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DD 🤗
if they want to show certain mannerisms as a Maaneet signature, its pretty evident most people are looking for a change.. and its about time they bring that about ...
each point validly made and pointed out ...
yeh maine apne story main likha tha, but i want maan to get the barsaati re-done as a baccho ke toys waala room, and surprise Geet ... that way he promises her, that he has left his past behind, and would never want to visit it again .. and is all set to embrace a life with her in the future ..
Since maan is too hestitant to take the lead, may be Geet should in some scenes .. it could start comically but end up turning intense.. like the scene where she was sitting on his lap .. she didnt realise until a while later ...
and they shd now seriously think about a shoulder pe haath ka replacement ...!!! it looks more like a confidence building measure to me than an act of expression of love !!😕
Maan should learn to hold Geet by he waist a llittle more comfortably .. she is his fiance and she is also his hone waali patni ... if thats a little too much may be he should hold her arm all the time.. not let go of her at all ...
i kinda like their nok jhok, so i wont say totally do away with that, since all of this is culminating and leading to something really big that is to erupt in the coming days ...
But please do something about their romance !!
Koi in dono ko ek glass long island iced tea pliao ( now please dont get started with she is pregnant, i remember she is, it was a joke 😉)
love,
DA
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