushed to wash room....



In next - How she is going to work here knowing that he is father of her child... ?


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Posted: 14 years ago
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i cant wait for the next part . please update soon even though u just updated tat cuz i am very selfish sorry abt tat.
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I'm liking this concept....it's well written too!...update soon!😊
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So Geet just left a note? So her parents are not aware of her being pregnant?

Btw...Maan had not seen her face right?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update...........really want to know what geet will do now?.............will maan recognise her?............
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VERY INTERESTING CONCEPT ,plz continue soon and dont forget to PM me thanx 😉
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Oh dear.......you are going to be upset by what I am going to ask. Some FF writers do get annoyed with such questions. Anyway I have decided to ask. WHY CANT YOU WRITE LONGER UPDATES? (This upper case doesnt mean shouting). So that we can have the pleasure of reading your work for some more time until the next one. If you are still stubborn in writing only shorter ones, then I demand for daily updates (jus kidding). So that was an indirect way of telling you that your ff is awesome.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzerette

So Geet just left a note? So her parents are not aware of her being pregnant?


Btw...Maan had not seen her face right?

true...her parents don't know why she left ..i have kept this open now
Maan didnot see her face.. and that is the interesting part on which further story will develop.. creattive liberty....😉
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update...........really want to know what geet will do now?.............will maan recognise her?............

Maan will recognize her sure.. but not that fast.. varna Story main majaaa nahin raehga.. so keep going thorugh all updates...
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Originally posted by: Viji79

Oh dear.......you are going to be upset by what I am going to ask. Some FF writers do get annoyed with such questions. Anyway I have decided to ask. WHY CANT YOU WRITE LONGER UPDATES? (This upper case doesnt mean shouting). So that we can have the pleasure of reading your work for some more time until the next one. If you are still stubborn in writing only shorter ones, then I demand for daily updates (jus kidding). So that was an indirect way of telling you that your ff is awesome.

Yes i agree.. as a reader.. your point is very valid.. but if you ask me.. i don't know now how the story will develop further. I have rough plot with me.. but i know it will be changed compleetly when i start putting the detailed story...one by one...

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