SS: Mere Yaar ka Pyar!(Last part:pg 57) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaar countinue soon iluved it plzzzzzz
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awesome...one......yaarr...👏
i loved it.......
thanx for pm.........😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey very nice concept wit so beautiful poems. Plz ad me 2 ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi fatima ... thnks 4 the pm ... continue soon ... nice updates ... BTW ... geet is engaged to yash isn't it ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely FF... liked the poems... cant wait for the next part.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part dear...really feel bad for Maan.......do post the next part soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u sooooo much for ur lovely comments.I hope u guys like this part too.It looks like boring part to me.
Recap:Maan read poems from his old notebook and remembered his past.
SS:Mere Yaar Ka pyar!
Part 3

At 9:30 Pm,Maan ate his dinner in his room.He didn't want to spoil his mood by going to the dining room and facing Madhavi.He was thinking abt his life that how he was creating problems for his dad and step mother.When the image of a girl came to his mind.He smiled remembering his meeting with a girl whom he was sure he started to fall in love.He didnot know her name.
Maan(Thinking):Woh abhi kya kar rahe ho ge.Sone lage ho ge ya phar rahe ho ge??Kya pata mere bare main soch rahe ho.Maan tu sach main pagal ho gaya hai.Aaj se pehle mujhe kabhi aisa mehsoos nahi hua.Main tu kabhi girls main interested nahi tha.I used to hate them per aab kya ho gaya hai?Chalo main isse fone karta hoon.

He dialled her fone number which he had saved after snatching fone from her.

At Handa's,Geet was studying when she remembered that car driver.

Geet(Self talking):Geet tu bhi na pata nahi kya karte hai.Car main behtne se pehle iss ka number tu dekh lete.Zaruri tu nahi har white coralla yash ke hi ho.Pagal kahin ke.Maine tu kise ko nahi bataya kyuki woh ladka shayad flirt kar raha tha.Shayad kya bilkul flirt hi kar raha tha.Kya naam tha iss ka maaaaneee nahi shayad maaanuu.Haan maan tha.

At that time her mobile fone rang.

Geet:Haan itne raat ko mujhe kon fone kar raha hai??

She picked up the fone.

Geet:Hello!
Maan just wanted to hear her voice.
Geet:Aray kon bol raha hai muo main zaban nahi hai kya??...............Hello je kahe so tu nahi gaye aap jo bhi ho.Lagta hai fozul ka paise hain aap ka pas.Ooph agar baat nahi karne tu fone kyu karte ho.

Geet cancelled the call.Maan wanted to tell her abt his feelings.Maan messaged her.Geet received the msg.

Message from maan to geet:
Hi deary!!Kaise ho??Sorry tumhi disturb kiya per kiya karo mujhe nend nahi aa rahe.Yeh tumhare liye

I can't write beautiful, lyrical poetry,
I can't put my words into perfect sentences,
I can't express all that is in my heart,
But somehow, "I love you"...
Says it all.

Yeah this is right i'm falling in love with u.

Takecare,
Tumhara aur sirf tumhara,
Maan

Geet(Thinking):Maan yeh tu wohi car wala hai.Kahin yeh hi tu nahi tha jis ne mujhe pehle call kiya tha.(Angrily)Tumhara aur sirf tumhara.. abhi isse batate hoon.

Message from geet to maan:
Tumhi pata nahi MR.tum kis se panga le rahe ho.Chup chap se tum apna rasta lo.Iss liye kyuki yahan tumhare dall nahi galne wale.Waise bhi main engaged hoon and i love my fiance.Abhi aram se samjha rahe hoon mujhe tang mat karo.

Maan read the msg.He was expecting some angry type of msg because he just to get this weight off but he was shocked to know that the only girl he started to have feelings...

Maan(shocked):Woh engaged hai!


Precap:Maan gave yash the number of geet to get more infromation abt her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Replies of ur comments r on page 3.
Thanxx for all ur support.I hope u guys also like this part.Plzz keep commenting even if u don't like it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG....That was Awesome..
Loved it
Beautiful
Cute update
Hahah loved how geet how like whats his name?? Maanee...Manuuuuu ....lol loved it
OMg he told about his feelings in the text..That was beautiful..
Geet told she is engaged..
Cant wait for more updates
Please continue soon
Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely part dear...wow itnei jaldi pyar ka kiqrar bhi kar diya....bechara Maan ka dil bhi toot gaya....plz post the next part soon
thanks for the pm

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