#Devil's Den#Dusht Dhanav wants to Punish Geet #2 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
@Shali: I know, but mostly latino dance r close dance, at least it would be so hot to see it on Maaneet ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
@shreya lol.. take ur tim... pls... i il b here.... only...
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Posted: 14 years ago


I stood there in a trance looking at his retreating figure.
Why was he going away he had promised me he will never leave me. So why now.



It was just eveing..he had left me..



But he will come back ..he will come back na..



Obviously he will..he
might be having some important work.. U saw he left you at the outhouse only
after he got the call..Just give him some time he will come back.



I smiled and went into my room.



It was 5 in the evening. He had dropped me back home after
that so called meeting of his.



I smiled at the memory of it..The meeting.



I was hungry. i decided to make something for myself.



I was walking down into the kitchen when I felt nauseated
and a weird feeling in my stomach too.



I don't know but then I kept my hand on my stomach and I felt
something as though something was moving. I realized it was the first kick I had
got from my baby..no our baby.



I was happy beyond myself. I went back into my room to let
that feeling pass. It didn't take long.



Some ten minutes and I was again back to my normal but now I
was waiting for him more eagerly than before. I wanted him to feel it too. Who
else could I share these small happiness of my life?



I was hungry too and I realized the baby would be hungry
too.



I went into the kitchen and cooked a small meal for myself.



I saw the time it was 6 by now. I decided to wait for him
before I ate something so I went back to my room and sat on the bed thinking
about the day.



I had never seen him so happy before. I was thinking about
him in the office.



I remembered the way he had held my hand when those roses
were flung at us. He knew I was uncomfortable and his eyes that held me to them
made me smile at those roses after months now.



He made sure I was not out of sight for even a minute on the
pretense that I needed to fix up that file I had destroyed and I had no clue
about it, only later to realize that file contained nothing but some old
documents and the presentation file was safe with him.



It was 6:30 I was still sitting there waiting. I decided to
call him. I called him but his phone was unreachable. I decided to call the
main house. At the main house I was told that he was in the house but he had
barred any calls to him and had given strict instructions that even my call was
not to be given to him.



I was startled. What had I done that I was getting this
treatment. He has not left me



He cant he will come back na. I don't know why but the fear
of losing him was enveloping me again.



And then I heard him..



"geet tum mere layaak nahi ho.. main galat tha.."



He was standing far away from me in my room. He wouldn't come
near me I walked up to him but he just kept going back..



Geet mujse door chali jaao..main tumhare saath nahi reh
sakta..



Aap aisa nahi..i choked…aapne waada..



Geet to kya hua..main apni zindagi tumhare liye barbaad nahi
kar sakta..



I was crying..he cant..



Aap aayiye..ap mat jayeyie..



Nahi geet



And he walked away..i sat there crying for god knows how
long



And then I heard the phone ring.



Geet bol rahi hai..



Ji I heard myself mumble.



Aap MSK ko jaanti hai..



Jee haan who mere..i didn't know what relationship I had I paused
to think and the said..fianc hain



Unka accident ho gaya hai aur who aapse milna chahte hain..



Aap..



Who life line hospital mein hain..



Without thinking I ran out of the door and caught the first
taxi to the hospital.



The hospital staff guided me to him. He was in the ICU and
covered in bandages.



I entered but the doctor shook his head and said aapne bahut
der kardi aane mein..



I stood there motionless with tears flowing down my eyes.



He had promised he would never leave me how could he do it
now



I went and sat next to him..



Utheye na..chaliye ab hum baad mein lad lenge..aise koi
satata hai..uthiye na..jaldi se..aur ghar chaliye..aapne waada kiya tha ki aap
roz subah mere maathe par bindi sajayenge..accha baba mat karna..daant bhi
lena..par uthiye na..aur dekhiye aaj toh baby ne bhi pehli baar mujhe kick kiya
hai…uthiye na..dekhiye ab main phir HP express ki tarah shuru ho jaaongi aur
phir aap kahnge ki tum kitna bolti hoo..uthiye na..chaliye ghar pe daadimaa
humara intezaar kar rahi hongi..aur phir kal humein shaadi ki shopping ki liye
bhi toh jaana hai na..chaliye na..



