#Devil's Den#Aaja Mere Ghodi Mein Beth Ja - Page 51

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow den is slowwwwww 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's must be a family trait then they psychic ability 🤣
ok so he is like the best friend who you don't love but loves you 🤣
sorry i got the triangle wrong 🤣
the fact he gets on your nerves mean he is the one silly 🤣
you have still to reach the acceptance stage then you will love everything about him, i've seen it in the crystal ball 🤣🤣🤣
I don't expect you to know but to sense he is around and then trip like Geet does, you need to work on your connection with him, obviously it's not strong like maaneet's yet 🤣
and your thought it was right when your falling, as then you will think next i need my hero, will he save me like last time 🤣🤣🤣
I meant is wasn't nice as he was hurting as you were tripping and falling with science boy instead of him, he was already carrying a broken heart, now he has a sore shoulder too 🤣🤣🤣
Shreya I read your OS, thank god it was a dream, i was like omg she has killed maan 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Parm CHUMMA CHUMMA CHUMMA CHUMMA CHUMMA
Me not in denial mode lol ur crystal ball is Messed up it jus shows an alternate futuree🤣which will never Happenn..wait who do u thnk my best friend is U r baffled nd u r gettin me more confused🤣🤣
@All soz I was on & off , was doin sum Geog help sheet ish dun so I am gonna go HIT da bedd unlyk Parm who has off coz of snoww nd all other Bekaar Atmans Godo Nightt🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
MAAN has become a total nikamma now.........

kamchor insaan.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Night all, i have to get up early for work tomorrow *sad sigh*
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ash never doubt a crystal ball, esp in the hands of a pro like me 🤣

I'm not baffled 🤣
your best friend=chem partner, keep up with your love story Ashu 🤣
I think your the slow one in this triangle, the other two are giving you hint after hint, which you ignore 🤣
GN ashu 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
@parm: rememeber he was in a meeting..the so called presentation..and how come she killed him..that ws so bad..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wrote an actual take today...updated from pg 1.

My Take
hope i can come up wit something this time. 🤣

Instant reactions to the epi.

Anvesha!!! 🤣 Maan wants permission to marry from his younger snobby sister? May Geet's babaji be with her!

Adi sir is back! ❤️ 🤣 His dostana wit Maan has been renewed..this time with another romantic bump and a dreamy eye lock. 🤣

Maan asks Geet what was she doing that made her wet the file! the question is what were they NOT doing?!😳 Naughty Naughty Maan!☺️ 🤣

What will Anvesha the hot shot modern gurl say when she minds out her hot shot bhai is marrying the Good Indian Traditional Girl Gith? 🤔 Her snobby attitude is a big NO! 😳 and OMG they had to use Annie for her nick name? 😡 That is my name so they betta fix this chick soon! Why in the world does she have a poster of her brother in her room? That is just weird!🤣

Couch scene was awesome! 😍 sach mein woh phone humesha galat waqt pe bajta hai...here is some advice for MSK the bewokuf...throw it out the window!

Serious Note: CV's better work on Anvesha's characterization if she is here to stay...otherwise i highly doubt anyone will bear with her attitude for too long.
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Hello Everyone!

The episode began on a good note. Maan and Geet are surprised by the office staff with showering of red roses. As the rose petals shower down on them, Geet remembers her similar memory with Dev. There is a slight frown on her face, but Maan holds her hand and she smiles. Recreating a new memory for her. Maan has always been the one to erase the painful memories of Dev that Geet has from day one. Let it be a night out in the rain (Behene de sequence) or public decelerations of his love for her. However Geet has done the same for him. Maan, who had a disdain for flowers before, now loves them because Geet has thought him the meaning of something as simple as a flower in life.

I would like to know, why does Romeo, Pandey, and Maanisha still wear their Indian Paints outfits? I believe they work in Khurana Constructions now. This is just laziness from the PH and costume designer. If you going to present something, do it with your best. Shall I even mention the mismatch with Anvesha's dress and hair? My point is dress your actors appropriately.

Why are characters like Adi, Pinky, and Indian paint trio side lined? I would love to see those characters being developed. They are more like props that show up from time to time. Those characters cane be sued for great comedy. By the way I absolutely love Adi. His scenes are always fun to watch. He should appear more on the show.

