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Posted: 14 years ago
wao!!muskan di!!beautiful update.btw i dnt get if she really doent know this msk z her bachan??
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one di..........
oooo maan is very possesive............
precap is very interesting.....
plz continue soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome one di!!

loved it!!
please continue soon!!
thanks
Sanju
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow amazing update loved it👏

Continue soon 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayy..how can someone be so gooood!! *still drooling over maan's moves*
i'm gonna love his jealous side :e lol even though he's jealous of himself!!! Hahahaha!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Muskan waiting 😳 you know very well waiting for what!!! To see a jealouse Maan, who is jealouse of himself. Poor Maan!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

actually just finished reading whole parts i must superb they r..

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgg awesumm loved geet makin halwa dev questioning geet abt maan n maan jealous of dev flirting hehe loved it
cnt 4 more continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 47

she went back to the auditorium to see Maan Singh Khurana..she saw he was covered with girls
and he did'nt seem to care about them he straight away walked to the wash room
geet umm kisi ko bhi bahav nahi diya
she over heard the girls cribbing - kitna attitude hain isse main
other girl - he does'nt talk to any girl
girl 1 - yaar I will kill to talk to him once
girl 2 - u won't believe last time some tried kissing him
he held her back from her neck. what a gentleman. iski GF kitni lucky hogina
girl 1 - really HOT yaar, uppar se itna attitude..above all paka gentleman, killer combination
girl 3 - sare ladeke to mauka nahi chod the kiss karne ka, lekin yah to
hume mauka nahi deta
geet was getting curious about this guys now.
girl 1 - he is participating in the bike race too this time
girl 2 - he has never lost any game till now
geet - oops today he will...he can't beat amy & me
sorry Maan Singh Khurana
girl 3 - steals his sweat shirt & hugs it
geet yuk & goes away from there
amraan calls geet
armaan - geet meri race start hone wali hain where are you
i will be there in a min
. she was dressed in black jeans & tied hair in a
high pony. she wore the helmet & was about to sit behind armaan when
ridz came & sat behind him. geet was taken a back. but she was happy for
armaan. she turned to move away from the tracks. he pulled her in a jerk
she landed in the front portion of the bike. she wondered who it was
he raised the speed & wheeling the bike....making her fall on him
she hugged him tight.
maan - hold on
she could'nt recognize his heavy voice through the helmet
geet - I am not going any where with u, uttara mujhe
he made a steep turn, she settled in front crossing her legs around him
& her hands hugging him slipping from his waist behind up to his shoulder. she took in
his scent geet mumered bachan...maan smiled & rised the speed further
geet to jhali hogaye hain, yah bachan kaise hosakten hain
sach main unho ne mujhe pagal kar diya hain, har jagah woh hi nazar aate hain
she moved away at once from the comfart hug. now barely holding him for a grip
he pulled her closer..she snapped back
maan - gir javoghi
geet - thats my problem not urs
the bike took another steep right turn & she burried her head in his
left shoulder, he smirked, pravoking her further
she troubled him moving in that speed, he did'nt seem to get disturbed, rather enjoyed every
bit. she got even more irritated. she tried blocking his view.
maan - do u really think Maan Singh Khurana can lose with his lady luck with him
geet was dumb stuck...she was with the Maan Singh Khurana...& he called her
his lady luck...she felt flattered..but suddenly she realized she was not supposed
to be HIS lady luck...she belonged to some one else..that was strange..she never committed
still guilty...muskan smiling at her thought!!! it felt different hight speed, bikes crossing at such high speed, one after the other, steep deadly turns, him holding her close in front, she probably never sat in the front portion of a bike. that to in a race with a stranger, who she realized was Maan Singh Khurana, the bussiness tycon, the winner of all events, the guys all girls just die to speak to, the most happening HOT guy, the way he held her in place...it was evoking a different feeling all togather..she could not understand what she felt...
they won the race & she stood mesmerised with the speed & flow & his attitude & the command over her. the ease with which he handled her.
maan - main change karke aata hoon
he walked few steps & removed his helmet & shook his head splashing the
sweat off his wet hair.. she saw glimse of his face before she could catch his
full view all the girls surrounded him for a hugs & kisses..he avoids them & walks
straight into the changing room. geet kept looking at him
armaan came from behind - woh kaun tha
geet - Maan Singh Khurana
armaan - i thought tera bachan tha
geet - nahi woh tho phone hi nahi utta rahen, she looked at him what happened why did u guys stop in between
armaan - nahi ridz was not comfartable with the race speeding & all
geet - u need heart of Geet Handa for that
armaan - Yes maam
ridz came from behind - challen we are getting late
armaan - challo
they left from there saying bye to geet
she kept looking for Maan Singh Khurana to come out
maan came & pat her back - challen
she jumped back excitedly then looked little dissappointed - aap
maan - tum kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thi..looking around
geet felt bad of her thought & hugged him tight - where were u the whole day
maan - yanhi to tha
geet - aapne race dehka, we won
maan smiled
geet - did u see that last wala turn that was awesome na
maan - tumse nazar hut thi to turn dehkta na
geet waks him - stop flirting
maan - tum samne hoti ho tho...
geet rolling her eyes - I know...stop it...
maan smiles naughtly
geet - I could'nt believe ... we won
maan - Maan Singh Khurana ki lady luck tum ho to woh kaise race har sakta hain
he said it proudly
geet did'nt like him calling her Maan Singh Khurana ki lady luck
she snapped away making a face
maan wondered what happened - kya huwa
she got angry & walked away
maan - bike main to bahut hug kar rahi thi
it was really making her feel irritated & odd & guilty somewhere - woh toh I was falling
off isse liya
maan - mujhe to aise nahi laga
geet - why ? u r feeling jealous of Maan Singh Khurana now
maan rubbed his temple realizing that she still does'nt know him as Maan Singh Khurana
& she did'nt know he was with her on the bike
she saw him thinking so deeply - woh to hain itne smart koi bhi unpe fida hojayen
maan shocked - tumbhi?
geet - frankly kahon
maan looked at her curiously
geet - main bhi...todha todha...can u believe ..GEET HANDA..saying something like that...yaar he seems to be good with every thing!!! perfectionsit types..wonder if he lacks in anything
maan kept quite enjoying her praising him unknowingly
they were walking back to the car.
geet - pata hain he won the kick boxing tournument , shooting & swiming
maan - umm
geet - sari ladkiyan uspe fida hain
maan - umm
geet - I was floored by the way he sweeped the guy in the kick boxing ka final match
maan - I liked the way knocked out the girl in one punch
geet - u saw my match
maan - how could I miss it
she again went back prasing Maan Singh Khurana, he started to feel odd now
geet - he does'nt speak to any girl u know
maan - aisa nahi hain
geet with a tinch of pride - sirf mujhse baat kiya
maan - so to hain
geet - he called me his lady luck
maan looked away
geet - but I do'nt like it
maan narrowed his eye brow she slipped her hand around his
geet - I am not 'HIS'...she paused..aur aap bhi aise hi bol rahe ho she had a complaining tone
maan smiled inwardly & wondered how she made him feel jealous of himself
and still accepted to be his...only she could this magic. sweeping him entirely into
a different world.

precap
SAMEERA loves Maan Singh Khurana...OOPS!!!

NEXT PART 48
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey........great....
i wonder what will be her reaction when she will know who Maan singh khurana is.........
cant wait for that update.......
Edited by muskaan_22285 - 14 years ago

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