Devil's Den: Baby don't hurt me no more.. - Page 13

MY loves..go through my take pleej!!
posting it here too for online devils!

waise on page 1

Okay..so I will try to do stuff a bit differently today.
I'm emotional today.

Gurmeet has outdone himself...all over again.
I could IMAGINE the pain- But I FELT it today...
Thank You for giving us MAAN in all his shades and moods.

Drashti made me cry. Such beautiful and sublime expressions. Such beautifully painful eyes.
Truly..hats off

Cv's have kept us in suspense.
Given us a realistic reaction-true to both Maan and Geet ka characters


Here are a poem each from their points of view..and an elaboration of the epi from their points of view...A part of my broader symbolism.

Those three words, and she'll make me the happiest man on Earth,
Staring into her sublime eyes, filled with tears,
I marvelled that she considered me worthy enough,
I took her hands in mine...to stop them from trembling in fear

I will be there for you...did I even have to say it out loud?
And yet I did, and waited with patient love
She loves ME, And I felt so amazingly proud,
fool that I was, didn't realize I would receive such a violent shove

I let her hands slip through mine,
I am pregnant, is that what she said?
Her hands had stopped trembling, now it was my time,
I had to leave..I had to feel like I was not completely Dead

My throat crowded with tears
tears that I would never shed.
There was a loud ringing in my ears,
somewhere deep inside my hurt bled

Flashbacks started, and I felt transported in time,
all the times I had saved her, all the times she had denied
What was my fault? what was her crime?
How could I never see or hear? How could I be deaf as well as blind?

Intense pain made me cry out,
cry out in anger and suffering,
I never questioned- I never had a doubt..
that the moment of my happiness will such bad news bring

I retreated back, I could feel nothing,
I would not allow myself to look at her,
I could barely hear her over my heart's crying din,
and she- stood there..ready to suffer with me, ready to bear

My heart was killing me here, and she worried over a scratch?
If she only knew...
I went away, and closed my heart's latch,
Now no one can enter again..not even the wind that blew


MAan's agony cannot be described by me...the way he was..
FOr a second I thought he was going to JUMP....

Great shout...I was like.. A shout filled with his anger and his love, his fury and his pain..
beautifully heart wrenching

It made me uneasy and evoked a hysterical burst of laughter...being honest here

Okay..so Brilliant..

GC ko 11/10

ohh..the Maan-Chi was WOW WOW ji!


And then he broke a table too..Kinne strong hands hai MAan ji ke

Honestly, awesome intensity and err..what was that wood hitting thingy?
It looked kind of like one of the bangle-stands I have seen around...but it was awesome!!

LOVED the angry MSK back!! Aww..no no..ADI ki hassi is the best thing ever...
And what is this- my Adi wants to fall in love...PINKY!!*blush*

GEET

One moment, he held my hands in his,
I knew he would never let go,
I felt pain in that bliss,
For I knew not what he would do after that fatal blow

I told him point blank the reality of my life,
The shock and pain that passed through his eyes stopped me,
As he let go of my hands,his eyes were filled with painful strife,
I tried to tell him..I really tried to stop him...but he left my heart on the floor to bleed

Don't give up, OUR flower whispered to me,
I would never- he was too important,
The foundations of our relationship have been set finally,
And they will become stronger, as soon as I make him vent

He needs to hear me out, and I will make sure of that
I will follow him everywhere, I will love him till I live,
But he recoiled, and for the first time, drew back,
I was in shock, what was I do with all the love he had promised to give?

His hand was bleeding, but he barely listened to me,
He walked away and shut himself up again,
His hand was bleeding, why wouldn't he let me see?
He pulled back..and the rebuff made me dizzy

I held on to him, and I always will,
Till he listens to my story,
I will make sure he knows that I love him still,
make sure he knows that He is my MAan, my shining glory

Right..after that..
some general comments

Geet's pain tore me in half today...but her determination gave me hope
The trust she has in this guy..and in their love, she will NOT give up!
And THAT is why I LOVE GEET!!



Couldn't resist the symbolism of the flower-
It became THEIR flower didn't it.
MAan wasn't there with her and yet he was there...supporting her without even being there

Another one-
In the bleeding scene in office,
When Geet took Maan's hand to come back up,
it started bleeding again,
Geet hurt MAan(Haw ji!) but she is the one who will heal her also( I wish we could see a corollary to this scene!)

I AM Going to be really angry if ANYTHING happens to the baby..our little Princess..khabar daar!

And no Geet- insulting in office!

Couldn't we see the revelation of Sasha-Tasha saree fiasco too?

anyway-
Awesome epi! Outstanding expressions!

10/10

Love to all!

Blooper of the day: MSK flashbacks included Geet's imagination as well 😆😆😆

My short take posted on page 2

Mindblowin, it doesnt get better then this!

I have a huge tax deadline in a few days, so Im gonna make this short!

Was it the day of flashbacks or what, but this was necessary both needed to relive their moments and each others words.

Is MSK hurt, yes he is and rightfully so!!!

