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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 3

The revelation of the truth -II

The trees shook with the loud rumble of thunder. "Dev'???" Maan questioned shocked beyond belief. The storm had begun bearing down upon them.

The winds were lashing out at the trees. The rain was pouring now, heavy drops of water wanting to bring down the fury of the wind with them. Thunder played its part, while the Devil was enjoying himself as the earth stood alone bearing the brunt of it. "Dev'" how could that be, Maan thought. "They have never met before. Or have they?? But how could they have met before?? Dev lived in Canada and Geet was from hosiarpur. Dev is married to Naintara. Dev is his younger brother, with whom he had grown up. Dev was someone for whom he cared deeply. Dev was someone whom he looked out for." He was confused, his mind had paralyzed in shock. Flashes of his childhood with Dev whizzed past. He couldn't understand what was happening and he desperately hoped his train of thought was wrong. He looked up at Geet trying to read her eyes, hoping that they contradicted his question.

Geet watched the different emotions play out on Maan's face. At first it was absolute shock, the look of utter disbelief that someone so close to your heart could have done something so wrong. It was then replaced by confusion. Confusion about how this could have even occurred! He seemed upset and lost. She wanted to help him but she did not know what to do to. He looked up at her, his eyes seem to be begging "Please tell me I am wrong. Please tell me this train of thought is misjudged! Please!!" She felt helpless. She could not bear to look into his eyes and say "No, you are not wrong." She knew the only way out was to escape his eyes. She looked down.


Edited by ykannan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Marsh: Just posted the first few paragraphs. Still writing.

Anj: I dont know if it will cheer you...part 4 will. Part 2 and 3 is still revelation of truth!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@All I learned how to dance Bhangra in my dance class today......i sucked! I think Maan needs give me a few lessons!!!! Maybe in the outhouse. 😉

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ ANj
no you are not at all mean. how about meano ROFL, jks apart
Sheriff was to pay respect to you and was neither metaphorical nor taunt.
I follow the rule most of the time but the day I think not to or really do not, I get caught. it's not your fault. It's my destiny that never let me violate the rule.

Meeting was truly informal and very premature at this stage, but seems promising, am keeping my finger cross, do not want to day dream or believe until I see letter in my hand. these Scientist you never know

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Posted: 14 years ago
?Hella devils:-) good morning.. To all those from t east.. Good evening to t westerners.. Hehe
@yash..😲 U didnt post t OS yet?? 😡 n where is part 3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Marsh - my battery is not low......Its just been fully charged with all the food and dancing i just did at the quitters party....and its still on. I think someone mixed something in the punch.....i'm on a new level of high!! 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maaneet Shower Scene
Geets P.O.V

Hai Babaji, I love showers. They are just so relaxing. Hot water flowing over your body. The steam obscuring your vision. You can practically feel the dirt, pain and overall burden of a horrible day wash off from you.



I peeled off my clothes and dropped them to the floor. I pulled my hair up into a messy bun and shivered as I wrapped a white, fluffy towel around myself, holding the two ends together around my chest.



My feet smacked against the tile floor as I walked. And.......what was that? Water running? But why? No one was home, they were attending the wedding of a family friend while I skipped.



There was a clear shape of a body in the shower cubicle. The stance and wideness of the body told me it was a guy. My hand wavered as I reached for the handle attached to the clear but blurred glass of the door.


I pulled the door open and saw the nicest back end of a guy ever. Water rolling down his body. He had his head tipped back and eyes closed as he faced the water. Dark hair brushed to the base of his neck. Hai Babaji.



"Itni tand kaise hogaya," he said, finally noticing the air that was rushing towards him from the now open door. He turned and met my look of shock and admiration.



It took all of my strength to pull my eyes up from his utterly perfect body to his face. His black shaggy hair was even darker from the water that sexily plastered it to his gorgeous cheekbones and elegant neck. He had a slight stubble which gave him a rugged handsome look. His lips were slightly parted, much like mine, and the water that fell down his perfectly straight nose ran over his soft pink lips making them more appealing. Water clung onto his eyelashes bringing out the golden flecks in his warm chocolate brown eyes.



This was the face of Maan Singh Khurana, my very own Greek god. Stark naked and soaking wet. Right. In. Front. Of. Me. Hai. Babaji.



My blood was pulsing and my body was reacting to his in every way possible. Head tilted up, eyes alert, lips parted, and, most shocking of all, my hand was loosening on the towel. That's just the kind of affect that he had on me everytime I'm near him, I thought as I clasped my towel harder.



I let my eyes scroll down again. Okay, so Maan's face was orgasm inducing but it was nothing to his body. I could look at his face any day, any time, but getting to see his naked body was treat that was only given to me.



Smooth neck went into his collar bone seamlessly. I'd never truly seen the beauty of broad shoulders until I'd seen his. A strong chest and lean muscled arms. His six pack was mind blowing and a few inches below, well, that was for my eyes only. Use your imagination and I guarantee you wouldn't be far off the mark or disappointed. Strong well toned legs. Hai Babaji.



