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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunjar

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful and awesome scenes plsssss give the next update soon..........

ur welcome,soon i will add 4 more episodes and complete 75 episodes and by the end of week 100 episodes..so that before 4th April I can gift this fan fiction and possible future track to team Geet...
Do help me in promoting the idea and send the gift to team Geet..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Episode 72:

Scene 1: Maan,Maansi,Venu and Bakul's first meeting..

Scene description: Maan notices Maansi too was there and begins his walk,with the trademark background music where Maan is feeling the pain...Venu welcomes Maan and thanks him for finally coming down,he introduces Maan to Bakul and begins a round of talk...since everyone is new to each other and feel a bit awkward to open up..Maansi too is very shy as her boss Maan was there..

Scene 2: Venu asks Maansi to be normal as Maan was her boss in office and not outside and confirms with Maan if he was ok with it...Venu makes fun of Maan and scolds him for running away the last time when he had called,Maansi has a look at Maan and recollects she had met Maan and Maan had come down to meet Venu...

Scene 3: Venu feels there is some awkwardness and no one was comfortable with each other,so he plans of music and dance....
Maan denies as he did not want to and Bakul denies since she wasn't feeling like,Maansi too feels she did not want to,Venu gets upset and confirms what was wrong and why was the environment as if it was a death ceremony of some one,he requests everyone to cheer up as he wanted to celebrate Maansi's new job..

Scene 4: Looking at the cheer after his short lecture,Venu feels nervous to ask Bakul if she wud dance with him and before he cud,Maan asks Bakul if she wud like to dance with him,Bakul accepts with cheer and Venu is left disappointed with Maansi surprised,as she expected Maan wud ask her...she makes fun of Venu to cheer up and also hurry up as Maan was too fast..Maansi smiles and takes Venu to the dance floor..

Scene 5: The music is slow and Bakul informs Maan that she was a big fan of him and adored his success in such a age,Maan who is just entertaining for the sake of entertaining smiles and lets off..

Scene 6: venu who is continously feeling bad about Bakul dancing with Maan is sad and his eyes are on Bakul,Maansi feels ignored and asks venu to look at her...

Scene 7: Bakul realises that Maan was looking at Venu and Maansi,while talking to Maan she just mentions about Venu's feelings for Maansi to which Maan gets stunned..( Offcourse a misunderstanding by Bakul but then Maan feels Venu likes Maansi and comes a moment from past when Venu tells him to take Maansi and Maan feels Venu really had feelings for Maansi)

Scene 8: Venu who wants to be close to Bakul,plans something and tells Maansi to support her,Maansi is a bit reluctant to dance with Maan but then she is pushed hard by venu...

Scene 9: While the music changes and as planned by Venu,the partners change and get interchanged and Maansi is now in arms of Maan and Bakul with venu..

Break: Maan and Maansi mahi moment and this time the entire song of Maahi tune..for 3 minutes..

Where Maan and Maansi get invloved and happens the first dance sequence on Maahi with Maan getting flashes of him dancing with Geet from the past as he looks at Maansi dancing with him...
Just before the break Maan recollects words of Bakul and feels Maansi was loved by his friend Venu...

Break: The last part of dance sequence will show Maan and Maansi getting seperated....as everybody else clap for Maan and Maansi and Maan moves out of the dance floor looking at Maansi...while Maansi notices that in Maan's eyes Bakul and Venu have no hint...

The episode ends with Maansi feeling some feel in Maan's eyes which always disturbed her...

One screen and two pics and that of Maan and Maansi..
Edited by GVVN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks a lot vikrant bro awesome updates ........😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Episode 73:

Scene 1; Venu and bakul are surprised to see as Maan is missing and Maansi still feeling the pain in Maan's eyes which she saw when both were dancing together...Maansi tells Venu to wait for a while and she wud come back after checking where Maan was...

Scene 2: Venu asks Bakul how was the plan and if she enjoyed? Bakul nods her head and tells Venu she envied Maansi for having such a good friend like him,Venu feels good and tells Bakul he was friends with Bakul as well its only Bakul who spends time with him occassionally..

Scene 3: Maansi moves outside and notices Maan wasn't there anywhere and feels amazed how Maan left without informing..

Scene 4: Maan's acrobatic scene..where he is exercsing and performing martial arts...

Complete scene designed to show Maan dealing with similarities between Geet and Maansi....and the fact that Venu loved Maansi..

( Background music the same as always used)

While Maan is performing he gets alot of missed calls from Maansi which he avoids and dadi notices it..

scene 5: Maansi feels something was wrong with Maan and moves back to inform Venu to confirm if Maan was ok?

Scene 6: Dadi sees Maan over doing it and requests him to stop...Maan informs dadi he wont be able to bear Maansi for a single day,dadi tells Maan it was difficult but then Maansi was good enough to atleast consider..since what Maan was getting was a miracle which was rare and he shud respect that..Maan informs dadi that she was wrong as Venu had feelings for Maansi...dadi feels let down as Maan moves out...

