Maan pulls aside Geet in HP and then..note-pg 14 - Page 4

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....when she hears the sounds of water running in the shower.....
Geet busies herself getting her things ready when she is conscious of the sound of the shower stopping..
Maan walks out of the bathroom, his hair wet and spiky..thier eyes meet, hold and slip away..both rushing into action...
Geet...jaldi jakar tayyar ho jao nahin to humein der ho jayegi...mujhe jald se jald ye Rasika ka mamla nipta kar yahan se nikal jaan hain..main nahin chahta ki tum yahan zyada samay bitao..
Haan bas main jaa hi rahi thi...aap nikle tab na jaongi...geet replies with a touch of spirit.
Geet...
Jaa rahi hun..jaa rahi hun
While Geet is in the bath room, Maan is busy on the phone...talks to Adi...giving him some work to get on to right away, getting in touch with the authorities to prove that he is here and trying to set up a meeting with them and Rasika Rathod...
It is while he is talking away that Geet emerges from the bathroom and sees him in action, pacing away..barking orders left and right....and thinks...
lagta hain aaj dusht danav pure form main hain.....
Maan turns around and just freezes mid sentence when he sees Geet and is mesmerised by her beauty and smile...
there is a loud squawk from the phone and Maan blinks and reapplies himself to the phonecall, still unable to look away from Geet for long.
He ends the call and after a long moment swallows and asks Geet if she was ready...Challein?...
Haan Maan, mera matlab hain Maan sir (main kyun baar baarunhe sirf unkenaam se e pukar deti hun?....)
Geet tumhein mujhe Sir kehne ki koi zarrorat nahin...tum mujhe sirf Maan keh sakti ho....
comes extremely close and looks into her eyes...when she looks away in shyness, puts a finger under her chin and making her look at him...
.....waise to jayeaz hain geet....
...kya maa...maan sir...
...ke tum mujhe sirf Maan bulao...
..Kyun..?...
suddenly breaking into a most mesmerising mischievous smile...
Geet sucks in a breath at the sight...
...arre baba hakk banta hain..
..hakk??..
....Haan Geet dekho pehle to tum meri mangetar thi..hain na...
Geet opening and closing her mouth like a fish..
..haan.... jhoot mooth ki..
Geet shuts her mouth with a snap
...par ab...
..ab..
...ab to tum meri patni ho....
looks at her lovingly..speaking in a low voice, coming very close, going and standing beside her and very softly in her ear...Mrs Maan Singh Khurana...
...hain na? ...the most faintest whisper.....
look into each other eyes and ...mahiiiiiiiii (couldnt resist that...)
Geet starts and moves away... about to open her mouth and fire away.. when Maan suddenly smirks again and says....haan.... jhootmooth ki....
Kyun Geet?
Geet just fumes and goes to open the door , all ready to stomp out , when Maan puts his arm in front of her and stops her...
Tum kuch bhul rahi ho Geet.
Comes in between her and the door...his hands lift towards her...Geet gives him her best deer stuck in the headlights look....
He comes closer and lifts one edge of her dupatta and brings it over her head, like a ghunghat, adjusts it around her...and then with a very satisfied expression...ab theek hain...chalo..
He then opens the door, takes Geet's unresisting hand and pulls her out of the room into the warm sunshine out.
He asks her to wait a minute and goes in to return the keys and pay for last nights food.
The clerk opens his mouth to make a remark...sees Maan's forbidding expression and just subsides back.
Maan comes out and notices that Geet is no longer where he had left her..Swaering under his braeth, Maan quickly walks down into the courtyard and starts looking around for her...while looking around the front and then taking the stairs to go back into the hotel, two at a time,
Maan dashes into none other than geet who was coming down them...
Maan holds Geets shoulders in a biting grip and shakes her, Tum kahan chali gayi thi..pata hain mere man main kaise kaise darr ghum rahe the...main soch raha tha ki tumhein koi.....
he pulls her into his arms and holds her tight....mujhe aise chodkar kahin mat jaana tum...
even more softly....
..main seh nahi paonga..
For a second Geet too hugs him back...main yahin hoon...main kahin nahin gayi...
both break apart...
Maan in a tougher tone....yahan par main jo kahunga , tum bilkul wahi karongi..samjhi?
at Geet's nod, he takes her hand is about to yank her behind him again, when he notices his surroundings...
Geet tumhe yaad hain...hum yahan pehle bhi ek baar mil chuke hain.. hain na..
Jee... tab aapne mujhe ek sikh di thi ..jisne meri badi himmat baayi aur mijhe samjhaya ki aasoovon se kuch nahi hota , humein apna khayal khud rakhna chahiye...
Haan tab maine tumse bade gusse se baat ki thi naa...
Still holding her hand , walks down the steps..Geet following him compliantly....turns to her..
Par Geet tab tum yahan kya kar rahi thi.?..tum yahan kaise?..
Geet shell shocked and mute..
She didnt know what to say...
Geet bolo naa...kya hua.....Geeet!!
just then his phone goes off and Maan picks up the call in exasperation..
On hearing what the caller had to say...Maan's face got darker than a thundercloud's...
Theek hain hum abhi pahunch rahe hain...
shuts his phone with a snap..
Chalo Geet... takes her by the hand and seats her in the car....
apna seatbelt bandh lo...humein Miss Rasika Rathod se milne jaana hain....
Maan had a very cold smile on his face as he swung out of the parking lot...and passed a lady walking in...
....Usse pata nahin ke usne mujhse ulajkar kitni badi galti ki hai....
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so far so good??
Edited by mandu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG !! OMG !! I Love u Sooo much 🤗 Gona Read it now 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