"Like what you see?" he asked arrogantly and shamelessly as he looked me up and down just the way I'd just done to him.



"Nahi tho," I replied looking at his face again, while my mind replied yes.



He smirked as if he had heard my inner thoughts. And what a devilish smirk it was.



"So, uh..." I tried to start.



"Are you going to just stand there or are you going to take that towel off and join me?" he sexily asked.


"I..." My voice trailed. More than anything, I wanted to join him. "What are you doing here, Maan?" I whispered instead.



"Waiting for you of course, so you gonna join me or deprive me of your gorgeous self" he said, his words like velvet.



I chewed my lip, not wanting to answer him. He seized this opportunity.



He positioned his hand so that it was a slope for the water to run off of. He then angled it at me. Water spilled onto my towel, soaking in instantly.


I gasped out of surprise.



"Let's get you out of that wet towel," he cooed. He turned to me again and smirked as he leaned on the wall of the shower. The water was pattering a smooth sound on the tiled floor. A few steps forward and I would be with him. A place so very appealing. A nice shower and a hot man. Mmm, yes. And now that he had his face towards me, I could see that I wasn't the only one that was getting turned on. If you catch my drift.



And it was making it harder (no pun intended) for me to make him leave. Damn him. I opened my mouth to speak but my mouth was dry and the words wouldn't come.



"Itni soch kya rahi ho, akhir patni ho meri," he said naughtily.



His hand came up to undo my towel as he pulled me into the shower cubicle. I inched toward him flushed.



"I love you," I whispered.

"I love you to Jaan," he replied and then proceeded to show me just how much.

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Posted: 14 years ago
@anjana...it seems like these ppl examined KMH for awhile...and realized all the mistakes and improved them to make geet😆....and yaa im still studying ..😒u and ria are done luckiness 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye devils ! Forgot to reserve my spot in the den today. neway...here's my take.
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Just saw the epi. Not bad. CVs are still holding the storyline together and opening new opportunities.

Good continuation in the hospital scene. Geet runs towards the disappearing stretcher. Her instinct tells her its Maan. Girl,didnt anyone tell u to follow ur instincts ? Dekha mauka haath se chalaa gayaa Maan se milne ka ? At least kahani to aage badh sakti hai :-)

Geet going to the hospital after the police station was logical. She had to resolve the DNA issue. I reallly liked the professional attitude of her doctor :-) Geet realizes that nothing is worth endangering the life of her baby. Go, Geet !

Dadi is also of the same opinion...nothing is more important than her baby, Maan ! The CVs are hinting that the new Khurana baby will be well taken care of when the time arrives :-)

Doctor hands over Maan's wallet n taveez....NT takes it....Dev what happened to you ? How come u werent alert ? NT ke haath mein saump diya ?

As Dev and Dadi go to see Maan, NT bumps in to Geet. Geet is so engrossed in herself, she does not smell the fear in NT. NT covers her tracks well and drives her knife into Geet deeper. Good job, CVs. NT can be powerful only when Geet notices the taveez and snatches it from NT....quick thinking Geet. That taveez is your link back to Maan... u cant afford to lose it now.

In case Geet asks, NT quickly says that Maan sent her after Geet to convey that he did not want to meet her after the fiasco at the office. She conveys that Maan could not stand Geet any longer for the beizzatee she did of his family. These two women are poles apart in their perception of Maan. Geet, trust your instincts.

Now let's consider Geet's current situation. She has been thrown out of the mansion by Dadi. Meera had given her shelter. But after the office confrontation and Meera being a part of it, Geet cannot return to her. Maan is nowhere to be found. No Adi or Pinky to help her. So as of now Geet is homeless. Where can she go? She has to live and survive.

That's how Jay Ho and the kids enter the scene. Logical. The CVs have to do justice to Maaneet's character and keep the story going until GC can return full time. So she'll probably get a new job as a nanny to the kids. She's gotta earn a living.

Gurmeet, seeing your face again, gives me hope. Now get well soon, return as a healthy Maan and make finding Geet your mission.

I can see the misunderstanding build up as Swati said in her interview. Geet not finding Maan, Maan not coming after Geet, NT lying through her teeth....alll examples of misunderstandings...now add Jay Ho in the mix.

I'm just keeping my fingers crossed and waiting for GC to return and Maaneet to be together again. Until then I have to swallow the bitter pill of 'waiting patiently'.

GC, Drashti - Every year, I volunteer every day during Navaratri / Puja at my local temple. This is the most busiest of times and I pitch in and help any way I can. I must say, volunteering is one of the most rewarding things in life. This year, I'm offering special prayers for you two every day. Pls get well soon and return hale and hearty.

Nissar, CVs, Drashti - great job. I wasnt looking for bloopers so cant say much about it. Good job, folks, consideing your current situation. Well done !

Over n out ... now off to read everyone's analyses.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Yash .... OMG!!! I think I'm going to cry! or at least feel it. 😭
Dude this is sooo intense! My stomach is in knots!!! Release my knots... part 4!!!!

@Marsh...hello... heart pounding now ... waiting on OS Part 4 ...
Edited by sumz3 - 14 years ago

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