#*Devil's Den#* Lets Be FRIENDS! [Index at Bottom] - Page 24

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jyoti06 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Polki and Ash:Thanks for the compliments..I used to write FFs long back😆😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Jyo - u dont need to really write dialogues to convice me....... i am convinced that the scene cud hv been executed in a better way.......... am still not disappointed with the way the scene went..... JA scene, dargah scene n all hv been very very good.... n hence we all keep expecting top notch things..... i'm still happy with this scene....only thing i din like at all was the word bechari.... it was absolutely not needed..... also the hand shake was not needed...
BTW awesome dailogues.... u shud b a script writer.....
Edited by deniac - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yello all,

Today is the last day of freedom(officially) before the madness starts (school😆😆😆) tomorrow. So I thought, why not rant an little bit about today's episode and torture u guys😆😆😆

Today's Epi - I am having mixed feelings about it. 😕 On one side I am happy about the progressing storyline, heaps of symbolism and the anticipation on Maan getting to know geet's past. On the other side I am NOT happy about the presentation.. Tonnes of cliched scenes(My POV).. Some maybe required. But Cvs could have easily substituted many..

The scene that stood out for me was geet's reunion with her siblings.. Very touchy.. Well enacted by all👏 When geet was looking around for rest of her dysfunctional phamily, Maan fathomed it... Telepathic CONection again! I don't want to describe more on this scene to blemish the beauty of it.😊

Maan letting geet decide on their relationship - this is something I wanna see in a relationship, even though Maan was trying out reverse psychology. I liked the little slip of tongue Maan had on him altered by geet's presence. And yeah there was CONsoling as well from the CON tower today😆..


Few of the comic scenes between Maan and geet in the car and the tabela looked forced. YESS, our very own Chillaaying Aatmaas are back MAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII..😡.😆😆😆 They got Channi's bro as a substitute for my Brijjy?😡 But hey, the talwars are back😆😆😆 Some reason to rejoice!!!!😆

The BG score in the precap(Before Maan's entry in the precap) was PHUNNY.. Wasn't that supposed to be a serious scene?😆Over all, I feel that the CVs tried to intermix scenes for the Masses and Classes today😆😆

After watchin' Today's episode --> from Maan to Geet--> I'll Always Be Right There ( Bryan Adams)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9Cq-BM9EHw

I swear to you-I will always be there for you-there's nothin' i won't do
I promise you - all my life i will live for you-
We will make it through forever-we will be together-you and me.

Oh n' when i hold ya-nothin' can compare
With all of my heart- ya know i'll always be-right there

I believe in US- nothin' else could ever mean so much
-you're the one i trust our time has come-
We're not two people-now-we are one-
Yeah- you're second to none forever-we will be

Together-a family
The more i get to know ya- nothin' can compare
With all of my heart- ya know i'll always be- right there

Forever- we will be together-just you and me
The more I get to know ya- the more i really care
With all of my heart- ya know i'll always be...
And ya know i really lave ya- nothin' can compare
For all of my life- ya know i'll always be-
Right there


--Rosh


Edited by campbellii - 15 years ago
mchopra thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry ashi..hang on..just a sec i need to serach in that document..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

@Polki and Ash:Thanks for the compliments..I used to write FFs long back😆😳

I never read ur ff's but was always regular with ur adda annex, on Pyar ka bandha😳, they were like this for me🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fairyashi

I do think same and doodle also should be there with CV's then our Geet will be flawless Clap wesy bhi they are inspired by den!⭐️

Sometimes I feel this Den is running the show😆😉
@Tanu,Bri,Shreya and Gouri:I loved the fact that they showed friendship between Maneet today..it was extremely important in this scenario to take their relationship one step ahead towards our Parineeta theoryEmbarrassed...Like I said they r in the third phase of their love story ..this phase deals with trust ,understanding and emotional bonding..so in short the phase deals with friendship too and this was needed to b shown...I also don't mind the use of "Dosti" word but in a different context as in where even the "Dosti" word raises few questions in our mind without sounding cliched(read my dialgoue u will understand)...Thats why I said I m not too happy with its execution ..thats the reason I wrote how I want it to b executed without sounding clichedEmbarrassed
Edited by jyoti06 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

They should stop having conversation inside the car, especially faking the driving part. May be the scene would have come out better if they had the friendship talk outside on a bench or while walking.

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Posted: 15 years ago

ashu wht u watched PKB i thought it was only me and JO who used to go through that torture..hehe

ashi there comes ur lines in next post found them..
warning; not at all related to show ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Y today all were discussing tabela scene by Jo😕, what u had predicted Jyoti thr?😳
I think i missed it😔
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: remosalsa

I never read ur ff's but was always regular with ur adda annex, on Pyar ka bandha😳, they were like this for me🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ya I never forget to add that humour element in my write-ups😆😆..but I hope u ROFLED because they were funny and not bad😕😆

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