OS: Their Surprises (Part 2 on pg 5)

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cloud94evr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

beautifully written... thoroughly enjoyed it.

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

it was awesome 👏

keep writing ....

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thekolgal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

kya saza thi yaar............

you really made me go weak in my knees..........😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

seemed as if maan got his revenge for the time when Geet had made him confess his possessiveness for her(the master ji sequence)😉 😉 😉 😉

And undoubtedly you are an amazing writer..........keep up the good work👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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pal234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

oh boy..!!

that was so nice..exact mixture of romance, understanding, love, passion..! you are awesome..!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lonely.gal
Brillant outstanding amazing awesome fantastic excellent splendid extraordinary I hv no more word to say hw much good it was? Speechless

Aww.. So sweet of you. 😳 Thanks.

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

wowi superb part
Loved Maans sazaa 2 geet
😊😊

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Shweta13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Awesome update once again !!!

On Maan singh Khurana can show the Passion, Lust, love, authoritative emotions, all at one time.

Loved it !!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Beautiful...as always!!!👏

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naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD THIS!!

favourite bit:

"Agle din kyon bina kuchh soche samjhe subah, subah mere peechhe office chali aayi thi?"

She could not beat around the bush any longer, "Pyaar... karne lagi thi... Aapko kuchh ho jaata to... maine bhi zinda nahin"

He did not let her complete that as he furiously attacked her lips with his own. The long kiss left her breathless.

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

That was romantic

Maan's sazaa was sumwhr sazaa for him also😉

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