Scene 7: Maan and Geet flashback moment:

( Background music of kaise mujhe tum)

Maan goes to his room and takes the footprint out when Maan and Geet first came to Khurana house and a scene which is unshot but can now be added..a romantic sequence just after the wedding when Geet is setting the foot print and Maan comes from behind and holds her tightly..Geet requests Maan to leave her..

Maan while holding Geet from behind..

Maan: Geet mujhse door na raha karo,aur yeh kya hai? mujhe wahan akele chodkar tum yahan yeh footprint adjust kar rahi ho
Geet:Yeh footprint nahi hamare hamesha saath chalne ka pehla kadam ki nishani hai aur thank you Maan for taking it...

Maan: Thanks kuch sukha sukha nahi hai,kuch aavi aavi sa...and tries to get Geet close to him and gets a bit romantic.
Geet hits Maan on his head and Maan with a remote starts music where he gets a bit moody..

Break: Maan and Geet moment of romantic dance,Geet makes funny faces as she moves to bath room and Maan enters forcefully in...
The entire sequence designed with a music specially designed for the sequence..Sequence smartly shot as Maan changes Geet's clothes..and both perform on the music in the bathroom....

Break: While Geet rushes outside the bathroom and falls and Maan shouts "Geet'

Maan comes out of flashback moment and realises the reality...

The episode ends with Maan coming out of a romantic dance memory with Geet and realising Maansi is calling him since a long time..

The episode ends with Maansi trying to get in touch with Maan and Maan having a look at the handset where he is getting Maansi's call.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Episode 74;

Scene 1:Maan igores calls from Maansi...Maansi calls Venu to confirm if Maan was ok?Venu assures Maansi and calls up Maan who assures Venu he was ok and had some urgent work so had to leave..

Scene 2: Venu informs Maansi,Maan was ok ...Maansi feels why Maan ignored her and did not pick her call...she thinks Maan was too upset with her and even she did alot of things which were not supposed to do..

Scene 3: Other day,Maansi comes in with flowers for Maan and an apology letter so that she can apologise Maan for everything..she goes in and adjusts white roses as a token of peace and a card as well with her name..

Scene 4: Maan comes in the office and Sulagana wishes him and he makes a move while everyone is wishing him and while moving he sights Maansi looking at him..and in slow moment comes a scene where Maan and Maansi are looking at each other...

Scene 5: Maan enters the cabin and calls Maansi in...( Maan and Maansi nok zhok moment)

Maan: yeh kya hai?

Maansi: Woh,I wanted to apologise so thought of giving flowers,kal jo hua uske liye..

( Angry Maan looking at flowers)

Maan: Kal aisa kuch nahi hua jis keliye tumhe sharminda hona padhe,you are not that important ki tumhari wajah se mujhe bura lage..

Maansi feels Maan was rude and feels offended and replies back sharply..

Maansi: How mean,mujhe laga ki aapko bura laga hoga,mein yahan apologise kar rahi hu aur aap hai ki attitude dikha rahe hai...
Mein hi galat thi,jo raat bhar aapko call karti rahi,lekin call back karne ke bajaye call ignore karte rahe,kya aap baata sakte hai ki aapne mera call receive kyu nahi kiya...kal raat aapne Venu ke call ka jawab diya mere nahi aur aaj subah jab mein apni galti ki maafi maang rahi hu toh aapko inn flowers se gussa aagaya...aapne Zindagi mein kabhi flowers accept kiye hai yaa unhe uthakar dustbin mein phekdiye,like this...

Maansi picks up the flowers and throws them in the dustbin out of irritation and Maan is left speechless..

Maan: Tum,Tum jaanti hona tum sach mein ek case ho...mein flowers aur card ki nahi,iss file ke baare mein keh raha tha jo kal sign karke complete honi chaiye thi..

Maan picks the file just next to flowers and shows Maansi..Maansi who feels she had again messed things...instead of checking the file..

Rushes back to the dustbin and picks the flowers and card and adjust them back..

While she is adjusting flowers..

Scene 6: Maan and Maansi maahi moment..

While Maansi is adjusting flowers,Maan keeps looking at her and comes moments from past as well..with Maan thinking about Geet and viewing Maansi infront...while the background music Maahi running in the back ground..

Scene 7: Maansi apologises again and snatches the file and rushes outside...Maan who is left without the file looks at the flowers and feels the moment when Geet use to arrange flowers for him on his desk..he touches flowers while feeling the past moments..

Break: Adi pinky and others ask Maansi why was she shouting what happened..Maansi informs she took flowers inside,Adi and pinky feel Maan was upset becoz of flowers but to their surprise Maansi tells them Maan was upset over the file not signed and sent and not flowers..
Adi and Pinky feel strange but also motivated as Maan did not react the way he genrally use to...