OMG !! OMG !! I Love u Sooo much 🤗 Gona Read it now 😃

Thanks for the sentiment...and you are most welcome...waise I better go to sleep now...it is 4 15 in the morning yahan par ...I hope I get to sleep in...😆
ye maan aur geet ne meri neend haram kar di hain...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG loved it 👏 Esp how he refers her as Mrs Maan Singh Khurana 😉 Loved it Ayeeeeeeeeeeee Sapna Poora Ho gaya Mera 🤣 n Awwwwwwwwhe was so Concerened when he didnt seee her n he said
Maan holds Geets shoulders in a biting grip and shakes her, Tum kahan chali gayi thi..pata hain mere man main kaise kaise darr ghum rahe the...main soch raha tha ki tumhein koi.....
he pulls her into his arms and holds her tight....mujhe aise chodkar kahin mat jaana tum...
even more softly....
..main seh nahi paonga.. Awwww loved it 👏
OMG update again now 🤣 Cant Wait to knw Wah Happened n wah he is gona do to Rasika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandu

Thanks for the sentiment...and you are most welcome...waise I better go to sleep now...it is 4 15 in the morning yahan par ...I hope I get to sleep in...😆

ye maan aur geet ne meri neend haram kar di hain...

its 1:15 in the afternoon here n i didnt even sleep 🤣 haila u off to sleeep 😲 no more uopdates 😔 anywyz PM or Scrap me when u Update 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

WOOOOOW I love LONG updates 🤗 Loved it !! this Was Amazin !! i felt So BAd for Geet afta readin this Chap i feel like Killin tht Dev 😡 😔 Poor Gal Trusted him n he cheated on her 😔

Loved this line
starts towards the room, but then decides to give Geet some time alone and decides to wait till the food arrives and then go in. Loved how he cares so much abt her n he knew she wants to spent some tyme alone! Awwww Maaaan Cares so much abt her ❤️
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n thn
She remembers Dev's betrayal, how he had taken her innocence in this very guest house, even though he knew that he would be abandoning her the very next day after he had taken all the money ...he didnt care what happened to her later, he had just wanted to use her , which he did without compunction. My Hateness for Dev Rised More here 😡 I wish she neva Forgives tht Evil bas***d 😡
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and Thn Loved how she compared Dev n Maan !!
God Love Maneeet n Loved LOved LOVED LOVED this Chapter !
Please ! please Update Sooon 😊

That is precisely the way I see Dev...however much they try to make you feel sorry for him by showing NT to be such a psychotic B....h...the fact is ..it was Dev who used both Geet and NT..he seems to have no moral conscience at all...
and Maan ...what do i say but DREAMYYYYYYY
Edited by mandu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey , nice, do continue and plz add me into ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandu

That is precisely the way I see Dev...however much they try to make you feel sorry for him by showing NT to be such a psychotic B....h...the fact is ..it was Dev who used both Geet and NT..he seems to have no moral conscience at all...

and Maan ...what do i say but DREAMYYYYYYY

I knw I also Feel Bad for him when NT Treats him like tht buh he deserves it ! n ya he actually used both of thm ! as NT asked him to marry her n leave her ! buh she neva Asked him to sleeep wid her Angry he is sucha sicko🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow....this is fabulous....the wife part was funny....Mrs Maan Singh Khurana....Lolz.....thanks....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part.loved it.
maan teasing geet as maan singh khurana😍
he is caring about geet.
continue soon.

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