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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey..
great update..
so now it's up to yash...
cnt wait to read that...
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What will be the decision of Yash?😕 Plz add me to ur PM lists.
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Thanxxx for ur appreciation!!Loveee all the comments.I hope this part is upto ur expectation or atleast on average!Leave ur comments.Even if u don't like the part.Btw My real name is Fatima.

Recap:Maan thought that geet was joking.He gave number to yash who was shocked to know that maan loved his fiance.

SS:Mere Yaar Ka pyar!
Part 5

Yash(Thinking):Yeh number tu geet ka hai.Tu maan geet se pyar karta hai yani mere fiance se.

While coming back to home.Yash was not sure that what he should do now.On one side,He had a very dear friend whom for the first time showed interest in girl even madly falling in love with geet on other side,Geet was his fiance.

Yash(Thinking):What should i do now??Hmmm.. Maan's happiness is in geet.He is rich,handsome and will always takecare of geet.Every girl wants her dreamboy like Maan.Right?...I just like her because she is my fiance.I'm not madly in love with her like Maan.Yeah i have decided i will talk to geet abt maan.

Yash went to geet's home.Luckily no one was at home.

Yash:Geet i want to discuss something very important with u.
Geet:Actually main bhi tumse koi baat karna cha rahe thi per tum pehle batao.
Yash:Geet tum maan ko jante ho.
Geet(Shocked):Main tumse isse bare main baat karna cha rahe thi.
Yash:Geet woh mera bohat acha friend hai.Aur Woh tumse pyar karta hai.
Geet:He is ur friend???Kya woh janta hai ka main tumhare fiance hoon.
Yash:Nahi...Geet main woh yeh khana cha raha tha ka woh bohat acha ladka hai.
Geet:So what?
Yash:Main yeh kha raha tha ka geet woh aa........ tumhare ....liye ....acha hai.
Geet(Completely shocked):What?????What did u say?????
Yash:I'm sorry geet.Don't get me wrong.I'm thinking abt both of u.Frankly speaking i like u but don't madly in love with u.Maan is perfect for u he is rich,handsome and caring.He is madly in love with u.
Geet(Crying and shouting):JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!I don't want to talk to u and i don't care abt ur STUPID FRIEND.I don't like him or should i say i HATE HIM.I WILL NOT MARRY THAT PSCYHIO FRIEND OF URS.

Yash went away.

Yash(Thinking):Sorry geet but once u will calm down u will understand that maan is perfect for u.

Next day,On breakfast,Yash and geet's family were present when geet came in dining room and went to savitri devi.

Geet(While taking off the ring from her finger):Dadi i'm breaking my engagement with yash.

Everyone was in shock.

Savitri devi:Geet beta aap yeh kya kha rahein hain.
Geet(While going back to her room):Yeh baat aap yash se pochein.
Savitri devi(Angrily):Yeh sab kya hai??
Yash:Dadi maa woh ... geet se mera .... friend p..y..a..r...pyar karta hai aur mujhe lagta hai ka woh geet ka liye perfect hai.Yeh baat isse maine khahe tu iss ne aaj yeh kiya per dadi aap agar khate hain tu main geet se per se engagement kar leta hoon.
Savitri devi:Nahin humare family main tradition hai ka agar aik dafa engagement tote jaiye tu dobara iss ladke ladki se engagement nahi hote.
Yash:Tu aap mera dost i mean maan ka bare main sochein.Woh bohat acha hai aur geet ko bohat khush rakhe ge.
Savitri devi:Acha hum sochte hain.

Everyone was silent during their talk because they respected savtri devi and her decision considered last for them.Yash was relieved whereas Meera didnot know she should be sad for her sister or happy because she secretly loved yash.Geet was crying in her room.She picked her mobile and diallled maan's number.

On the other side,Maan was busy in meeting when his fone rang.He saw geet's number.He excused and went out of the room.Anyways he was not interested in this meeting because he couldnot get his mind off her.He was happy that after two weeks of no response ,she had called him for the first time.

Maan(Smiling):Hi!! kaise ho??I have missed u soo much.Tumne mujhe kisse bhi msg ka reply nahi kiya but i m happy ka aaj tumne first time call ke hai.I really love u.
Geet:Shut up!!Just shut up!!!!!!!!!!!Maine tumhi iss liye call kiya hai taike tumhi pata chale ka tumne kiya kiya hai.
Maan(Dishearted from her shouting):Maine kiya kiya hai??
Geet:Tum mere bare main janna chahte ho tu yeh jaan kar tumhi pata chale ga ka tumne kiya kiya hai.Tumhi pata hai mere engagement kise hui thi.Tumhare friend Yash se.
Maan(completely shocked):WHAT?????




PRECAP:Maan feeling ashamed.
Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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gr8 update..... plzz continue soon
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simply superb.great job.👍🏼
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amazing update.. cant wait for the next part.. do continue soon
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0nice, lovely part.
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Too good! Realy enjoyd readin. Thanx 4 pm

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