Maan Self-Dialogue 1 Nov

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

hi everyone!

I attempted a self-dialogue for yesterday!

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here it goes-

Maan(brainy)- say something Hearty..it's been a week and all I have heard is your silent tears..please..please don't be like that. I have a master- plan. She won't go anywhere..I won't let her.

Maan(heart)- You tell me to talk. and what have you been doing? Rewinding and flashbacking throughout the week each moment, each gesture, each smile and each tear drop. I miss her so much, I would rather strangle myself with this tie..but I won't...

Maan(brain)- Yes you won't. Because you're Maan Singh Khurana, who doesn't give up.

Adi will work it out. You will know where she is

Maan(heart)- my Geet..She has not been alone ever in Delhi without me. How will she manage? will she be safe?

Maan(brain)- She'll come back you'll see..

Maan(heart)- If she doesn't

Maan gets a fb of Geet's declaration to the media

Maan(brain)- Then I will go to her.

Dadi- Maan..Please have some breakfast

Maan(heart and brain laugh bitterly)- Not hungry Dadi..

Maan(heart)- I wonder if she ate anything...

Dadi- do you want Coffee

Maan(heart)- NO NO NO😭

Maan(brain)- Fb mode..I'm so sorry..It was instinctive...I don't drink coffee anymore

Dadi- Forget everything.

Maan(heart)- and she tells me to forget..forget whom? Myself? The meaning of my life and the centre that keeps me alive? Forget that??

MAan(brain)- I'm fine. I' m fine.

maan(heart)- and here he goes again. Go ahead. You always do this. Always- I suffer while you get angry at everyone outside. Go ahead..let's see how long you keep at it.

One look by her and you'll melt. What's the point of this pretencE?

Curtain on Maan's face

Maan(heart)- Omg...Gaya..aaj toh nakool gaya...

MAan(brain)-😡NAKOOOOL!!!!

MAan(brain)- NO CURTAINS In this HOUSE!!

At the signal

Maan(brain)- If u stop shedding your tears, I can remove this weird-blinding-me shades..Geet dekhegi toh kya bol-...

Maan(heart)-...Geet nahi dekhegi..Geet is not with us remember. Alone again. Dead after living life for some moments.. And I can't stop crying. Your eyes, control them.

Maan(brain)- Stopped working..

Maan(heart)- kya hua brainy?

Maan(brain)- I think she's here..behind those flowers

MAan(heart)- We see her everywhere- in the mirror, in the water, behind the curtains, on the bed- and now at traffic signal too.. Stop it. You're going mad with your stalker plans. It's painful enough. She's gone.

She said she can live without me

Maan(brain)- Flowers..I hate them I HATE them...and those emotions that make me weak

Maan at office

Maan(brain)- please..aaj sasha na ho..I can't bear to see her..

Maan(heart)- yeh sahi hai.. ab bhugto..

MAan- Adi.Sasha come inside

Maan(brain)- walk without making eye-contact..walk away from her...

Adi- Sir woh Geet wala...

MAan(brain)- MArwayega yeh..

MAan(heart)- chup oyee adi..tujhe humare DOSTANA ki kasam!!

MAan(brain)- where is the FILE???

Sasha says stuff

Maan(brain)_ TALK TO THE hand!!!

go from here now!

MAan(heart)- Brainy..I love you for that...I know it would make Geet happy

Adi- Sir..this is the file..the detective sent today

And Adi holds on to the file, and Maan holding on from the other side

Maan(heart)-😳 abhi nahi Adi..It's not the time..Jao yahan se na..I need to stalk

MAan sees Geet's pic

MAan(heart)- main sadke jaawan..kinni soni lagdi hai...

MAan(brain)- SNAP out of the lover boy mode..and let's do some stalking if we have to see her again.

Maan(heart) -you're going to go to the paint company?

Maan(brain)- Nope hearty..I'm going to BUY that company..

Maan(heart)- MY Geet will love that..not right now..but later..as a wedding gift perhaps...

Brainy...what if we never get...

Maan(brain)- Will you chill? SHe needs me..she'll come back.

Maan(heart) -she hasn't for a week..

Brain doesn't answer

With YASH

MAan(brain)- If I had known HE is the owner.I would never have contemplated...ughh

Maan(heart)- you're getting a headache?

Maan(brain)- a massive one

Maan(heart)- I pity you..but hey..you're in stalker mode..nothing can stop you now..a headache caused by this monkey too..

(BTW GUYS_ I LOVE YASH...Just writing what maan feeling!)

Yash- Ek ladki ke pyaar mein..

Maan(heart)- Ek ladki nahi woh meri GEETH hai😡

MAan gives the cheque and walks away...

MAan(heart)- stops..

Maan(brain)- kya hua?

Maan(heart)- Tadap tadap.....Nah..MAHIIIIIIIIIIII😭 woh rahi meri zindagi...looking so beautiful....😭 kaisa raha uske bina itne din kuchh pata bhi hai usko...kya kya sahaa maine..woh ek hafta..jiska zikr koi nahi karta..

Maan(brain)-everystep you take..I'll be watching you...Oh can't you see...you belong to me..how my poor HEARTY aches..with every step you take

I won't let you go Geet..

Bas..ek baar tumhe dekh loon...

Tumhari aankhon mein woh dard..jo meri aankhon mein hai..

Geet- YAsh talk

while MAan stalks

Geet- pehle ek baar yeh galti kar chuki hoon...kisi ke kehne par bohot saare khwaab dekh chuki hoon

Maan(heart)- and she forgets about mine...what about the dreams I saw..the dreams that we saw together geet...BOLO NA!

Geet- I can do everything alone. I don't need anyone

Maan(heart) -you're not alone. Main hoon tumhare saath

Maan(brain)- yeh dekhne ke liye ki tum kitne din mere bina akeli reh paati ho

MAan(heart)- Brainy..really? we are not staying away from her. And its a second that you'll take if she looks at you with those crystal clear eyes. The truth is I can't live without her. She is living...she's breathing..and alive.

MAan(brain)- IF I'm to live. I need her with me. She's not going anywhere away from me.

Haan.

Okay guys- views please!

Love to all

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kinnika

@kinnika

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Posted: 14 years ago

that's a really nice take! :) i wish they'd show his self dialogues as heart-brain conversations in the series too.. that wud be hilarious!

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millii

@millii

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

owsem amzing i really like thets and the dailoge of brain and hearts is so gr8 thnks so much for a nice post

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Jaded

@Jaded

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Awww Geet...that was soo sooo sooo sweet🤗

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

that was simply superb

the tough of war between maan's heart n brain was beautifully described

great work👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏

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Mellowfellow

@Mellowfellow

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Geeta: muaaah munchkins...!!! Do this more often it might keep the phorum calmer!!
Btw,

Yeh ishq nahi aasan
O meri janejaan
Dil use pukare baar baar
Dimag hai dil ko thukaraye harbaar!!
Thak chuke is ladayi mein
Pata na chala kab woh saamne aayi aur phir jaan aayi aashiq mein!!

Keep it up!!

🤗

Edited by ykannan - 14 years ago

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ykannan
Geeta: muaaah munchkins...!!! Do this more often it might keep the phorum calmer!!
Btw,

Yeh ishq nahi aasan
O meri janejaan
Dil use pukare baar baar
Dimag hai dil ko thukaraye harbaar!!
Thak chuke is ladayi mein
Pata na chala kab woh saamne aayi aur phir jaan aayi aashiq mein!!

Keep it up!!

🤗

yash!!

thenks🤗

I love what u wrote!!!

lubj u..

Arre..what with writing those humungous takes..time hi nahi milta yeh likhne ka..