SS: Mere Yaar ka Pyar!(Last part:pg 57) - Page 2

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GREAT START !!! Update soon.

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awesome...
i loved it....
pls update the next part soon.... 😃
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Thanxxx for ur wonderful comments i will add u guys in pm list.I hope u guys love this part too.



Recap:Geet by mistake sat in maan's car.Maan dropped her at Marine Street.Maan told Yash to come to his home.
SS: Mere Yaar Ka Pyar
Part 2

Yash came to maan's home and went in maan's room.Maan was sitting on his bed doing something on laptop.

Maan:Aao betho.Kya khao ga.
Yash:Mujhe kuch nahi khana tum mujhe yeh batao tum university kyu nahi aaye?Ghar main sab theek hai na??Main jab tumhare room ke taraf aa raha tha tu aisa laga ka yahan party thi.
Maan:Haan party tu thi per khair tu isse chor.Main university main tera wait kar raha tha ka aik ladke mere car main aa kar bethi.Jab maine iska face dekha.U can't believe it yash.(Maan while remembering her face)I was amazed by her beauty.Her face was too innocent.Iss ne kaha ka ghar chalo tu maine car start kar di.Mera dil tu yeh kar raha tha ka isse kahe dor le jao per per isne mujhe dekha aur car rokne ko kaha.Maine car nahi roke per baad main jab maine iss ke pleading eyes dekhian tu maine iss ko iske ghar wale street per chor diya.
Yash(Who was quietly hearing the story,poked maan):Yaar ab mujhe poke kar.
Maan:Kya?
Yash:Abhe kya facebook se poke back karne ko kahoon.Yaar mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ka Maan Singh Khurana kise ladke ko pasand kar sakta hai.Opps i mean ofcourse tu ladke ko hi pasand kare ga.Per tu ne kabhi ladkiyon main interest show nahi kiya.
Maan:I know i'm not interested in girls but that girl was too different.
Yash:Acha yaar mujhe office ka bohat kaam karna hai tu main chalta hoon.Kal milte hain.
Maan:Ok!Bye.

At evening 6:30 pm,Maan was searching something in his study table when he saw the old notebook.He picked that notebook and started to read the first poem abt mother.

To a child, mother's are angels....
who fill this life with song
...for, as you know, an angel can never do a wrong
...to a child,mother's are treasures
...of a priceless worth...and this fact is certain
....throughout all the earth
...a child cling's to it's mother
...as birds cling to a tree....
this is true and will be so....
for all eternity....
father's are loved but mother's are....the port in every storm...
so sincere and tender...understanding and warm...
To a child, mother's are angels...and this one thing I know.
Children harbor truest thoughts...God has deemed this so.

He was having tears in his eyes when he read this poem.This was his first poem when he was in class 4th.He used to write poems.He started to remember his past.

Flashback:
He used to be like other kids carefree types but he was very intelligent.His father was very busy person because he was a business.His mother was a housewife.Everything was so beautiful in his life until that day which had changed his life.
He was sitting near his mother doing his homework.When the phone rang,his mother was talking to her friend when suddenly she started to cry silently.He could see the tears flowing from his mother's eyes.At that time his father also came back home.He had heard many noises and seen his mother who was constantly crying and begging his father to not do this to her.He could not get what his father had done to his mother.After that his father told his mother to go away from his home.His
mother picked up her luggage and wanted to take him too but his father told her that he
couldnot go with her b/c he was waris(Sorry i have forget english of it) of his property.he had tried to go with his mother but his father stopped him.After that whole week he had cried for his mother.He came to know that his father had divorced his mother and married some other woman because he loved her.His marriage with his mother was arranged.Then after one week he took a woman named Madhavi whose 2nd marriage was with his father.Maan hated her because his mother was not with him because of her.He had tried to contact his mother when he came to know abt her death.Doctors told that she had a heart attack but he knew that his mother was died from inside after his father divorced her.After his mother's death,he had changed himself.He had started to give the punishment to them because of whom his mother was died.

Present time:
Maan read the last poem written by him which was after his mother's death.
If I knew it would be the last time
that I'd see you fall asleep,
I would tuck you in more tightly
and pray the Lord, your soul to keep.

If I knew it would be the last time
that I see you walk out the door,
I would give you a hug and kiss
and call you back for one more.

If I knew it would be the last time
I'd hear your voice lifted up in praise,
I would videotape each action and word,
so I could play them back day after day.

If I knew it would be the last time,
I could spare an extra minute or two
to stop and say "I love you,"
instead of assuming, you would know I do.

If I knew it would be the last time
I would be there to share your day,
well I'm sure you'll have so many more,
so I can let just this one slip away.


Precap:Geet is angry because of maan's teasing.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fatima,
Totally a different character sketch and I loved the characters in this one😉
So Maan is as usual in his angry young man mood, and I hope Geet is not engaged to Rahul😆😆😆
It sounds really good and I loved the way you are trying to bring up the character in Maan.
Keep writing and all the best!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
cool... that was a fast update... 😃
i really feel bad for maan.... and the way his father treated his mom.....
poor maan...
i hope everything changes soon....
well geet is there.. so it will rite? he he...
pls update the next part soon.. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1:
@cutiepie9512345:He hates girls but he likes geet u can say first sight love.
@maangeetcrazy, A2Z_84,SaVni,mariam14,komlika,lifesucks123,saweet-pari, anshimanshi,Radhika Shah,shah10,arniindia5, kirannaryani,mrk_1, khwaishfan,nehara:
Thanxxxx for liking and commenting.I hope u guys like this part.

Part 2:

@Amrita:Thanxx for commenting.Actually maan is like angry types but he starts to like geet when he sees her.So he acts kind of different with geet.
@reshmi87:I have sent u buddy request.
@Nehara:I feel bad while writing this but he will be alright soon.
@bluedreamz953:Thanxx for commenting.
@shivangi783, zarlishkhan, maansee, PrithviSanyo1, mrk_1, reea88,maangeetcrazy,trishap,
nithi07,NoorFatima,maanujaanu,namita25,sweet13579, greatsumkum, chubzy, dewdropred,
swetha10,mariam14:Thanxxx for ur beautiful comments.Keep commenting.
@ anisharoy1: Actually geet is engaged to her cousin who is son of her father's cousin.BTW thanxx for the comment.
Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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omg i loved it yaar
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Interesting.
Enjoyed reading the first twoparts.
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