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Posted: 14 years ago
muskaan update soon..........cant wait to read next part.........plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww!!!!awesomeee muskaan!!!!hats off 2 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that was a veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy greatttttttt update!!!!!!!!!!!!waitin 4 ur update!!!!!!
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will wait for it.........😳
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waiting waiting waiting waiting ........
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Originally posted by: febinyusuff

waiting waiting waiting waiting ........

me 2 waiting intezar ki gharian
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waiting..!!😃
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intezaar intezaar intezaar !!!
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Originally posted by: febinyusuff



intezaar intezaar intezaar !!!

aur kitna intezaar
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-truly magical-
part 51

maan pulled out the tent & set it up
geet - aap sach main 10-15days mujhse dor ja rahe the
he kept quite feeling the pain in her question & he did'nt want to
increase it futher with his answere. he continued to pull out the
sleeping bag & gathered some wood for fire.
geet - aap mujhse itna naraz the?
he contined to arrange the woods in a cirlce, sitting with one knee resting
on the ground, she sat opposite questioning him
geet - aap ko ek bar bhi mera khayal nahi aaya
he took the match box & tried to light it
geet - u did'nt think how will I stay with out talking to u, how will I
stay with out seeing u.

maan held her from her arms real tight pressing him self on to her
maan - why is it always about u? tumne kabhi socha hain main kaise rah paya tumhare bina
she never expected that coming, she blinked her eye lashes & kept looking
at him with her mouth open
maan held her tighter - tumne kabhi socha mujhe kaise laga hoga, when u just suddenly
start distancing from me, mere pe kya beti hogi jab ke meri har subha tumse hoti
thi aur har sham tumse.
his eyes was mosit & spitting pain & anger. it was more of
the pain of separation of not seeing her, being without her for over a week now.
tears welled in her eyes - lekin main aapse kab dor thi, aap hi galat samjh rahe the
maan - how am I supposed to know what is in ur mind, tum kabhi aapni dil ki baat kisi
ko kanha bolti ho
geet - lekin aap ko bhi to samjhna chahiya na, mera dil main kya hain
he almost moved onto her - kya kya samjho main
geet wispered slowly innocently - sab kuch, aap hi to kahten hain main pagli hoon,
toh aap ko hi samjhna padega.
he just melted into those words it was complete surrender that too whole heartedly ..he moved still closer she lost her balance & fell backward taking him along on her. he kept his hand around her head to avoid her from hurting making him rest his forehead on her shoulder and his breath falling on her right chest just above the curves sending shivers down her spine. he slowly tried to get up so did she bumping their heads they fell again.
maan - ek min
he raised his head slowly away from her to meet her gaze, he was just inch away from her
his eyes looked hers then moved down to her lips, then looked back into her eyes
he could resist noticing the cheeks which turned red with his eye moment. he smiled
and moved her curls behind. His finger touched her ear, tracing the sensitive edge,
the faint rasping sound so loud it made her shiver. She tried pressing back against but
it was his fingers that touched the nape of her neck. she jolted. he moved away feeling the heat
embracing them. His lips just brushed gently over hers while turning away. The aura,
however, the greater reality he seemed able to summon, fell over her like a heavy mist,
making her breath falter. she wondered how could he do this to her with just a light brush.
she sighed with her own thought & got up straighten her shirt. they were quite for a while
lost in the spell that cast on each other.
maan broke the silence - tumhare ghar main sab pareshan ho rahen honge
geet - nahi, I left a note saying I am gone out camping with college friends
maan - how did u know where I am?
geet - I spoke to daadi
maan - u spoke to daadi?
geet - main aur kya karti, aap to mujse baat hi nahi karte na
he went back trying to light the fire.
geet - mujhe boohk lagi hain
maan - got some bread, challega
geet - do I have an option
maan - u had options
she knew that he was taunting her - I usaually don't settle on simple things
my choices are the rarest & the best...at times complicated
he smiled knowing she was indirectly pointing at him
geet - kabhi kabhi galtise rarest chaker main
he lifted his eyebrows
she was busy eating the bread - rarest pate pate anomalous aur unprecedented pa jati hoon
he kept looking at her innocense & determination in her tone.
she never expressed in words but her acts spoke more than his words could ever say.
she was never doubtful or uncertain about them, it was him always not understanding
the magical bond that kept them always togather and the way she never give up on him.
always holding on to the unseen thread & always running behind him. manaofying him
like she treasured him. like she never lived without him. he felt so silly about the
all missunderstanding he had. wondered how could he the Maan Singh khurana not understand
she was just down feeling low, & he took it as her distancing, he learned how much
she began to mean to him. how every thing else meant nothing when it came to her. she
won't accept it though. he laughed at his own thoughts.
she finished the bread in her hand & wiped her lips, he could stop looking at her
lips. then looked away. he cleared his throat.
maan - tum sleeping bag main so javoo, I will sleep in the jeep
geet - woh kyun?
she looks at the sleeping bag, kafi bada hain I am sure we both can fit into it
maan looked at her in shock
she slides in & moves to the further end & asks him to come in patting at the
flatten side for him. he knew he won't be able to control his wild thoughts
he looked away - main jeep main he teehk hoon
she pulls his hand back - itna bhi sata savitra ban ki zarorat nahi hain, it is really cold out there.
maan - geet woh teehk nahi hoga try to understand
she was so dam tempting he really had to control to resist that offer
but he knew she was way to innocent to understand his plight.
she pulls him in a jerk down & forcing him to lie down - waise bhi this not
the first time..
then she bit her lips thinking what she said.
they lied facing their back
geet - don't get ideas OK
maan smiled - what ideas?
geet - pehle I come looking for u & then ask u to sleep in the same sleeping bag
maan turns to face her back - so
geet - kisi bhi ladhke ko lage ki I am ...
he turns her towards him pressing her shoulder downward
she looks at him turning to meet his eyes
maan - mujhe nahi pata, ki kisi aur ko kya lage ga, mujhe laga ki tum bahut pyari ho
she slips her hand around his neck - really
he noded & removed her hand from his neck & kissed them. she blushed.
he turned his back to her & so did she.

