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Posted: 15 years ago
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gosh!!!!! i'm soooo obsessed wid maaneet that everything around me reminds me of them. even in college i'm daydreaming about maan and geet (like a daydreaming lover). wen i'm drinking water it reminds me of maaneet, wen i'm eating it reminds of maaneet, wen i see a flower it reminds me of maaneet, everywhwere i go anywhere i look everything reminds me if maaneet maaneet maaneet and only maaneet.

yesterday my friend texted me poetry and while i was reading it maaneet came in my mind. i thought it suited maaneet's situation.i dont like poetry but now i love it
have a look

GEETS POV
1. eik chehra jo meray khawaab saja daita hay
mujhko meray he khayalon may sada daita hay
wo mera kon hay maloom nahi
laikin jab b milta hay pehlu may jaga daita hay
may jo andar say kabhi toot k bikhru
tou wo mujhay thaamnay ko haath barha daita hay
may jo tanha kabi chupkay say rona chahu
wo dil k darwazay ki zanjeer hila daita hay
us ki qurbat may hay kya baat
na jaanay ik lamhay k leay saddion ko bhula daita hay

2. usay khud say duur karna chaha tou kis kdder duur kiya faraz
wo shakhs dil say nikal kar meri rooh may ja basa
(faraz is poets name)

doesn't it feels like it was meant for geets situation?
tell me how u like it.

if u agree or don't agree feel free to tell. 😃
❤️ Noor
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Posted: 15 years ago
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us ki qurbat may hay kya baat
na jaanay ik lamhay k liye saddion ko bhula daita
hay

beautiful poetry....❤️❤️
shuaqar hai koi aur bhi mila jo poetry ka connection maaneet se jorta hai 🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago
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noor ..well we love them sooo much that we are always in thought of them..but odnt make them to such an extent..that we forget our life's work and all..hope u got it..no advise yaar..just thought...

me tooooooo realy mad of them....they are so addictive!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hei, Noor it's not only your situation dear,
Believe me I found it so difficult to concentrate on my work, imagine me being an interior designer always thinking of Maan's office, out house and Mansion😆😆😆
I found that sometimes I neglect the proper attention to my daughter too,😳 my husband also wonders what I am upto at midnight with my lappie😆😆😆 does this sound well?😕
I loved the poetic part, it's way too beautiful dear, I ain't so good at Hindhi, so cannot write a reply to that in Maan's POV😉
Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Maan POV :
kash main teray haseen hath ka kangan hota

tu baray piyar say chao say baray maan kay sath

apni nazuk see kalaee main charhaty mujh ko

aor betaby say furqat kay khiza lamhon main

tu kisee soch main doby jo ghumaty mujh ko

main teray hath ki khushbu say mehak sa jata

jab kabhi mood main akar mujhay chuma karty

teray honton ki main hiddat say dehak sa jata

rat ko jab bhi tu nindh kay safar pay jaty

marmarin hath ka eik takiya banaya karty

main teray kan say lag kar kaii batain karta

tery zulfon ko teray gal ko chumaa karta

mujh ko betab sa rakhta tery chahat ka nasha

main tery roh kay gulshan main mehakta rehta

main teray jism kay angan main khanakta rehta

kuch nahin tu yehi be-naam sa bandhan hota

kash main teray hansee hath ka kangan hota




Maan ke POV se mujhe hamesa wasi shah ki poetry he yad ati hai 😃😳
maan ki harkaten aur wasi ki poetry dono pe face red ☺️☺️☺️
🤣🤣🤣

Edited by nigii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its sooo luvly poem both for geet's and maan's

and its not only happenin to u.......all of us goin thru the same 😉
maaneet is lyk a drug for us
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Noor i completely agree wid u nd dis Poem totally suits to Geet. nd me to r so much obsessed wid Maaneet dat during my exams also inspite of answers Maaneet came in my mind. really yaar Obsession ki hadd hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Noor dear, v all r vd u......v are affected and cant do anythng proper and right.........loved d poem.........it fits geet's situation and how she feels for maan.........even for maan's situation d poem is superb.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@nigii loved the poetry. @rosette80 thanx
@amrita2010 hmmm so u r a interior designer. will u do my room?
thanx and no prob. cause i'm als not thwt good at urdu
@Aabrayy thanx. u r rite they soooooooooo addictive.
@.sireesha. thanx dear
@maanmeet1 thanx alot.
thanx alot guyz for liking it 😃
love u
Edited by NoorFatima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow! Am not amazed at all by your smitten feelings and thoughts. Am sure we all maaneetains felt like dat a long while back or still do. Wel I assume so anyway, As i was, but am ok now and recuperating..........lol.........maaneet are so magical........dat u feel da connection instantly.........am totally enamored by maaneet tooo......so jus enjoy dis beautiful feeling whilst it lasts lol😆

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