"madam who.."



"who so rahein hai..main jaanti hoon..aap jaante nahi who bahut
ziddi hai..bilkul dusht daanav.."



"par.."



Aap jayeyie main inhe utha loongi..



Dekha main theek kehti thi ki aap bilkul Dushat dhanav
hai..dekha..Geet kabhi galat nahi hoti..ab uthiye..itni zidd koi karta
hai..accha ab main aapke saath har jagah chaloongi..aap jeete main haari..ab
chaliye na..



"madam.."



I turned around..



And saw that daadi maa and dev were standing outside..



I went out and said to daadi.."inse kahiye na uthe..aise koi
naraaz hota hai.."



Geet bte aap..



Dev tum bolo na..tumhar bro tumhari baat maange..inhe bolo
uthe..



Geet..



Aap log ro kyon rahein hai..inhe bolein uthne ke liye…



Daadi held me and Geet maan ab is duniya mein nahi hai..hosh
mein aayiye..



Nahi..woh..



Geet dadi maa sahi keh rahi haain..



Nahi aap sab..



Daadi ma shook me hard and said "Geet who ab kabhi waapas
nahi aayenge.."



I fell on my kneed and shouted "Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn"



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Posted: 14 years ago
@Zee... Latino dance brings out the passion....
me so love dancing salsa....
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Posted: 14 years ago
@shali: thanks..
@resmi: here u go..now tell me u went all sento by then i will fisnih the rest..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Shali: Aise karne chahiye kam se kam ek baar Maaneet ke pechch mein ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Miss chopraaa...😡 i told u to make me drool... u know water frm t mouth... not tears from t eyes... why??😭
but i liked how as a writer u just too me by surprise with tat piece...🤗but still...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnaks swati and resmi..i wanted that..i mean the tears.. ok wait before u kill me i will post the sec part..hehe
Edited by mchopra - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@miss chopra... u think i ill leave u... u hav a second part acha good build up.. now tis tim only droooooooooooool☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago


I stood there in a trance looking at his retreating figure.
Why was he going away he had promised me he will never leave me. So why now.



It was just eveing..he had left me..



But he will come back ..he will come back na..



Obviously he will..he
might be having some important work.. U saw he left you at the outhouse only
after he got the call..Just give him some time he will come back.



I smiled and went into my room.



It was 5 in the evening. He had dropped me back home after
that so called meeting of his.



I smiled at the memory of it..The meeting.



I was hungry. i decided to make something for myself.



I was walking down into the kitchen when I felt nauseated
and a weird feeling in my stomach too.



I don't know but then I kept my hand on my stomach and I felt
something as though something was moving. I realized it was the first kick I had
got from my baby..no our baby.



I was happy beyond myself. I went back into my room to let
that feeling pass. It didn't take long.



Some ten minutes and I was again back to my normal but now I
was waiting for him more eagerly than before. I wanted him to feel it too. Who
else could I share these small happiness of my life?



I was hungry too and I realized the baby would be hungry
too.



I went into the kitchen and cooked a small meal for myself.



I saw the time it was 6 by now. I decided to wait for him
before I ate something so I went back to my room and sat on the bed thinking
about the day.



I had never seen him so happy before. I was thinking about
him in the office.



I remembered the way he had held my hand when those roses
were flung at us. He knew I was uncomfortable and his eyes that held me to them
made me smile at those roses after months now.



He made sure I was not out of sight for even a minute on the
pretense that I needed to fix up that file I had destroyed and I had no clue
about it, only later to realize that file contained nothing but some old
documents and the presentation file was safe with him.



It was 6:30 I was still sitting there waiting. I decided to
call him. I called him but his phone was unreachable. I decided to call the
main house. At the main house I was told that he was in the house but he had
barred any calls to him and had given strict instructions that even my call was
not to be given to him.



