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@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

so beautifully written!!! i loved it!!!

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Hi,

Nice thought............
loved Maan's thought..
he was so right.....

Love
lakshmi

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Sana

@SanaH05

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

This was so melancholy!
I've never read anything so beautifully picturised EVER before..
I've read Romantic OS and Funny OS..every Genre.
But yours ..yours goes beyond anything I've ever read!

Its simply too beautiful to dscribe in words...
You've depicted Maan's pain in such a way..I actually felt it.
I picturised the whole scene..
The whole room

Maan and Daadi's convo..

and the best lines are the ending..
The Interlude..

Your too good! CV's should def read your post. Hats off!👏

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Sri

@sksg

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Loved it to the core, especially every word you made Maan utter. Kudos to your excellent OS.👏👏👏

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

very nicely written

loved the way emotions were potrayed

thanks for pm

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

wow!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...i loved the way that Maan told off Dadi...the icing on the cake is when he said that as a woman she should have supported geet and not turned her back on geet! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 im totally floored!!! loved it!!!

JAZ

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Wow, Khushi! That was brilliant OS.

I think it's one of ur best work.

Keep writing...

-Sona

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@roseinbloom

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: dee30
brilliant.👏......simply awesome lines from Maan to Dadi.........hope CVs get inspired and show something like this.......👍🏼

i thought the exact same thing! this shud defo be a part of an epi on geet :) wud be nice to hear maan say all those things to daadima..

great job on the OS!! it was beautiful and i really felt the pain and sorrow coming out of maan..if only they made him play the piano on geet...😊