Maine Pyaar Kiya #22 - Maneet ke reception

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Hi

Most of us felt their reception party was fika fika .. no music.. and no grand celebration... so i decided to write something where the celebration is big,, spiced .with impatient MSK.
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Maine Pyaar Kiya #22 - Maneet ke reception
Taj Delhi was feeling very proud to host the wedding reception of Maan singh Khurana, the famous buisness tycoon of Delhi.. one of the well known families in the circuit of Delhi... . all top known people of Delhi were invited and they are feeling very happy to be the chosen one for this.. The ballroom was decorated especially with lillies and tulips, indian mixed western decor, minimum 500 dishes to serve.. wine flowing .. and on top the handsome groom with his shy bride.. they were looking picture perfect.. just made for each other. Taj will always remember this day.

Geet was enjoying the evening.. she had never thought her marriage to be so grand affair.. Maan has fulfilled all her dreams as he had pomised..She was feeling herself to be very lucky to have such a wonderful person in his life, for whom her wishes becomes his actions.. Everything is looking so good. ..so many guests, so much enjoyment.. music.. Yes she wanted to whole world to know that she is very happy to be married and she looked very proudly at Maan.. He was busy attending the guests...

Maan could feel Geet's eyes on him and turned back to look at her.. She is looking so beautiful tonight and very happy .. and looking at her brimming face.. he felt very happy.. He wanted to give her all happiness.. not a single tear should be in her eyes.. Geet whom he loves so much unconditionally.. Geet who has changed his life.. brought him out of darkness.. who has taught him the meaning of love..the feeling he will always cherish...

He was looking at watch now.. Most of the guests have left but still there were many.. It was almost 11'o clock and he started feeling restless. He wanted to be with Geet..alone and the guests are still there.. It was long and tiring day and he was longing to have some moments with her.. and He looked at her ..ankhon se... asked her to come near to him...but then as he expected.. Geet ignored his calls.. poor Maan.. here he wants to be with her so badly and she is not even giving any patta,.. he lost all his patience and went straight to her...

"Geet, let's go home...." He showed all impatience...

"But we are having guests now.. how can we leave now.. " She was not able to understand him

"Geet, I don't know..I just want to be out..come with me.."

She was not sure what to do .. why he is doing like this.. but then knowing him.. she knows she cannot argue.

"Let us take permission from Dadiji.." At least that much he should do...

Maan straight way went to Dadi.. she was very busy with guests.. Today was one of the happiest day in her life.. Her grandson about whom she had lost all hopes.. is happy and married.. and all happiness was shinning on her face.. Maan didn't feel like disturbing her.. but then he wanted to leave badly.. so ...he decided to disturb her...finally.

"Dadi.. Kya main and Geet jaa sakte hain.." He was again sounding very impatient...

"Maan , but still we have guests.. how can we leave.. "

"I have met all of them..and Now I want to leave.."

"Why are you in so hurry.."

He came back to the stage,,.. he could n't tell what was going inside him.. how much restless he is inside,.. and how much he is longing to be with Geet.. and no one understand his eagerness.. He also reasoned himself,, 'Ruk jao thodi der aur.. but his patience was now slowly changing into anger.. He looked at watch now.. its 12'o clock.. how much more its going to take....Looks like never ending...and he took a decision..

He took Geet with him to Dadi..

"Dadi.. Looks like aap sab puri raat party karne ke mood main hain... aur mera aisa koi iraada nahin hain.. toh I am leaving...."

Dadi was stunned to hear.. "But Maan this is your party .. how can you leave...

Maan lost his cool.. "Dadi I am leaving now.. You can come later.. " but then he realized. and controlled himself..... "Dadi.. Geet is not feeling well.. so we will go.."

Geet was surprised to hear this.. but Maan Singh Khurana ... ke aage kaun bole..

They came out .. and Maan called for the driver.. but .. driver informed him.."Sir I am taking Anvesha madam to CP.."..
he was totally pissed off.. today what is happening... ? Let me try something else..

He called up Adi.. Adi was still in the party..

"Adi. I need your bike keys.. " Adi dropped from top .. flat on floor...

"Sir.. but at this time.. where is your car.."

"Addddi...."

Adi knew from his voice.. No questions to be asked.... and he came and gave the keys... "Maan sir bhi.. pata nahin.. sometimes... not sometimes.. but always..."

Geet was feeling very odd. On bike with Maan at this time of night and also she is in jewelleries.. bridal dress.. and Maan in his sherwani.. and she just imagined both of them riding.. and she looked at Maan .. Maan NO.. PLEASE

But Maan was not there to listen.. at least he has got bike.. and he doesn't care if any one sees them on road..

"Geet are you going to sit or not... or shall I make you sit.." He looked like Maan Singh Khurana now.. and Geet knew its better not to argue..she looked up "Babaji.."

They didn't talked while on the roads.. she was now more eager to know his behaviour...
Both of them reached home.. and Geet looked at him.. what's going inside him.. why he is so impatient.. He almost dragged her inside.. and on reaching near the stairs.. he took her in his arms.. and carried her to their room..

"Maan.. mujhein kuch samajh nahin aa rahan hain. .. " She was totally confused. as they entered inside..

"Abhi sab samajh main aa jayega,, " He smiled at her.. and then placed her on the bed...

He closed the door, switched off the lights and came near to her...

"Maan aap kya karne wale hain.. " She was now feeling scared.. has he lost his control completely today...

"Geet .. aaj main tumhain khane wala hoon " He tried to scare her more.. and then smiled..

He took out the gold bangles from his pocket which he had promised to make her wear on their first night...

"Geet.. hath aage karon.. " and she did..


"Maan aaj aap mujhain isse pehana rahen. hain ?." She was now going mad.. I am not able to understand what he is thinking...

"Geet .. Kyunki.. Today we will have our special night.. the night which we have longed for so long.. finally ... " He looked at her with shining eyes.

"Par .. Doctor..." Then she remebered.. today he had an appointment with her Doctor...and she looked at him..

"Haan.. Geet.. I met Dooctor in the evening... tumhare sab reports ab thik hain....." and He showed her the reports... she was feeling very relieved.. so their child is now safe.. she had tears in her eyes.. Maan could understand her happiness.. and didn't stop her tears.. otherwise he hates her tears...

She smiled at him... and now she can understand his impatience.. he wanted to share this news with her.. and finally he decided to get her on bike..

"Maan".. she didn't have words to speak..

"Geet...." and he knew what to do next..

he pushed her on the bed and......It was never ending .. They had x then talked .. slept.. then got up .. had .. x.. and then again slept..talked.. and had x.......


and they just wished.. "aaj suraj na nikle..."
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wow really realistic and fantastic.. Good job
enjoyed 😃
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hope it happens like this in the show...
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I always say it...but its true...wish it happened on the show!!
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cool dear what next maneet sr 😆 i hinted u now get set go😉
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Originally posted by: jazzerette

I always say it...but its true...wish it happened on the show!!

i also hope so...amd I know u love my write-ups very much.. Thanks.
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Originally posted by: goldenball

i also hope so...amd I know u love my write-ups very much.. Thanks.


I do...and always look forward to them.
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Originally posted by: sreereddy

wow really realistic and fantastic.. Good job

enjoyed 😃

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😛 Have a look at my other FFs also.
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Originally posted by: sanjh1234

cool dear what next maneet sr 😆 i hinted u now get set go😉

SR one I have already posted.. Have u missed it ?

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