Maaneet OS - A Rainy Night - Page 5

@muffin oye!! stop blowing my spot! now i will have ppl telling me to update a again! 🤣 Thanks i'm glad u liked it. semester was boring but good. i dont sleep much...insomniac here. 😆 u had a good semester?

😆 i loveee torturing poor souls like you!! muhahaha

listen up peeps, our buddy Ann here has a B-R-E-A-K so i say we all gang up on her for more updates!!!🤣

ohh i am sorry Ann....was i not suppose to say that?😆....you see i am a little slow in understanding stuff!😉

good?....are you kidding? with orgo what can one expect but pure torture!😭....but magically, i just found out today i aced the class....hence, my happy mood!😆....omgg insomniac?....i really gotta train u in the basics of sleep here dude....everyone knows me as the sleep queen here😆....omgg which reminds me, i still don't have a nickname for you.....okay, so by next update, you are getting one missy....don't worry, it won't be too weird😆....and ocourse you understand my not so subtle hint when i say next update right?....and if not, don't worry, i will be sure to make you remind that everyday!!😆.....nity nite dude and merry christmas!!!😃

OS dear......👏👏👏

Oh. My. God.

and.. Wow, wow, WOW!

That was hot, it was naughty, is what fun, it was sweet, did I tell you it was HOT?? and it was actually even beautiful.

Before continuing, let me tell you how fabulously written that was. The flow of it just complimented the pace of every moment. Such smooth depiction of such electrifying scenes. WOW. You're SUCH an awesome writer - if you've written any more OS's or even an FF - PM me the link will you maybe? 😳 😆 No seriously, I would LOVE to read more of your stuff!

As for this OS... uffffff... I almost just dived back into that trance that part had me in... that was Yummma Yummma... absolutely amazing!! I LOVE your way of how the scene could have happened. Super sexy! Be it their actions, or their dialogue, my God, you've portrayed everything fantastically. I was actually blushing 😆 Loved how Geet mindlessly unbuttoned Maan's shirt and then the naughtiness it evoked within Maan... I could feel the heat radiating from my screen!

Whao, just... a Brilliant OS!

Saz
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Ann- Though I read it long time back..today read it again...wow!!