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Candle of Love

I burn for you
to bring you light

i yearn for you
flame is bright

you are my air
that lights me up right

you are my lair
that i keep in sight

my purpose in life
is to be candle of love

without you the air
i only lie lifeless

no air to burn
no need to yearn
no flame to light
no home in sight

you and me
make this candle of love

burn with love
a flame from above



I wait here burning; knowing that my life is not far away. I see the moon, the stars light the night sky shining their benevolence and know that I am aflame with you in me. My existence is because you are there. My air. Without you I don't light up, i don't burn bright, i don't dance with joy and i don't shed tears of woe.

Burning in love is what i know. The only thing i have to do in my life. For that i need you. i stand alone in my faith that you will always give me strength to burn, to light the path of love.

Don't let me burn out or be blown out, don't give a strong gust or a hard shove for my soul can only take your mellow, soft billowing caress that gently sways me as i light up.

I am brightest when you are near me breathing me life. I am the strongest when you swing me in your arms. Promise me that i will remain eternal, never to die

For the flame of love that burns
is the candle of love that spurns

all the world and its glory
to burn is my destiny and love my story...


NOTE: the inspiration is from yesterday's episode when i saw her light a candle and the one that remains lighted ....like an eternal flame...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved ur candle analysis... Simply fantabulous!!! 👏👏👏

Spectacular display and command over the language and emotions 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
As usual.. u leave me speechless... Glad ur back..... Now yeh dil maange more 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤗🤗🤗🤗

As always I love you!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks rolzz...me too...

i am almost out of the loop! my comp is acting..pricey...

so borrowed my sis in law's...lappie..and..finally wrote something..

glad you like it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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vru
its simply fabulous................👍🏼
i m loving it...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res---- yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Rush is written againnnnnnnnnnn yeah yeah O!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Pu...

Ah Bri..borrowed goods...dont know..how long this tryst shall last.
but here i am for a while..

thanks elavenil...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rush--I loved it's marvelous simplicity for the burning eternal flame of love -- brilliantly put!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tum meri ma nahi ho sakti

tum meri ma nahi ho sakta ..

(takes steps backward with shaking knees and tears rolling down her eyes .. till crashes against she wall)

kyunki ... tum itna mujhe nahi rula sakti ..

awesome .. perfectly described momma...


actually .. actually .. aisa meri momma hi likh sakti hai ...🤗
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🤗🤗🤗🤗
Amazing!!!! Superb!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It send emotional waves throughout my body with tears gathering into my eyes....So beautiful!!!!
My words aren't enough to describe how I feel about this, you are a sweetheart😛

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