OS - A promise well kept - Page 7

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Helllo 🤗

Did I make it within the time limit? I hope I did, but I am guessing I didn't. Well whatever, I just made it, and I am glad about that. Here are my two cents on the beautiful piece penned down by you :)

I told you that I think the piece would be good, and you didn't let me down. It was really good, and OMG !! You wicked wicked girl, you wrote down all of that, and kept me itching for more. The CV's better show this. This is something I would always want to see in Geet, why in the world aren't you in their team? Sigh, I want this. LOL

Okay now onto more serious comments:

You captured the essence of the entire serial, and you captured Maneet for me <3. The entire new concept and angle to ' har subah tumse aur har sham tumse' was a pleasant surprise.

You could just imagine all this happening (okay not the latter part 😔 ) the little tingling sensation as soon as she see's Maan, wondering if it is actually him or her imaginations at play, Maan bickering about parties and moving to his room, and after an oh-so-lovely-moment- he in his true MSK form says those last words. Last words which killed the moment, killed the passion, yet retained the romance,. And that was so what was needed.

Linking of the entire story to previous events, the jewellery scene, the morning scene. *Sigh* You get the readers nod ! I loved it, and I want to be informed of more as and when you write :)

Loads of Love,

Arushi

PS: Should I expect this for Monday's episode?

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Dolphin has pressed the like button which means she has read the comment. I am wondering if she is going to splatter water on me? :P

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

I was going to punish you for not being on time, but after reading it, I think I melted :-P

Thanks so much dear. It is the characters, the dialogues and the set up that makes we wanna write scenes I know we won't get to see. I've written a few one shots so far....and all of them have been a figment of my imagination...no where close to what is actually shown. If you want to entertain yourself, you are more than welcome to follow the link in my signature. That's the home of all my work.

Going forward, I'll be sure to inform you of my posts :-). And last but not the least, thanks for gracing my posting and for your invaluable comment :-)

Lots of love,
~dolphin~

Ooooh, itna bhaari line. Hehe.

oh my god your writing is so good please do continue soon😊