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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: geet.a

"I loved that he hugged her...in the process( i know I'm looking too deep) but he marked her..with his blood..on her arm..linking back to the HP incident..

GEEET (Maan ishtyle 😆) :...I love the way you write your analysis..Short and straight to the point!!..👏👏👏..Nicely put together......and the point i highlighted above...i saw those blood stains on her arms too..and i was thinking...what can it symbolise..and voila'...you just gave me the answer...😉...Whether you're looking deep into it or not..it doesn't matter..coz as long as you start finding for symbolisms..you are ALREADY looking deep into things! 😆...BUT like what you said!...Smth diff, this marked one..

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Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#242

Did any1 notice, that There was no blood on maan's palm when he was dhobi-pachading the gunda's...
Also after the first shot y din't channi's bro fire again??? he just let maneet run off...

Edited by swatichowdhury - 15 years ago

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#243

AN loved the poem..each word of it.it was so beautiful..

sorry for the crappy lines people..

before u hit me i run,

u all have fun,

but dont be up and rwait for the sun,

sleep or in office tom have a bun..

sorry aur kuch jaa nahi raha tha.

le ab jab geet waale poora gaana uda sakte hai toh maine toh sirf ek line maari hai..hehe

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: mchopra

vini: who care she can keep him forver but dare she harms geet..i will kiill her with bare hands punjaban hoon..darti nahi hoon..

sorry that sounds cliched i know but when it comes to her..i go a bit too much..

It's okay...sometimes we'll go filmy in some way or another.......😆😆😆....

I think in the future..she'll try to get Geet's baby in the process harming Geet..?......but lets nt think abt that..just yet...😆😆...

and great verses girl!! 👏

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cacoethes

@cacoethes

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: an12345678
This is for Golden Clouds, Miss Dazzling, and Jev😆😆😆

The lass lost her key for ever, and the man gave his key to her without a word. He gave her the right to own everything that belonged to him, including his soul. He led and she followed. If she had led, he would have followed. The walls and roof do not make a home, but it's the smiles, laughter, tears, sorrow, routine, and importantly love that bring to life a home. When the man led her to their home, he promised a life full of love and the lass knew he is completely committed to her.

Hold my hand for a moment,

I'll lead you to a home,

Coloured in the same old paint,

But, where you can fearlessly roam.

I may not promise a tearless life,

But, trust me when I say,

Tears will not flow coz of strife,

Love will never wither come what may.

Follow me and I'll follow you,

Let there be no Ifs and Buts,

As we step together in our home new,

Which welcomes without a speck of past dust.
..............................

Daaakuuuuuuu 🤗 🤗 🤗 this was beautiful........a MASTERPIECE! i am saving this😳 WOWWWW.......i am out of words for compliments😳😆😆 truly a very beautiful piece of writing👏👏👏

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#246

swati it was there..his palm was red..i saw the epi twice..fully scene b scene..

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#247

Thnaks VINI..

now me pakka go..bye see ya all tom..

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starlite7

@starlite7

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#248

@shonuu - OOYYEE Shonuu 🤣- pehle take mein he maar dala 🤣... can't imagine wot the rest of it will be like 🤣🤣 Your text in blue .... HOWLARIOUS !!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Gosh... have to stop 🤣 so i can read the rest ...🤣🤣🤣

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: swatichowdhury
Did any1 notice, that There was no blood on maan's palm when he was dhobi-pachading the gunda's...
Also after the first shot y din't channi's bro fire again??? he just let maneet run off...

@Bold: EXACTLY!! Not that i want Maan to get shot....BUT isn't that the right thing to do..??? If you're so hell bent on killing someone..you would run after them..and keep on firing despite them trying to run away......but this fellow was just looking at them run away..and screaming..

Then again...didn't Maan take out the bullets from the gun..? 😆..so maybe that's why chaani bro cudn't shoot then..😆