OS: The Greek Revival: Post Updated - Page 3

Originally posted by: night13

...leaving a story with an open-end question... will never come to an end...

...even if Maan leaves everything behind and comes back to Geet.. will she really accept him...

Originally posted by: 6thElement

That's something I can answer only if I start a FF for this....and call it Guilt or something....LOL....
No plans as of now.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

This is a One shot...Many parts are meant to be worked up by the reader. And trust me its always best to leave things to the imagination.

I promised to post this a long time back, but couldn't for so many reasons….so firstly, my deepest and sincerest apologizes.

Hmmmm…The Greek Revival—I had no idea what this OS was gonna be about when I read the title, but this was so OMG good! Yep it was that good!!!

"It doesn't quite apply to oneself when you sail the same sinking boats": I just loved this…I think I just found my new FB status (unless it's copyrighted😉)

Oh man, "the closure ritual": chocolate, food, tequila: EPIC!!! Thanks for keeping it real for all of us realistic women here!!!

The bubblegum metaphor was so cute. Poor girl is so heartbroken….just kills! It's quite interesting you made them both actors…very exciting touch! And they both "happened" to be in the same place! And the drama starts! OMG…I feel so bad for Geet, she's trying o move on and there he is to claw her almost healed wound….OUCH!

I loved Maan's POV…the line: "like a man that had roamed the scorching deserts for the entire time she had left him"….what an awwww moment! Loved this so much, so romantic in the most descriptive literary way! LOL!!

Their war of words was pleasant and yet quite hilarious in the most awkward way. They still know how to push each other's buttons….and the best part they both can still read each other!

Both of them torturing themselves when they clearly still feel for each other….I really wanna know why they broke up or what transpired between the two causing the dynamic to change in their relationship!

WHOA! Just read that part…really?! Each thinks the other stood them up…something is really fishy…dum da dum dum dum….I wonder WHO?! The mystery ensues….Adi and pinky….uff! these two are def two of a kind!

So happy and super thrilled both started laughing and let loose a little!!! And what a KISSS!!! YAY!!!! Which is followed by a slap….melodramatic to the max! Damn, his passion and her inner war….and the outburst and pouring out all of their feelings was so magical and beautiful to read!!! Fireworks!! And another awwww moment: he pulls her in and kisses her!

H you're killing me…I'm love with this cute and passionate love story!

So much passion…in the text, between the lines, every effin' where…oh my god…I'm getting so anxiety while reading this! It's mind blowing…the chemistry of the characters is so good…."good" in way beyond an understatement! OMG…there's so much foreplay…I knew you were a passionate writer, but this just a new level (OR I need to refresh myself by re-reading the NY Times SR….some good times)! Ah man…what a read…just a dream!

Love love love them waking up together in the morning and "he attempted to claim her with his words"…nicey McNice nice!!!

And what a thunderous shocker….He's Married…what?! Def did not see that coming…something is so wrong with this. No wonder he says he loves ONLY her. I wanna know the back story so badly! I can't believe this is happening….no wonder she was so devastated! OMG...so sad!!!

But he's gonna pop the question…ahhhhhh! This is so good…what a climax! And they're waiting…and you're done!

I WANT MORE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Do have to continue this…it's so good! It's brilliant writing…I say make it a 100 part series…ok maybe that's too much and you're busy with NY and Rooftop, but still this shouldn't be a OS…pretty pretty please…I want an ending….something more!

This is for YOU:

YOU deserve so much more!!!! You're the best! And this is me trying to make up for being so behind!!!

Finally got around to reading it….

So has the wait finished? Did Maan finally manage to find the guts to propose after their tryst in Greece?

This deserves an epilogue…come on Hasini! epilogue, please….

btw I have been meaning to ask you…do you still watch the soap?