Maan wants to keep Geet with him at all times, while Geet wants to give him a surprise. Geet wet the file during their almost kiss and he puts her on the spot by asking how she did it. He likes to play dirty! =)) They get into a mini argument because she wants to go home and he wont let her. Geet then questions herself, why is he acting like this? And Eurika!!! The answer has arrived...the despo stalker(courtesy Anj) wants her with him at all times. As creepy and obsessive as we might think this is, she finds it sweet(I'm kidding, just in case anyone wants to get defensive =)) ).

Catch and fall on the couch was dreamy. Gumeet and Drashti was superb in the scene. Geet is so adorable when she blabbers. The way Maan stares makes the emotions seem so real. So kudos to them for carry the scene so well. One question, when did Maan ever call Geet shona?

How long will geet be calling Maan "sir"?! They will be getting married soon. Be realistic. Why is she calling her fiancee "sir". It doesn't matter that he is her boss, that does not define their relationship.Their love does. So lets maintain the equality in it.

Now lets talk about Anvesha. Fist off, where did this sister come from? There has never been a mention of her before. Is the Khurana family so distort that they don't even bother mentioning their own family members. Bringing characters out of the blue with no past connection just seems too messy. A confused audience is an angry audance. There are too many holes in the plot. Vicky was mention before as a Khurana brother, but he is no where in sight. The sister that we have never heard of drops down from the sky. That too in a not so appealing manner. Anvesha's characterization needs a lot of work. The snobby rich girl attitude is boring. It has been done many times before. I hope that she is a positive character and that she becomes a friend to Geet. That is the way to go if she is a character here to stay. Nikunj also needs to work on the acting. It was as if she was trying too hard. It needs to be more natural.

There are many holes in the plot from the beginning that need to be filled. For example who was Maan looking for in the mandir during Geet's marraige to Dev? Where is Vicky and why did he leave? Will Sameera ever make an appearance. What is in Maan's dark past that his altered him so greatly. Instead of answering these, we have random character entries. Fill the holes Cv's. Don't leave us confused and puzzled.

one point to be noted, what ever is in Maan's past. I hope that there is proper justification as to why he did not share it with Geet. He speaks of honesty and trust, well he should follow through on that himself.

Finally, mahi needs to be toned down. Compose some new music or come up with some variations without the screeching. How about getting someone else to screech the mahi part? Also the little twinkle sounds during the rose petal scene was bad. It's not a cartoon. We don't need twinkling sounds.

If there are anymore Khurana family members speak now Cv's or forever hold your peace.

Overall a good episode. Except the Anvesha scene. 👍🏼

Edited by Ann.A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ann : nice take

yup "sir" is getting really irritating nw....is she waiting for maan to stop her saying that...?

I was watching some of the old episode and i noticed that in one scene Maan was saying " kitne saalo se doond raha hu lekin aaj tak nahi mili "

@red : point to be noted

moreover at many place CV's have given us clue in the earlier episodes that MSK is not married...better they themselves havent forgotten it...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Shreya, Ann, Berry Hi 🤗

My take for today as updated on page 1

Geet apni hi dhun mein,
Takarayi jaake Maan se,
Sorry nikala phir jubaan se.

Office se sab hain nadarad,
Kahan gayein sab,
Hain Maan ko hairat.

Phoolon ki pankhudiyaan,
Kuch Geet ko yaad dilati,
Maathe pe ek shikan chod jaati,
Phoolon ke jaise tumhara chehra,
Khil uthe yeh rang sunhara,
Maan ke aankhon mein chupi khushi,
Mita degi Geet ki ankahi uljhane sabhi,
Saath Jab hai mera tumhara,
Khil uthega jahan humara.

Bal Brahmachari detein,
Vivah ki badhaiyaan,
Manisha to Adi ke peeche padein,
Adi bechare.. hain ukhade ukhade...
Office mein logon ki badhayi,
Maan ko bhi hai pasand aayi.

Maan ne lagaya is utsaah pe break,
Dhnayavaad keh kar diya ek updesh...
Chalo sab kaam karein,
Aaj hai ek presentation vishesh.

