#*Devil's Den#* - So close YET so far! - Page 43

@Marium .. hii 🤗

i went to a mehndi tonight 😆 start reading from page 41 to find out what hell it was 🤢🤢


@All ... i m off now 😆

good night ... good day 😆 depending on whchever hemisphere u are 😆

🤗🤗🤗

BTW Yash- I dont know what Baba Yaga is but I childrens books usually carry a lot of rhyme. And I read a lot to them (or atleast I used to, my poor twins are deprived)....I also read my daughter a lot of poetry (and I am sure she is thinking MOm! Stop!) but she seems to enjoy it 😆 A nut like me.

ohhhhhhhhhhh Marsh...u became a dazzler....🥳

Hii Goosie!!🤗 Thanks i wanted to stay up...but i got knocked out form all the drinking. I still have a severe hangover. 🤣 🤣

here is my analysis ..posted on pg 2 also..

Hello friends and viwers of geet. Yup I know u have never
seen me before atleast not with what I am gonna write but doodle is busy so I
am doing it today. Yes that does not mean that Mr.Parvez,or any one is spared I
have a huge list to talk about to each one..so without further delay lets
start.

Now since I am doing it I have a diiferent view but the
essence remains same..MAKE geet HSP a masterpiece.

So lets start with this weeks epi..or the current track..

SO here I address Swati pande, richa and all the other
writers. First of all congrats on such a good change in storyline overnight.
Hats off to u for that. But I have a
small issue here that I would like to bring to ur notice.

I don't have to tell you whats the USP of ur show..we all
know what it is. So pls keep that intact that's all I would like to say. People
who have issues about the separation of Maan and geet at the moment I would
just say one line "Distance makes the heart grow fonder". So pls just wait and
let the story take its shape. It will be for good. Don't worry we will have
them back together in some time and let them be separate they will realize what
they mean to each other, how incomplete they are without each other in their
lives. And about MU where is it..U think Maan will doubt her or u think GEET
will trust NT..oh come on we know them better.isnt it..

The writers this goes for u too..we didn't waste two months
of time building trust between these two if they cant believe each other this
much also. I would now love to see how both of them though separate never doubt
each other for a minute. OH pls if I want MUs I can watch ZEE or any other
channel. BUT I am not in for that..atleast not those clich love stories or the
typical saas bahu saga I am done with that. I had been watching all cartoons
for months before I shifted to geet. Coz geet was not a love story only, it was
much deeper than that. It was a social issue it was a eye opener to all who
thought a girl can not do anything on her own or a pregnanat lady is not
allowed to work. And here GEET stands up against the world and proves everyone
wrong.

Now and last line for the writers Please I know we have a
small (in ur lang MU in my lang distance) not for too long..i mean its ok for
two three weeks but pls not more than that.

Next dress designer..Whoever it is..Can I ask one
question..are there only two colours in GEETs wardrobe..Pink, red and if I am
not wrong one oranage and blue..Thats all..and worse they are all of the same
pattern..Excuse me..Mumbai still hasn't run out of stocks for different
designs..If Mumbai has pls try rest of the country..My fav Jalandhar or
Delhi..try that..and MSK..poor guy..only Black..i agree GC looks best in
that..but why stick to one colour..whites, blues ..we have tons of
shades..atleast try that..thanks for improving on meera and NT wardrobe
though..

Ah next on my list my fav..MR. Dhillion..Yup I know u gave u
the best Confession in tele worls till date and even keeping intact the word
SIR in geets dictionary was a success..but we needed better dialogues this
week..oh come on that was the only thing that could have kept us glued..but sad
they were not that good..pls till we have the story back on track can we have
some better dialogues..and yes when that lift was falling we had past tense for
maan ..why..pls that was misleding..take care of that..

Next is BG score..who set up that score for 14^th oct
epi when GEET is in the hospital room where maan is..can we know wht that music
was..and on Monday after geet walks out of the office why MAHIIIIIIIIII there…didn't
make sense to me..

Next on my list..MR.Parvez

Now where do I start..too many things..Ok lets start with
good things..

The epi are fine..I know its difficult with lead actors
missing audience demanding, story at a crucial stage, the things to tend to
become difficult..

And I can see that in some episodes..It was not that
great..Now u wonder why..first all thanks to ur editors…they edit it so bad
that its so obvious its been edited and second the episodes lack logic too..

How..Logic one..i mean can u think how high is third
floor..exactly the lift sequence..Ok I know u wanted to buy time there..but u
could have made that 10^th floor..coz really falling from 3^rd
floor also nothing will happen and here u tell me in a lift he is seriously
injured..I am not buying that..and sec the entry of those kids was so ODD..i
mean people running out seeings kids..from which movie did u get that..Oh come
on I live in INDIA so I know its famous in our HINDI movies..pls cut that out..

And Jay …the actor is fine but his entry was odd too..if he
is supposed to be a business man isn't he supposed to be responsible..where ws
that..Ok he is a Casanova I don't mind that..but leaving kids with geet and
going to club that was ridiculous to the core..and worst why was he limping,
the paint on him..it didn't make any sense altogether..

And I know u were shooting with Gurmeet at his house but
that doesn't mean u use orange colour on his face as blood and worst u keep
zooming on that too..wow..i mean it was supposed to be a serious scene and I was
just blank..i was like whats that..so pls next time take care..i don't want
orange blood next time..

Good things..In 14^th October epi..the taveez, the
way maan calls geet and the way geet can hear him across the city that was beautiful..Yup
that was shot well..so the only problem goes with the kids..

If I talk about scientific logics there were too many
bloopers..me will overrule that..u see I am a science student so when u
ridicule science it makes me mad..but its ok it was not tha great and all..

Now the story..

Ok since we having DEV as positive make him do something
good..u know what I am hinting at..but that does not mean he should be forgiven
or anything..he should be punished..nothing in the world can repair what he has
done..

And now its time to reveal maans past and even all sashas
game regarding the saree fiasco too..

When we are having confessions and opening of truths lets
add these two also to the list..

Last to the actors..

Drishti: Love u as
geet..i haven't watched any of ur shows before so for me this your first show
and I love it..and u make me cry too much..14^th oct that one scene
wher geet turns around at the disc when maan calls her..ahhh..that touched me..

Gurmeet: Ah maan says geet and the TRps will be on top after
a week..U can count on that..All thanks to u for creating such a madness about
maan across the globe..

Karishma: U know I love to hate NT..ah if I find her I could
slap her right across her face..

Abhinav: can we have some more expressions pls..

That's all from me..

PS: feel free to shoot me..

hi ash waht a tiimg when i am going..hehe