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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#781

This is the most craapiest poem i have written in past three years but its ok i wrote and u all suffer..hehe

Pyaar itna karo
ki kam na ho,

Lado kismat se
taki koi gam na ho,

Unki chahat mein
toh hum bheegte rahe umar bhar,

Chaha unhe na
chah kar bhi har manzil se badkar,

Chaho kisi ko
itna ki woh majboor ho jaye,

Na jiye tumhare
bin na door ho paye,

Chahahat mein gum
na dein bus yeh maanga tha,

Woh saath ho
humare yeh chaha tha,

Kismat se lad
unhi kheench laye hain,

Sapno se door
ashiyaan banaya hain,

Har khwab hota
hai bus unki aankhon se,

Har saans poori
hoti hai unki he aahat se,

Na zindagi mein
khusbhoo hai unke bina,

Deewangi unki hai
har zarre par likhi,

Madhosh hai woh
aalam jis mein jeete hain,

Woh fizayen woh
vaadiyaan jise mein peete hain,

Unki bahaon mein
rahein umar bhar bus yeh hai aramaan,

Saath kate
zindagi aur maut unki chahat mein ho
aise farmaan….

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#782

@Anj:Yup its delivering for sure...Its one of those rare shows I hv ever seen where both the leads r fighting every battle together against the villians👍🏼..a rare sight in today's daily soap world🤣

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MarshP

@MarshP

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#783

@Polly: 🤣🤣🤣🤣 You meant do plastic surgery 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

And yeah That's me, DM 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

@Shreya: Hi 🤗I haven't seen you in a long time 🤣

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-Divine-

@-Divine-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#784

@zee n anj..........

ohh wow u too...🤗

i thought am the only one

i loved it when he said he wanna whisk her away to some far away place 😳

he has never said that before

he never openly praised her beauty the way it was shown today...😊

even am enjoying everything 😊

Edited by gooseberry - 14 years ago

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#785

@Shreya:Oyeeee😡..u call it crap and u get my danda for that😡...its a awesome poem👏..loved the first four lines😳...apt for today's episode

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#786

Wht who lked the diakogues...they were pathetice wrong grammar wrong pronouncation..what else u want to spoil the dialoge and it was MUSHY..YUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

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Silence

@SecretKhabri420

Achiever

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: jyoti06
@Anj:Yup its delivering for sure...Its one of those rare shows I hv ever seen where both the leads r fighting every battle together against the villians👍🏼..a rare sight in today's daily soap world🤣

Jyoti, nazar naa lagao, remember we said the same about Bidaai, lekin hum sab logo ke nazar ke waja se, show to ulta flop hogaya 😆