I was startled. What had I done that I was getting this
treatment. He has not left me



He cant he will come back na. I don't know why but the fear
of losing him was enveloping me again.



And then I heard him..



"geet tum mere layaak nahi ho.. main galat tha.."



He was standing far away from me in my room. He wouldn't come
near me I walked up to him but he just kept going back..



Geet mujse door chali jaao..main tumhare saath nahi reh
sakta..



Aap aisa nahi..i choked…aapne waada..



Geet to kya hua..main apni zindagi tumhare liye barbaad nahi
kar sakta..



I was crying..he cant..



Aap aayiye..ap mat jayeyie..



Nahi geet



And he walked away..i sat there crying for god knows how
long



And then I heard the phone ring.



Geet bol rahi hai..



Ji I heard myself mumble.



Aap MSK ko jaanti hai..



Jee haan who mere..i didn't know what relationship I had I paused
to think and the said..fianc hain



Unka accident ho gaya hai aur who aapse milna chahte hain..



Aap..



Who life line hospital mein hain..



Without thinking I ran out of the door and caught the first
taxi to the hospital.



The hospital staff guided me to him. He was in the ICU and
covered in bandages.



I entered but the doctor shook his head and said aapne bahut
der kardi aane mein..



I stood there motionless with tears flowing down my eyes.



He had promised he would never leave me how could he do it
now



I went and sat next to him..



Utheye na..chaliye ab hum baad mein lad lenge..aise koi
satata hai..uthiye na..jaldi se..aur ghar chaliye..aapne waada kiya tha ki aap
roz subah mere maathe par bindi sajayenge..accha baba mat karna..daant bhi
lena..par uthiye na..aur dekhiye aaj toh baby ne bhi pehli baar mujhe kick kiya
hai…uthiye na..dekhiye ab main phir HP express ki tarah shuru ho jaaongi aur
phir aap kahnge ki tum kitna bolti hoo..uthiye na..chaliye ghar pe daadimaa
humara intezaar kar rahi hongi..aur phir kal humein shaadi ki shopping ki liye
bhi toh jaana hai na..chaliye na..



"madam who.."



"who so rahein hai..main jaanti hoon..aap jaante nahi who bahut
ziddi hai..bilkul dusht daanav.."



"par.."



Aap jayeyie main inhe utha loongi..



Dekha main theek kehti thi ki aap bilkul Dushat dhanav
hai..dekha..Geet kabhi galat nahi hoti..ab uthiye..itni zidd koi karta
hai..accha ab main aapke saath har jagah chaloongi..aap jeete main haari..ab
chaliye na..



"madam.."



I turned around..



And saw that daadi maa and dev were standing outside..



I went out and said to daadi.."inse kahiye na uthe..aise koi
naraaz hota hai.."



Geet bte aap..



Dev tum bolo na..tumhar bro tumhari baat maange..inhe bolo
uthe..



Geet..



Aap log ro kyon rahein hai..inhe bolein uthne ke liye…



Daadi held me and Geet maan ab is duniya mein nahi hai..hosh
mein aayiye..



Nahi..woh..



Geet dadi maa sahi keh rahi haain..



Nahi aap sab..



Daadi ma shook me hard and said "Geet who ab kabhi waapas
nahi aayenge.."



I fell on my knees and shouted "Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn"



geet kya hua



I heard him..someone was holding me..holding me tight.



I looked and saw it was him. He was looking at me with
worried eyes.



I realized that I was lying down and I had slept off and
what I had just seen was a dream.



I looked at him. The tears were flowing down my eyes relentlessly.



I hugged him. I was so scared.He just held me stroking my
hair and my back.



He didn't ask me anything. But let me be there. I felt so
safe there and after a while when I realized that I had made his shirt wet coz
of my tears I let him go..



Geet kya hua..



I shook my head



Geet..



Aap mere paas hai na..



Geet maine kaha na main humesha tumhare paas rahoonga



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