Invisible Bonds-Short Story(Complete) - Page 7

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

Hi Opti

I read all the parts in one go and am speechless. I have so much to say but do not know how to express it in order to do justice to your writing. I am going to try though 😆

I love this piece - so eloquent and moving. 😭 ...... it brought tears to my eyes. It is all the more impactful because you stated that you had read a story in Reader's Digest about this.

What a beautiful love story and the best part is that love triumphed in the end. 😳

Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful writing.
Jhan

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

You've described love perfectly in this SS.

The purity, depth and sincerity of love between the couple is fully captured in your writing.
I cannot express the plethora of emotions I'm feeling knowing that such a couple exists in today's world.

It's a breath of fresh air in this polluted world.

I mean the "conventional" love that we encounter on a daily basis can be so frivolous at times, only focusing on the romance and the physical appearance of the couple rather than the deep understanding, commitment and self-lessness that love is.

This SS is superb. You're truly gifted to be able to write so impeccably well.

Thank you for sharing this. I feel honoured to have come across this by chance.

Please do P.M. me whenever you decide to share such gems on the forum 😃

Originally posted by: Opti

Yes, such selfless love does exist in real world although not many may be lucky to find it. Thanks for the wonderful compliments you have paid me. It has been my privilege repackaging here my earlier creation.

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

And it's been a privelege to have read this 😃

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb!

i had tears in my eyes by the end of the story!...

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Fab man the stry jus left me speechless

Maan n Geet's love for each other was out of this world

I lost his sight toh other lost her beauty for each other

This love was really true love

Originally posted by: JhankaaR000

As LOVELY as always.....

BTW, is it actually a true story, as you said you are inspired from RD, which generally publishes true story...


With Luv,
Jhankaar