Is his reaction justified, yes it is! Infact, Im loving it that he is mad, but not saying anything to her ( he might just say the wrong things)! He will come around, but right now is not the time! By doing this, he is no whimp! Its best if left alone til one is calm!

Geet, poor soul...this gal has courage I tell u, loving every minute of it! She has found the love of her life, she knows who he is, she knows what she wants and as determined as she is, she won't let anything come between them (Even if Dev does show up, he won't be able to do a thing) So no Geet and Dev track!

Symbolic scene of the day for me, when she held on to Maan's hand and didn't fall, this just tells me, its only him for her, he has saved her all the time and he will not let her fall, no matter what! They complete each other, without each other they are nothing! NO matter happens, gussa, anger, pain, be it anything, together they will stand united! He is her strength and she is his!

Loved every bit of the episode, u know I love it how they use Martial arts here, Martial arts is not about being violent, its about self control and trust me by Maan not reacting to Geet in a harmful way, just tells me they use this concept well for this! I take kick boxing so I would know this one! 😉😉😉

My fears and dislikes, Precap, well its always misleading, but why is Geet running on the middle of the road, she falls, what if Dev comes and rescues her.

Again, Maan is goin to have a meeting, what now, is he goin to change his secretery again?

Demello's did they really leave???

Overall, I love the creatives for this climax, u see they showed us happiness and it ended in sorrow, now they will show us sorrow and then what will follow after, sirf pyar!

Originally posted by: livelygal

I kno...me getting cold feet!!!! PROTEIN SHAKE MILEGA??? me needs it!!!🤣🤣

@Anj: Nicely written! Me too love Beauty and the Beast....that's the only fairytale that i watched just abt a 100 times..when i was a kid..😆..will do it now as well.😆...love it! And i like that symbolism you stated abt the colour..I, never get any of these symbolisms..😆.....SO gr8 one there! 👏

Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!

I guess we all knew today's episode was going to be PAINFUL to watch. It was for me at least. My overall rating for today's episode is 7/10. Why only 7 you ask? I absolutely loved the first half but hated the second with just as much of an intensity.

So...lets try this in sequence:

Loved:

Loved Geet making an attempt to get Maan to listen to the full story. Also liked her transition from the heart broken reaction when Maan leaves to the strong reaction of "I will tell him the whole story" and " I will not let him walk out of my life". Wonderful acting by Drashti!

Maan's driving around in a daze after he leaves was the perfect NORMAL response. Most of us have done that at one time or the other when we are upset...at least I have...many many times. Loved that he flashed back all the way to the beginning of his interactions with Geet. Whether he likes it or not, his subconscious is already attempting to understand Geet's story and how many times she has said things that he could have also probed on.

Back at the house, the interaction in the dark room with Maan working out was painful to watch for me. I did not think I would, but I did love the fact that the screenplay had Maan not listening but hurting himself and leaving. When one is as angry and shocked as Maan is feeling, all you want to do is put time and space between you and the event before logic comes back in play. Geet wanting to talk right away is also such a NORMAL reaction too. As the person who caused the hurt, all she wants to do is fix it without waiting. Again...loved it!

Hated:

I really did not like the latter half of the episode at all. It seemed completely forced...as if the writers had to have some scenes just to show how angry Maan was feeling. I am one of those people who hate women being shown in movies/serials as weaker in any way. I understand tears and some weaknesses...but running after the guy pleading & begging is so not done. As a person who started watching Geet recently, I like this serial for very specific reasons:

1. Strong female lead character in Geet who has the character to face life with her head held high
2. Story focused on single un-wed motherhood and all the joys & sorrows that come with it
3. A strong male character in Maan who is NOT your average dude on the street who thinks women should behave a certain way
4. Story shows the male lead as someone rational and with integrity

The second half did not have any of these

Let's start with the first office sequence that had Adi & Pinky talking about how Maan had changed. This was so obviously only placed in the story so that the writers could have Maan then walk in as the ANGRY young man in complete contrast to what Adi had described.

The next sequence with Geet in Maan's office was also not needed. Again, her falling/steadying herself and Maan's bleeding hand scene was also only there to showcase Maan's ANGER. Writers, we get it! He is angry. Gurmeet is a an actor who can channel Maan's anger so believably in any/all sequences that silly cliche scenes like this are not needed.

Lastly the precap. I HATED it with an intensity. Geet is a strong character. I would have so loved for the writers show her understand that Maan is angry but also show her displaying faith that she knows he will come back to talk her when HE is ready. That would show much their relationship has grown.

Message to CVS, Nissar and the writers: Please pay attention to your story. The second half is not indicative of your potential or this serial you have created. As an example...the scene in Maan's office would have been so much more relatable & wonderful if you had shown Geet trying to explain to Maan but him asking her to leave. She should have then walked away and her voiceover should have then showed her understand Maan's pain and his need to deal with the anger first before he could be ready to listed to her truth.

@arwen:thsi is wht happened to me...I am mad..waise check FB..

@Geet.......................awesome poem girl....wow...that was really heart touching stuff...👏👏👏👏👏👏 but yaar do some symbolism na...i m sure..u must hv found a few hints..😉