OS: Pyaare Se Pyaare Prt2 pg6 Jan18

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
hiii jaz...
this was trult marvellous........
plzz do the 2nd part......
plss let the OS end on a happy note.....plzzzzzzzzz
keep writing
reva

sorry dear knwing jaz i think there is no second part for this OS... rite jaz...

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Khushi

@blueangel1308

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Jaz,

That was too beautiful and painful.

With tears in my eyes
I read this letter you wrote me.
Once, twice, three times I tried,
Yet it's ending I cannot reach.
The paper soaks up the water,
The ink running more with each drop.
So I leave this message for you, to ask you,
"tell me how this letter ends,
Tell me what these eyes won't read,
Tell me if my tears have changed what was written in that blurry ink."

I hope there's a 2nd part. Keep my fingers crossed for a happy ending.
----khushi

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

jazz ... it was awesome ... but sweetheart u better come up with a

second part ... i love Armaan mallick BUT ... Geet ka naam Maan kay

saath hi acha lagta hai *MSK Style* ... Maan ki Geet ...

continue soon

love

Sana

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

JAZ..i sholdnt have read this one..woman i need a handkerchief to write this..coz i cant see the screen..but loved it..it was awesome..and what in part 2 u want us to see her get married..if u in a mood to do that...i will prefer another OS..instead of seeing GEET with ARMAAN..no way..but if its something else i would love more..u know that..

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Jaz, you need to write a second part of this OS, samjhi tum (MSK style)😉

Beautifully written!

I have been noticing that most of your OS, SS's have an element of pain that rules the whole update.

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Awe it was brilliantly written their love and pain for each other just lied how you showed it but it was sad as maans malin at the end awe nearly put me in tears and I hope we get a second part to his I want to see what happened next 😊

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

amazing OS!

loved it..really sad but they are soo in love

plz write a 2nd part.. where maybe Armaan refuses to marry her!! (maybe b/c he found out abuot her and maan)

Con't soon!

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DancinFireflies

@DancinFireflies

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

jaz how can you do this to us..... dont u feel some mercy for us...... why do you always have to do it..... loved it though the end was not at all nice..... plz can we hav the 2nd part.... btw your song choice was very very very very very nice....😊

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

evil. that was just evil! 😭 i personally don't believe that personal sacrifice to give a parent peace of mind leads to anything but misery for the three involved (the lovers and the outsider), and i always wonder that if your parents love, and they'd want you to be happy, then why not tell them? don't agree with the decision geet made, and can only pity poor, poor maan. anyways, very well written, i can feel maan's pain.

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

awesome yaar....

what dialogues!!!!!!👏

but as i read this tears started to roll down my eyes......yes u did warn us but i had to read because i love ur work and writing so much....

u really grasp maan and geet's emotions of love and u out them into such mesmerizing words that people just want to keep on reading even if it breaks their hearts...

so i would love if u continued...i really would want to know what will happen with their relationship

...i dont think i will be able to fall asleep thinking that maan and geet's relationship never worked out.

so plz continue