A Night to Remember - A Maaneet One Shot Fan Fic - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: najch

Beautifully written. 👏


Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Opti-- Very hot.. Never expected it from you... Was a pleasant suprise indeed.. Very good portrayal of emotions and passion...As always well written but i was expecting it be a bit more on the sensual side but the premises of your plot does lead to grand passion... Overall another good one from your kitty...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShabooKiDeewani

Opti-- Very hot.. Never expected it from you... Was a pleasant suprise indeed.. Very good portrayal of emotions and passion...As always well written but i was expecting it be a bit more on the sensual side but the premises of your plot does lead to grand passion... Overall another good one from your kitty...😊

Thanks Sangs. So you did not expect me to come up with hot stuff? Do I come across like a nun?! Actually this is an improvised version of one of the scenes I had for my Michi fic. That fic had the entire narrative in the form of past and present (Michi recollecting their married life on the day of their 25th anniversary and thereafter) and was told from Milind's and Prachi's perspectives. Since I wrote the fic in 2009, my past took me to 1984 so I made use of the historical events of the time including the assasination of Mrs. Gandhi and the aftermath of that. The consummation scene was right after Milind losing Prachi in the riots and finding her again. So it had to be wild in keeping with his fear of his near lose and his rejoicing in finding her. Actually the original scenario fitted more than this Maaneet scenario because there Prachi was not in any real danger although Milind thought she was.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: deniac

Opti - hot hot hot....... 😳

Thanks Gouri.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was totally different frm serial
Maanwas actually scared wit the thought of jus loosing her
Liked their talk in the moddle
Wen Maan said Sorry i really thought sumthg is gona go wrng but Thank God Maan cleared all thgs
Nicely written
Why didnt u pmed me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was Wow!!!!!!!

This is something!!!!!! Pm me if u do any more OS.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: -afsha-

It was totally different frm serial

Maanwas actually scared wit the thought of jus loosing her
Liked their talk in the moddle
Wen Maan said Sorry i really thought sumthg is gona go wrng but Thank God Maan cleared all thgs
Nicely written
Why didnt u pmed me



Thanks Afsha. Yes, this is totally different from the serial. I wrote it before I saw that episode where Maan rescues her and the showdown with NT. Based only on the promo, this was my interpretation of Maan's and Geet's state of minds and their reactions. Sorry I had not PMed you this one because I was not sure how old you were. Since the content was adult, I had not PMed all my regular readers except the ones whom I thought was old enough.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

That was Wow!!!!!!!

This is something!!!!!! Pm me if u do any more OS.


Thanks. My other stuff is pretty mundane as I don't normally write hot stuff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no words 2 describe how much i enjoyed reading tis OPTI...Wonderful n brilliant PIECE OF WRITING..be ita passion, love or emotion..u bring each n every aspect so well......it was surely HAWT n sensual...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehraan

no words 2 describe how much i enjoyed reading tis OPTI...Wonderful n brilliant PIECE OF WRITING..be ita passion, love or emotion..u bring each n every aspect so well......it was surely HAWT n sensual...

Thanks Mehraan. glad you liked it.

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