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salma

@starchase

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

wow saz i did know you write OS tooo hehehe okay well back to the point. Amazingly written galie !!! loved everybit of it ! you should start writing and FF??? seriously it was damn good ! keep it up hun x

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152265

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

HAILAAAAAAA 😆

*On the ground after massive attack of Maaneet lalaland craziness*

*Gets up*

*SCREAMS AND PULLS HAIR OUT*

YOU CAN WRITE. YOU CAN WRITE WELL. And yet you don't? 😆 This rampage of writing creativity must continue ASAP, Liz awaits HOT, SWEET and awesome fanfic by SAZ! 😳😉

So . . . You wrote that? I am so stumped right now . . . . I wish after we voted they told us who it was that wrote them . . Simply because we would know the talented authors and writers who were amazing by the way! I voted for this one . . . . LOLZZZ 😳😆

I wish someone had told me I would be like SAZ she's my girl! And than I would have been like pick me pick me to read it! It was great! Your style, language and description was awesome, smooth and intriguing. Though the choice of movie and concept was different from the storyline thats what made it a OS! 😃 I was stunned that u got all the right emotions in there, love, desire, passion, anger and jealousy! You captured the characters so well!

MSK being all angry, haughty, arrogant and playful!!!! AWWWWWWWW * Heart speeds up*

And than Geet being reserved and yet struggling with her own feelings!

The parallel of characters in the show and in the OS was wonderful! LOL @ Pari so random! 🤣

I loved loved loved it! Cause it was so HOT while being totally cute! You have to write a fanfic . . . PRETTY PLEASE?

Love

Liz

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Saz, this OS is so effin hot and sensual ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
and you say this is your first OS, girl you have talent 👏👏👏👏
plz plz plz turn this OS into SS or FF, would love to read more...

oh crap i can't stop blushing ☺️☺️☺️☺️

Nadia

xxx

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Firstly.. to everyone who has commented so far.. awww you guys!! Thank you for sucha beautiful response! Not only was I gobsmacked by what some of you have said but I fought with my weakening insides that were threatening to have me faint in shock and happiness. I am no weakling, believe me, but I'm just so super happy right now that I'm confused whether these responses are actually for what I've posted!

@ Dreamy_Mystique
aww thank you! 🤗 Glad you thought that bout it 😃 😃
the end... well it needed to be somewhat impactful, and it feels great to know that it worked! 😃

@ greatsumkum
thank you! 😃 😃

@ Meri Nandita, urf Nanduuuu!
Thank youuu for sucha deeeelightful response! Thanks for liking the title and sig too 🤗 you know the sig would never had turned out the way it did, if it wasn't for the awesome pix you uploaded!! It feels awesome that you thought it was good 😆 Super happy that you liked the OS my lovely!

@ Naina-Maina-Shaina,
awwwwww! How bloody awesome of you sweetheart! 🤗 It's writers like you that make me all nervous bout my own writing 😆 But it sure does feel freakin' overwhelming and fab to read sucha comment from You! Aww thanx SO MUCH bubs! Oh, and believe me, I was never hiding any writing ability of mine 😆 I just never felt so stimulated to write as I did when I wrote this! Like I was literally bursting to write this up when the idea came and then I just couldn't stop when I started 😆 Maaneet turned me insane a very long time ago and the results my friend, are what you see before you 😳 😛

@ MaanGeetkiSimmi
and AHHH thank you! 😆 Lots and lots!

@ Machomuffin,
OMG awwww muffin! you're so cute! that's the sweetest comment ever! and you didn't go off track, you made me drop off my chair with sucha LOVELY comment! OMG the one thing I have to say to all that is.. REALLY? You thought all that? AWWW!! 🤗 let me just say, I tend to "awww" a lot, when something awes me 😆 or makes me super happy, and your comment made me insanely happy! I just continously "awwwww"-ed whilst reading it with a smile that aint gonna vanish.

I really appreciate what you said bout the title, and love that you felt it totally apt too =D At first, I was kinda unsure cos it seemed too simple, but now when you notice it's significance, it makes me feel all happy to have stuck with it😆

I can't believe I have SOLD the movie Veer to you! 😆 I only watched it cos of Salman, but I can vouch for it - it was brilliant!!!! There are defo typically top notch British accents used too, so it'll be an absolute party for you! 😉

And awww *high five* I'm a hopeless romantic too 😆 and am So loving that you liked the spy-princess concept. Man, you make me feel all Good about actually writing this up. No seriously, thank you tons and tons my lovely!

Ok, not even for the slightest second will I be modest and deny the fact that I LOVED including a Topless Maan. And doing push-ups on Geet... well... what can I say? The thought of it had me going gaga so, had to include it!

Oh... MUFFIN!!! 😆 Thank you Like SOOOOOOOO MUCH for loving the OS and all your fabulous words! You've totally got me considering to write again. Hmmm whenever that'll happen - I will have you know for sure!!

