OS: A Night of Togetherness (Part 2 on pg 5)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Babaji ki special bachchi...Aww...such a cute line!!

Quote

manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

lovely update. i just loved it.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

👏 Awesome. More closer to reality than anything else. Perfect.

Quote

CSSK

@CSSK

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

it was a lovely update too good👏 luvd it thnx 4 d pm!

Quote

Kavita

@panchjun5

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Hey Sharmishtha....Just finished reading part 2....All I can say is "Yaad aa Gaya Mujhe Guzra Zamana"...😍...Wow...reminiscing those days thru the dialogues between Maan and Geet has been really heart-warming...

The tete-e-tete between Maan and Geet takes you through all the phases of their Journey together...The Ups and Downs, The Laughter and the Sadness, The Love and The Fights....😍....Their Khatti-Meethi Nok-Jhok brought out by your dialogues is par excellence...and so real..😳😃....Hai Sharmistha you have outdone yourself...👏

I know at the risk of repeating myself I'm gonna say...I would love to see something like this shown on Maan and Geet...It would be such a refreshing change from all the cliched SR scenes shown on TV...😛

So once again Sharmishtha Take a Bow for an excellent OS...👍🏼Hope you keep coming up with more such stories

Quote

555070

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Thanks everyone. I sometimes feel bad that we are seeing this wonderful couple in a daily soap; so everything has to be stretched; else they will soon run out of the story. If we still lived in the times of weekly shows, we could have seen some talks when it was needed, rather than unnecessarily not talking for long, as it happened in today's episode. So, I take solace in writing my own scenes in my OSs. Really glad that you all enjoy it too. 😊

Quote

Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Aweosme yaar.. always a pleasure to read u dear sharmili... 🤣

Quote

CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Lovely OS dear....really loved it....

Quote

Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

aww.....such a sweet part dear..loved it completely yaar... this convo made it really a treat to read the fic that we have always wanted to know ever... great efforts and great work dear..really amazing writing...

do write more and sooner...Keep it up!!!

Quote

sejal1986

@sejal1986

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Hey I like your OS as it captured moments perfectly which is actually possible to portray on screen and make the scenes more effective, and one more thing, honestly your chemistry is much stronger than now a days whatever they are showing between maan and geet. I wish that the scenes which you have written would come on screen some day.