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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 4

"You have to have the darkness for the dawn to come"

"However long the night, the dawn will break."

Melbourne 28th July 2009,8.30 am

Maan was back to his fav joint and was making himself comfortable in his fav seat when he suddenly realized that his best friend the mirror had vanished , shocked and disappointed he looked around as if trying to seek a clarification ,when he saw the girl with the specs walk up to him

Raji- Hi I am Raji 'and you ???she asked as she seated herself on the chair opposite to his

Maan ' a little surprised 'I am Maan'

Raji ' Are u searching for something?

Maan ' 'Well there use to be this mirror here '' he said pointing to the exact spot

Raji ''Woh to maine hataa diya

Maan ' Why 'kyun

Raji ' Well kisi ko chori chori mirror ke thru dekhna 'not a gud thing to do na '.and the kisi u have been seeing for the last few weeks is my sister Geet

Maan- O 'well then let me tell u yr sister is really very beautiful

Raji ' So she is 'but she cant see'.she lost her eyesight when she was really young

Maan ' So what she can feel '..she can feel yr love and presence cant she ?

Raji-Hmmmmmm ,so friends

Maan 'Do I have a choice ,Friends then

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Singh Residence ,Melbourne, 6.30pm

Raji- Papa he is a real nice guy '.his name is Maan

Mr Singh- U 've just met him once and u are all in awe

Raji- Papa he seems to be mature and wise , overall quite an impressive guy and he has been coming to our coffee shop for weeks now , aake ussi jagah beith jaatha hai and keeps looking at Sis from the mirror , doesn't say nething at all and leaves ,Papa chance to dena banta ha na,I think he is one in a million

Geet ' Kise chance dene ki baat chal rahi hai yahaan..whose one in a million

Raji- Didi we have found a match for you , wohi coffee shop wala,Maan hai uska naam

Geet- Sab kuch jaante hue bhi kyon soch rahi hai tu yeh Sab and Papa u too falling in her trap

Mr Singh- How long will you live like this u need to move on in life 'give life itself a chance bacche ,kab tak pichlee baton ko pakad ke baithee rahegi aur if someone haath badha hi raha then why back off bacche

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The Pavilion Cafe ,Melbourne 8.30 am,29th July

Raji- Gooooooo

Maan ' Okay , listen if yr sis slaps me or something u'll pay the price

Raji ' And if she doesn't then u'll be having a ball,so goooooo

Maan very hesitantly walked upto the service counter and almost feeling him she turned arnd to face him , for a second Maan was completely blank but regaining his composure quickly enuf he said' One ''before he cud complete she continued ' Cappacino and one blueberry muffin '

Maan was taken aback and all he cud manage was 'huh'

Geet ' Don't be surprised ..u come here everyday and order this only , I hear you do this everyday

Maan ' And I See u walk back home everyday 'so was thinking if may be I cud walk u back today

Geet ' Why ? Anything Special?

Maan- Well it was yr Sister's wish 'and mine as well ..but if u don't want to ..i wont force either

Geet- Yeh Raji bhi naa 'kuch bhi kar leti and doesn't even tell and main 'I was unnecessarily trying to be rude to you

Maan- Then will I be seeing u at 5.30pm today

Geet nodded in affirmation

Maan left the coffee shop after giving Raji a Hi5 and wearing a huge smile on his face

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The Pavilion Cafe ,Melbourne 5.30 pm

Geet stood outside her shop waiting for Maan and he arrived right on time

Maan ' May I have the pleasure of escorting you back Maam

Geet gave him a warm smile

He offered her his free arm for support and she gladly snaked her arm around his arm

And thus officially began the moment that wud last for a lifetime '..

Geet ' Thankyou for giving me company

Maan ' For what 'actually I shud be thanking you for giving me this opportunity and who wudnt want to be in yr company ,Can I say something , I hope u wud'nt mind

Geet ' Kaho

Maan- U r really beautiful

Geet ' I guess khoobsoorti to dekhne waale ki ankhon mein basti hai

Maan ' U know what mera dost Rohan bolta hai ki am woeful company but still I 'll try to be genuinely interesting'.u know when I was India ' if someone told me walk a girl home 'I wud have been like main aur kisi ladki se pooncho ..are u out of yr mind '.aur idhar u must be thinking what kind of a guy I am 'aake apko dekhta rehta hoon 'but seriously mere pass apne in actions ko explain karne ka koi reason hi nahin hai

Geet ' Watch it' she stopped him with her arm outstretched in front of his chest'as a speeding car zipped by

Maan ' Holy Christ that was close ..how did u know

Geet ' Take care of yourself , be careful 'the world is in any case short on good human beings

So they continued to walk with Maan telling her about bits and pieces of his life

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Geet ' Mera ghar aagaya , raji must be back as well,Thank you once again , I really enjoyed our walk

Maan- Same here , I really do like yr company Geet , and is it possible that I walk u back tom as well

Geet- Cant say about the future can I ? Take care n Bye

Maan- Bye

With that she turned arnd and Maan as usual was left gazing '.when she suddenly turned and said 'I'll see you tom Maan'

Maan's smile grew a mile wide and he waived to Raji 'who was at the door.

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Raji ' So didi how was yr date ?

Geet- date ? he just walked me back

Raji ' Cmon di tell me na , chal chod '.tell me whats yr view on Maan?

Geet- U no the whole walk back home has filled my heart with the kind of happiness and elation I have never experienced before , something that I have no words 'to explain this feeling'might just take an entire lifetime'and today I am beginning to understand that when u r really happy tears of joy do begin to flow out '.he is truly one in a million

Raji came forward and gave her sister a warm hug 'Di am so happy for you ,Maan s just the kinda person u need n yr life'.'So when are u guys meeting next?'

Geet- 'He is walking me back home again '

Raji noticed the smile and sparkle in Geet's eyes as she said that and she was truly very happy for her sister.

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That night when Maan stood at his fav spot at his home and began to look outside. the effulgent mooncast its silvery light over the river waters giving it the look of some magical enchanted place.the water droplets continued to sparkle like diamonds...he head seen plenty of such nights before as well but today he could see the beauty they harbored ..the night sky was truly captivating ...how come he never had the eye to notice this beauty before


"The night has a thousand eyes, and the day but one;
Yet the light of the bright world dies with the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes, and the heart but one;
Yet it lights up your whole life when you are in love with someone."


😳 -Pooja

So how was it guys ...let me know whether it was gud ....bad or horrid ...and whether u'd like me to continue or not


Edited by rdfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
awesome update
loved it
cant wait for ur next update
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
it simply superbbbbbbbbbb yaar!!!!
contiune sooooon thanks for pm!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Pooja you still have to ask if we want you to continue, ofcourse we do
Thank god for Raji I don't think Maan was ever going to make a move.
The walk home was really sweet, looks like Maan, feels really comfortable around Geet and talks freely with her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww pooja awesome FF yaar 👏add me to ur PM list yaar and send next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Loved it...
Both started feelings for each other...
Waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Dunno..how I missed this FF...

Great going, Pooja!

Cant wait for the next part...

Its different but very beautiful....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Very nice FF. Next time write a very very long one please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg that was so beautiful can u plzzz added me to ur pm list
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Awesome update
Loved the sparkle between
Maan and geet
Thanks

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