it was 5.30am. she got up could'nt help it she was used it by now


she realized she was cuddled up in his arms. she tried to move out of the bag
but his strong arms held her down from her waist. she kept looking at him for a while
she got carried away & caressed his checks & moved to his jawline, softly ..he smiled
she rised closer to almost kissing his chin. felt his breath
fanning her, he openned his one eye - yeh kya kar rahi ho
she fummbled & felt cornerd. she ran out of the sleeping bag & the tent & kept running
away. she felt so concious of she was about to do. she felt so shy
maan lied back mumered pagli hain
he got up & packed the tent & sleeping bag & all there belongings.
she ran little further than she should
she heard some noices & followed it. she peeped hiding behind the rock
there were few guys sitting around the fire & discussing
she got horrified listening to them & ran from there. she did'nt see where
she was heading & bumped on him. almost falling on him
he held her looking into her eyes..terrified like they learned something fearful.
geet - woh woh!! terrorist hain, kidnappers nahi
maan - kay bol rahi ho tum
geet she was catching for her breath
maan - have water first
geet - nahi lets leave from here first
maan - how many of them
geet - 5 may be more
maan - don't worry mere pass rifle hain aur gun bhi hain
geet - unke pass AK-47 hain
maan - are out of ur mind
geet - woh aapke yah mere peeche nahi hain, woh Maan Singh Khurana ke peche hain
maan was little worried because she was around - how do u know?
geet - I over heard them, they want Maan Singh Khurana because of the that new
ammunition deal..
before she could complete they were already reaching them
they hopped into the jeep & rushed
geet - yeh Maan Singh Khurana to bura phasa ek taraf Sameera aur ek taraf terrorist
maan - aur uppar se tum bhi nahi thi
geet - main insab main kanha fit hoti hoon
he preffered not saying much she was already quite shocked seeing terrorists
maan - don't worry we will be fine
geet - aapke jeep main radio hain
maan - tumhe iss waqt gana sunna hain
geet rolled her eyes - just shut up
she tuned into some frequency & did some thing he could not understand
he just tried to keep them away from those guys. they kept firing at them, geet tried to
fire back. they were really close.
geet - hum unhe sorry kah dete hain
maan - WHAT
geet - woh humare peche thodi hain, if we say sorry, probably they may just
leave us alone.
maan - tum pagal ho
she looked behind there were only 3 of them in that jeep which followed
geet - seriously just stop the jeep, we will tell them sorry
maan rubs his temple kya samjhavon is ko main

precap
major accident

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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yaar...... muski.. kahan se kahan le gaya tu story ko.... 😭😭😭..

the night was sweet and so romantic... and all of a sudden.. terrorists 😭😭😭😭😭😭..

and the precap.. scary !!!!!!!!..


Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago

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