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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

beautiful emotional , touching os.

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Posted: 14 years ago

its beautiful dude u almost made me vry keep writin plz!!!!

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Sana

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Posted: 14 years ago

beautifully written...

luved d update...sad but beautiful..

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Ilovemsk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Very well written
Sooo sad xx
Awesome
One advice: i would tell them the scenario first...inmean the sense was dead...
Lol I was like he Kya hora ha heh....lol
Then got the last bit lol
But loved it x

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sejal1986

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovemsk
Very well written
Sooo sad xx
Awesome
One advice: i would tell them the scenario first...inmean the sense was dead...
Lol I was like he Kya hora ha heh....lol
Then got the last bit lol
But loved it x

Hi, thanks for the advice, I kind of wanted open ended and open to interpretation kind of feeling, and I was sure that at the end people will get it hence I have written at the last the idea behind writing this, I guess sometimes it is good to generate confusion.

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saim

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Posted: 14 years ago

beautifully written..... so tuching😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

sad & emotional well written excellent my dear

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

That was so senti

I dnt want ths happen

Never

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow very beautifully written.... so touching...

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Jyothi N

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Posted: 14 years ago

I loved the way u ve written whole thing very emotional & heart wrenching one.
I just say its soo pure and beautiful.

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