OS - One fine Sunday...Note on pg 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ☺️
Feeling Hawt Hawt Hawt 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woow. that was an awesome OS...so uber hott 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I wanna know how maan avenges from Geet... It better be good...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dols ....its extremely HOT......need help to breathe .....Maan and Geet kissing away to glory ,wid paint all over ...wow what a sight that would be ....wonder what he plans as revenge ...cant wait for it ....post soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Sohniya lovely, hot very hot, i seriously not need my breath back, cause i am perfectly fine, and just loved it.....


Plz PM me your # i really wanna talk to you :)



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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
wowwwwwwwwww😛
superb concepT!!!
sooooooo hot!!!!!!!!😳
too good yaar
plz cant wait to read more...so plz update fast.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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outstanding .2 good. V hot. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was absolutely awesome Dol!!Wonderfully written as always!!! Loved Maan feeling all embarrassed at the end in front of Dadi😆...thanks for the PM😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwwwww

That was HOT, SEXY, CUTE and FUNNY. I think that would be the first OS that makes me think of all these adjectives. And it gives a feeling of wanting more. Would love it if u continue with the next scene. Would love to see Maan retaliate. 😛


I really admire your writing skills and imagination. Have always read your OS and i think they are simply amazing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah kya mirchi lagi!!!! koi paani do paani do!!!!
wait...i already have water here....let me drink!!! wait not mirchi...kya paint laga....but i will still need water to take off the paint...that has gone on my heart!!! Dol u murderer.....u killed me with this OS again...and then u wanna kill me again?? how is that possible??

Dol.....u bought paint in between maaneet??? The minute i read paint and geet...i knew it was gonna make me fall off of my chair or choke!!!!!

Wah wah wah!!!! i loved it dol.....saw the whole thing happening live in front of me!!!!!!
Which made it harder for me to breathe...and then the view zoomed in...and then i was sure enough to choke and die....obvious no??
But opened buttons....paint....and then maaneet.....that is just hottttttttttttttzzzzzzzzzzz with extra zzzzzzzzzz's

how can u expect me to comment after readin things like this???
VINU....UR DD WANTS A PAINT SCENE LIKE THIS PLEEJ!!

Dol....dol...dol.....continue with the scene yaar please please please!!!! THREE DAY OS??? lolz

Wow...yeh dadi bhi na always comes at the wrong time!!! not fair...i always get deprived from maaneet scenes!!!! grrrrrrrrrr

But that must have been extremely embarrassing....for maan....
i wanna know what he planning for next!!!!




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