Geet ko di apni salah,
Kaam tumhara ho sabse ujala,
Mehanat karni hogi tumhe khoob,
Mat jaana office se aaj tum uub.

Geet khud hi ko samajhati,
Yahan wahan haath kyun chalati,
Jara kuch kar apna dhyaan,
Mat bhool kar pehle apna kaam,
Musibat hai Geet ki saheli,
Aaj jati hain ban than kahin bhi albeli,
Socha tha Maan ke liye banaongi khana,
Par office ka kaam khatam kareke hi hai jaana.

Maan hain niharate,
Geet ko bahar khade,
Itne mein Adi unse ulajh pade,
Jarorat hain Adi ko jis file ki,
Maan batayein voh hai,
Kabjee main Geet ki.

Adi maange Geet se file,
Geet kahe mil jayegi aapko jald hi,
Adi bechare pareshaan aur hairaan,
File mein kaam ka mita namo nishaan.
Maan bade unjaan bane,
Poochein file ko bigaada kisne??

Maan hain dhust danav bade,
Geet ko chhedate masoomiyat se bade,
Poochein file kaisi gayi bigad,
Kuch bolo....
Kyun khadi ho buth ban kar.
Nakharein dekho Maan ke,
Bolein seena taan ke,
Laparwaah ho tum badi,
Nazarein meri tum par hain gadi.

Geet ko ulajhane ki,
Maan ne lee hai aaj than,
Kaam nahin karne doonga,
Samjho meri jaan....
Geet hai poochti,
Kyon karte ho pareshaan,
Kaam khatam kar,
Jaana hai mujhe ghar.

Ghar jaane ki,
Aisi hai kya tumhe jaldi?

Aap ke liye,
Socha tha ek uphaar,
Chakit kar ke aapko,
Dena chahti thi apna pyaar.

Geet ki rusvaayi,
Maan ko tanik bhi na bhaayi,
Bin bolein hi phir kahan chaldi,
Thehro jara ho gayi mujhse galti...

Dono suljhayen kyun hui yeh an ban,
Kyun samajh na paayein,
Kahan hui hai gadbad....

Tumhare dil ki baat,
Gayi main jaan.
Kisliye mujhe,
Kar rahe the pareshaan.
Mujhe rakhna hai nazaron ke saamne,
Isliye kaam mein ulajhaya tha aapne.
Apni galti ko sudharon mein,
Ab aapko kahan dhoondho mein.

Ek hai maqsad dono ka,
Chodein ladai karein samjhauta,
Chalein phir ek duje ki or,
Takaraye aur gire,
Sofein mein ek or.

Bevakoof hain hum,
Ek duje ki baat samajh na paye,
Bitana tha ek sang samay,
Par apni hi baaton mein ulajh gaye.
Humein karni chahiyein yeh baatein saaf,
Aage phir na ho koi galti,
Bas hoon nazadik mein aur aap.

Geet hai Maan ki god mein,
Apni nazadikiyon se anjaan,
Bole ja rahi bina ruke,
Maan ka khinche saara dhyaan.

Misti si ho tum lagti,
Jab yun bina ruke ho bolati,
Mere ho kareeb tum,
Sun sakti ho mere dil ki dhadkan.

Mujhe diye itne naam,
In sab ka hai kya kaam?
Ek naam pyaar ka chun lo tum,
Vahi pukaaronga subah shaam.

Itne mein baji phone ki ghanti,
Dadi ma pukarein...
Kahan hain Geet....
Aa jao ab jaldi.

Geet hogi door kuch der ke liye,
Karna hoga intezaar un nazadikiyon ke liye,
Par is baar yeh yaad rakhna,
Phone ko apne band jarror karna,
Phir na hoga koi avarodh,
Niharana tum be rok tok.

Dekhen hum aayi hain,
Maan ki behen Anvesha....
Iski jaisi bhi ho vesh bhusha,
Isse tum kam mat samajhna,
Maan ki behen hai,
Isse mat ulajhana.
Tevar iske aasmaan chadein,
Kya udayegi Geet ke hosh khade khade.

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