Sulagana comes in and feels Maansi was taking too many steps and at a faster rate and she had to control her movements...She plans a plot with Sugandha and Sanjog to keep Maansi in check..

Break: Maansi comes in Maan's cabin..and handsover the file and gets it signed and while moving out she apologises and tells Maan she gets hyper whenever Maan says something or provokes her...

Maan requests Maansi to keep personal perceptions aside and concentrate on work..and he bothered least if she brings flowers or something else for him as it mattered least..Maan hurts his finger while picking one of the rose and gets picked...

Maansi holds Maan's hand and the episode ends with Maansi holding Maan's hand and both looking at each other..

One screen and two pics...Maan and Maansi looking at each other..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Episode 75:

Scene 1:(Maan and Maansi maahi moment)

As Maansi holds Maan's hand since its bleeding he takes off his hand and spills a bit blood on face of Maansi a drop on her face and begins Maahi in the background as Maan slowly wipes the blood off..a small scene not a long one...Maan comes back to senses and informs Maansi he was ok..Maansi too feels a bit awkward but,Maansi sees the finger was still bleeding and she forcefully takes Maan's hand presses the finger tightly to stop the finger from bleeding...( Maahi continues after a break of few seconds)

Scene 2: Maansi informs Maan that file was on his desk as his signs were pending,Maan feels he missed his work and was his mistake,Maan keeps quiet and Maansi makes a move outside as Sulagana feels Maansi was trying to get a bit too cosi and sees how Maan wipes the blood..

Scene 3: While Maansi is moving out,Maan stops Maansi and thanks her for the flowers,Maansi feeels good and smiles and so does Maan,for the first time Maan and Maansi wud smile looking at each other..

Scene 4: Sulagana enters Maan's cabin and asks him if she was a friend or an employee,Maan is surprised as it was irrelevant,but still Sulagana insists him to answer and he says a friend,Sulagana asks Maan why was he so professional with her when he considered her as a friend..Maan feels Sulagana was a bit upset but bothers least..Sulagana tells Maan she knew he was reserved but they above that she also knew they were friends as well..Sulagana requests Maan to share his feelings with her as she observed he was a disturbed ever since Maansi came in..Sulagana moves out..after saying it..

Scene 5: Maan takes Sulagana's words far more seriously and feels his feelings were getting too expressive and he cannot afford to express them but feels helpless everytime he meets Maansi which no one else but only him who can understand.

Scene 6: Sugandha meets Maansi secretly and asks her to be aware of Sulagana as she did not like her and was planning for something which wud land her in mess,Maansi feels it was baseless as they had come to work there,but Sugandha tells her it was her responsibility as she felt Maansi was good and Sulagana had some hidden agenda...

Scene 7: Sulagana,Sanjog and Bond are together,Sulagana tells her gang that it was time to make some fun of Maansi,Sanjog warns Sulagana to be aware as her rahu was bad and was misguiding her,irritated by Sanjog's lines she makes a move towards Maansi as Bond smiles and positions himself with others to see what next was coming in..

Scene 8: Adi who is monitoring Bond's activities,confirms with bond if he had some work...Bond informs Adi that something fishy was going to happen and bond wud be such a funny character with A shaped body and typical marathi accent in hindi...Adi does not get what Bond meant to say..

Break: Sulagana and Maansi move to canteen for lunch where Sulagana taunts Maansi of trying to be too cosi to impress someone..an indirect comment directed at Maansi...Maansi ignores it and moves on but Sulagana still continues and irritated by Sulagana's attitude Maansi gets up and moves upto Sulagana to confirm what was her problem and why was she taunting her..Sulagana smiles and informs Maansi to wait for even more as her eyes were on her..

Break: Maansi who feels Sulagana's comments were directed towards her and Maan,she follows Sulagana and tells her she was least bothered about her comments and had no intentions of coming close to Maan like she thought..she had no intentions of getting close to someone who himself doesnt know what he wanted,what was his problem and looked like one dead body walking with no reason left in life to live..

The episode ends with everyone cautious as Maan listens to what Maansi said and Maansi yet again in mess...feeling embarrassed as Maan and Maansi look at each other..

One screen and two pics...Maan and Maansi looking at each other..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congratts bro really awesome updates will be waiting for ur next update
.............😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes i will and wud take some time..request to all the fans and those who have read the story..do suggest your desired scenes or any idea which u wished to see in geet but was not shown during the office track...or later on..
Suggest you scenes in the form where Maan and Geet are there is flashback and u wud like to show ur scene shot on them...
Also let me know any idea on your behalf which u wud like to show in present track with Maan and Maansi..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow bro we want to see the next part as soon as possible👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes..dear..and as said..do express urself..do share ur idea..in few lines..doesnt matter gud or bad..what matters is ur feelings for maaneet...u can message me ur idea and i will build a scene mentioning ur name..
The same applies to other fans..I beleive in fair treatment..so do ur bit for maaneet..

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