@ Mk.Gh,
awwww man!! Like THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH for such an amazing reply sweetness! 🤗 It's a request, Don't rip your pretty hair out 😆

It's So Cool to have written something that you were hoping to find on Maaneet... aww, that's awesome! I can't say whether I'll ever write an FF (the idea intimidates me.. all the updating and that, I can't see how I'd cope 😆) but whenever an idea springs up, I will defo write again!

@Salma,
aww thanx babe! Yeah, not many people did know that I'd written something.. so.. SuPrIsE! 😆 Thanx for loving it my lovely!! I don't think I can take the pressure of writing an FF yaar, but... as Justin Beiber says.. Never say Never eh.. 😛

@ LIZ!
Awwwwwwwwwwww!!! I'm like over the moon, and struggling to find my way back to the ground...

Honestly, I can't even tell you what this comment has done to me.. feeling ridiculousy happy right now, I can't even type! 😆 Erm.. I think I'm angering the moon too, as I'm pretty sure I'm glowing much more than it is at the moment...

OMG LIZ! The fact that you voted for My Entry leaves me further speechless because like you said, the entries in that contest were bludy brilliant and the fact that you chose mine from the rest of all that wowness is the craziest happy feeling ever! Thank you for that, and all this too! 🤗 🤗

awwwww LIZ! Don't make me blush man! 😆 MSK IS so sexy, so... he can take all the credit for being the way he appeared in the OS 😉 he had to be portrayed as his hottest self ;D SUPER HAPPY that he got your heart racing! Am all happy that I was a part of making that happen haha!

and, LOL listen woman, I NEEDED Pari ok. *flicks back hair in fake annoyance* The other option I guess I woulda had, would've been Sameera. And I Hate the idea of her, cos well.. she implies Maan had feelings for a woman other than Geet. So, I could NEVER have added her in this 😉😆 I therefore opted for a once-awe-struck Pari instead 😛

I love love LOVE the fact that you triple Loved this my lovely!! Aww liz, you're So Awesome! Yaar, I dunno about an ff - it's hard work (I'm saying this to the runaway from the assylum who juggles three in one go..! But, I'd find it tough Liz! 😳 😆) Not everyone's as amazing as you! I won't deny that a while ago, I actually wrote a little something up (it woulda been an OS) it's incomplete, but I was in the mood to write.. I can't say whether that'll ever be posted but whenever I have something solid, I won't shy away from posting now 😉 😃

@ Lip-a-Licious
Awww Nadia!! You think I'm talented.. 😳 😳 😆 😆 THANK YOU sweetness! 🤗 Glad to read that it affected you in sucha way 😆 and glad that you liked it!!! =D

@ Sameeha786,
aww thank you my lovely! 😃 😃

THANK YOU ALL for such awesome replies!

And finally... THANK YOU GUYS

bhakbhartifan, Maaneet.Lover, Gaya3Devi, XXaquafireXX, XXXYYYZZZ, Mk.Gh, macho_muffin, ramahesh, madhavipatil, nilu710, hemvb, greatsumkum, zaqxsw, esha143, sharmake11, sweet_gurl93, Naina2127, luvabbybaby, iqbals4ever, shivangi783, saomom, Lip-a-Licious, Dreamy_Mystique, hindu4lyf, pickachu, Starry_night, -afsha-, nanditasingh, salma434, kashish 1322, charmed ones, sweet-and-cute,

For 'Liking' as well! 😉 🤗

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Uff its amazing soo hot!! Loved that whole push ups part could picture the whole thing and i had butterflies in my stomach!! And u write wonderfully.. Wish it could continue i would love it!! And hai i love that song salaam aya as well i loved that beginning scene with them dancing and all and ahhh that last scene uff hot as well ;) u rock!!!

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

😳 Ahem *Rubs eyes and blinks repeatedly* Oh.........my.........saliva.......dripping....hallucinating......mind......filled....with.....drool....
and WOAH WOAH WOAH! 😈 Saz. That was freaking fantastic! Heck! If Russel Peters read this, he would have said 'that was mindblasssting!' Dear god woman, you seriously know how to write! I fell in love with every detail and every aspect of your story. I was in the world of 'Veer', where Salman was replaced with Maan and that Yashodra chick 🤢 was replaced with Geet 😍. I didn't want it to stop! In fact, I demand that the movie be re-done, with these actors instead! Your OS was so so so beautiful!

I noticed the phrase 'strong hands' and chuckled 😆. No matter what the story or situation is, Maan's splendid hands must always be mentioned! 🤣 Oh the push up scene. Oh em gee! ☺️ I was squirming and squealing on my chair, shamelessly edging myself closer to the computer screen. That was so sinfully hot! His kisses, his touch, her reaction. *Swoons* Oh his possessiveness is so hot to imagine. This entire OS was hot!

