OS - A promise well kept - Page 6

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Okay, I sneaked the link from Jake's thread, since I like to read anything good :) *Reserved*

hahaha...even before reading you know that its good? lol

Originally posted by: Jake-lover

Wow. 😲 Now, I'll be frustrated if they don't show this! 🤣

Aww...sorry but it ain't happening and you know that :-)

Originally posted by: charmed ones

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mindblowing......😳

fanstastic.......☺️

u spoling me.....😆

If you enjoy it, I shall continue to do so my child....lol

Awesome OS....👏
really loved it...😳

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Aww...sorry but it ain't happening and you know that :-)

You have no idea what I know. 🤣

Originally posted by: Jake-lover

You have no idea what I know. 🤣

Sharing is caring....so do you mind spilling it out? :-P

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Okay, I sneaked the link from Jake's thread, since I like to read anything good :) *Reserved*

Were you going to write more?

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Were you going to write more?

Helllo 🤗

Did I make it within the time limit? I hope I did, but I am guessing I didn't. Well whatever, I just made it, and I am glad about that. Here are my two cents on the beautiful piece penned down by you :)

I told you that I think the piece would be good, and you didn't let me down. It was really good, and OMG !! You wicked wicked girl, you wrote down all of that, and kept me itching for more. The CV's better show this. This is something I would always want to see in Geet, why in the world aren't you in their team? Sigh, I want this. LOL

Okay now onto more serious comments:

You captured the essence of the entire serial, and you captured Maneet for me <3. The entire new concept and angle to ' har subah tumse aur har sham tumse' was a pleasant surprise.

You could just imagine all this happening (okay not the latter part 😔 ) the little tingling sensation as soon as she see's Maan, wondering if it is actually him or her imaginations at play, Maan bickering about parties and moving to his room, and after an oh-so-lovely-moment- he in his true MSK form says those last words. Last words which killed the moment, killed the passion, yet retained the romance,. And that was so what was needed.

Linking of the entire story to previous events, the jewellery scene, the morning scene. *Sigh* You get the readers nod ! I loved it, and I want to be informed of more as and when you write :)

Loads of Love,

Arushi

PS: Should I expect this for Monday's episode?

Dolphin has pressed the like button which means she has read the comment. I am wondering if she is going to splatter water on me? :P