OS: A Night of Togetherness (Part 2 on pg 5)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Updated my comment on page 1 😊

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow that was just so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....

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Sneha Bhattacharya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Excellent one............Kaash our Cvs could have shown something like this instead of the promo one.........................Kudos to u .u have written it so perfectly that i could easily imazine them the whole time......................

WOW !!!!! WOW !!!! WOW !!!! WOW !!!!! WOW !!!!!!

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@Sharmishta....First off Let me say WOW!!!!!!...You have brought out the passion foreplay between Maan and Geet through just dialogues...and a touch here and there....Reading it has me out of breath...😳...WHo needs a con scene ...when this is so much better....😛......If this is picturised on them then Mashaallah....I think it'll be out of this world...SO really Kudos to you...👏

And..I second Shradha in saying that please go join GHSP as a writer...If they implement even half of what you have written...then too we will have winner...👍🏼

And Please come back fast with Part 2 ...can't wait...😍

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

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LOVED IT YAAR CONTINUE SOOON................... HOPE CV SHOULD ADOPT THIS IDEA ALSO INSTEAD OF THAT PROMO................... MAANEET R REALLY UNDERSTANDING EACH OTHER AND RIGHT MAAN CAN MAKE GEET UNDERSTAND THAT HE CAN WAIT FOR SOME TIME TILL SHE WILL BE FINE................................ HOPE CV SHOULD NOT USE THAT HEART BREAKING PROMO IN SERIAL........................ WE R AT FF WRITING WELL SO NOW THEY SHOULD TAKE OUR WRITERS IDEAS IN FUTURE.................. HEHEHEHEHEHE😃