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veil_of_roses

@veil_of_roses

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#371

@jayA....its good to see u writing seriously....i like ur writing skills😃

abt not developing characters.......u sufaced my 'dukh' mera YASH😭 😭 😭

@rash...hmmm i havent seen epi yet..n no chance for next few hrs

@mansa🤗

@zee....socho PAM ke aane ke baad veena attention seek karne ke liye kya karegi🤣 🤣

GC akela ander nahi jayega...uski support system bhi jayegi na😆 😉 aur agar usne bb4 ke repeat dekhe to kabhi bhi GC ko BB main enter nahi hone degi

Edited by gargi. - 14 years ago

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shreya_l

@shreya_l

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#372

@ All Gargi, Polki, Manasa, Pram, Geeti, Rhea, Shreya, Mari... If i missed anyone 🤗 Hello to invisible devils...
How are u all? What's the discussion now?
Finished my take posting it here for u all (updated on pg 3)

Har baat hai tumhari sir aankhon par,

Saath rahe hamara yunhi jindagi bhar,

Khamoshi tumhari bayan karti tumhara ikrar....

Bahoon ke jhule mein tumhe karke sawaar😛

Le chaloon main tumhe is jalim duniya se bachakar,

Chaahat ka jahan banega ek duje ko paakar😳

Lo shuru hua hai dwand,

KC ki chaar-diwari mein na rahega ab yeh band...

Na rakhna koi tum ab shak,😕

NT hai taiyaar,

Honge Maaneet par ab khule vaar,☢️

NT ka bas lagata hai yehi ek lakshya 😈

Geet ki chavi ho dhoomil

Aur Maan na rahen KC bachane mein daksh

Dev sang Meera ka nahin karna chahti main jikr

Achayi ka saath dega yeh

Ya chodega majhdhaar mein 🤢

Yehi hai meri phikr

Kuch to hai jo kar raha tumhe pareshaan,

Is khamoshi ke peeche chupa hai tofaan,

Ek duje ka chaahein dil se saath,

Yeh samjhein ek duje ki ankahi har baat...

Vishvaas ki kasauti pe hai ab inhe khara utarna

Ek duje ke sang har mushkil ka karna hai ab samana...

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virgo_gurl

@virgo_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

Hi Zee Rash and Paarsa:D

Jyo:
Me waiting to read ur take
Update soon nah😡😆

Rash:
Liked ur short take👍🏼

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maansa

@maansa

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

rash...agree that deveera are just plain silly🤢🤣

jaya....i lowed your take...but i already said it...but i can say it a few more times....loWed loWed loWed it....😃