I'm just going to have a 'ghajini' moment, and choose to forget the actual ending of Veer. Because I know for sure that this is an edited version and thus, the ending will be happy. RIGHT!? 😳 Yep right that is. Happy times, happy endings. La la la! Everyone and everything is happy. 😆

You have to seriously write more! I demand you of this! I loved itttttttttt.

Xo
Love you!

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anjali

@rosette80

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

all i can say is am dead!!! truly totallly fida and gone.👍🏼..rest i wil continue wen u continue!😆😉

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Oh this was nice, short, petite and very very jaanu. Do u write often? Have u written something else that I can read? Next time write a loooonnnngggggg romantic ff not something this short as this.

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Awww! To those who have read / liked so far, thank you for your feedback!!

@ ambbiha
thanx for loving it! 😉 😃 😃

@ desigirl_18
awwww!! thank youuuu!! 🤗 I'm all smiley after your comment 😆 and super happy that you loved so much about the OS! Yep, the push ups part was a real hit with a lotta people 😉 😆 Glad it had an affect on you too! Really appreciate the awesome comment my lovely!!

@ shalini_s
*takes a bow* why thank you hun! 😛

@ -Mrinalini-
thank youuu! 😃 😃

@ SAMMEEE!!!
I'm bound by tradition, and always compelled by your messages to begin with..
"😆, 😆, 😆" and then.. "🤣" and of course "🤗"

YOU ACTUALLY READ THIS (that's not the schock, cos people do much crazier things when blind in love hahaha) the shock comes from.. YOU ENJOYED THIS?? awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
*does geeky adi dance, swinging arms/hips side to side*

LOL @ Russel Peter's imitation, now "SUMBAADY" just made my day! THANKS BABY! It's pretty nerve wracking when you send a PM to an amazing ff writer knowingly, cos there's that constant thought that IF they (you) read it, they (you) must instantly think.. whaooo *amature material* !😆 BUT your comment just made me feel to balle balle with my BALLE-N-TINE for sucha fabulous response to the writing! thank youuuuu jaani!

🤣 YOU and your OBSESSSION with MSK's hands Sam!! 😆 I don't blame ya though as I'm quite infatuated with them myself!! 😛 😆 It's true, and must be universally acknowledged, that Maan's hands cannot be ignored by er.. Anyone. It is physically impossible to picture every aspect of that hunk-of-yumminess without giving his hands and *cough* other places particular focus / appreciation 😆

Although I won't actually be continuing this (after much thought actually), I'll have you know, there is NO way I was planning to kill Maan. I hated to see Salman die at the end of Veer, however apt it may have been, I disliked that one thing very much. So, I could Never do that to Maan 😳 A happy imaginary ending I'm glad you already constructed hehehe

Defo when I have a full-fledged idea, I'll get writing and possibly posting 😆
Love you too Sammy!!

@ spvd
thank you for thinking so!! 😃

@ rosette80
😆 I love that! hmmm.. I won't be continuing my lovely so I'll miss out on more from you BUT, THANK YOU for liking this, and for a totally fab comment 🤗

@ vrsharma
hey thanx! 😃

@ basicquestion1
Aww! 😆 Thanks for reading and for the comment! No, I haven't written anything else nor do I write as often as I might like to actually... or as often as ideas come up 😕 thanx for wanting a nice long ff from me though 😆 I thought the OS WAS pretty long in itself! Nevertheless, comment totally appreciated, THANK YOU my lovely! 🤗

Awww you ^^^ guyyyyssss! Thank you for your feedback!! You guys rock!

And Thank YOU people:

sweet mamtha, ayu14, bhakbhartifan, gaber, Maaneet.Lover, geet105, shalinikanagu, sufikhan, aiyana, greatsumkum, nilu710, teri_susan, m-g19, hemvb, basicquestion1, madhavipatil, XXaquafireXX, Mk.Gh, Gaya3Devi, Lip-a-Licious, ramahesh, aditiwalia56, XXXYYYZZZ, macho_muffin, sharmake11, sweet_gurl93, luvabbybaby, iqbals4ever, sssiham, -shabnoor-, Dreamy_Mystique, shalini_s, zaqxsw, -Urvi-, esha143, pickachu, _SiinnceMaan_, saomom, desigirl_18, Naina2127, spvd, hindu4lyf, -afsha-, nanditasingh, rosette80, sweet-and-cute, salma434, kashish 1322, sweet coco, charmed ones, Starry_night,

who have continued 'Liking' the OS too 😃 🤗

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

wow!!Got 2 read sumthing different after agES!!loved the concept,the start and ummm not sure bout the end but i guess i liked it!😆but Overall Splendid job👍🏼
i wud suggest u 2 write part 2 of it n if in anycase u do then jst PM me😃