SS Pee loon... Part 2 Page 2 aug 27 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey its really nice... do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well hellooo there welcome back to my SS(short story) just in case someone didn't no what it stand for' coz I still have no clue what OS stands for lolzzzzzz' I feel dumb lolzz its okay' I m know to be the slow one hehehe J soo here goes the second update and binu don't come after me with your belan stay few feets away from me thnx J ("I have a rep to protect here honey") hehehehehe'.

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Maan grabs Geet's hand takes her to where Dadima is standing and they both bend down to take her aashirwad.

Daadima: "Maan you have made me the happiest person today, I am tension free now. I know my Geet will take care of you, she can talk back at you when you are wrong, she is not afraid to tell you that you are wrong." "Beta that's what love is when the other person is not afraid to tell you that you are wrong."

While daadima was saying all these things, there stand Maaneet looking at each other and thinking that is soo true I love her/him just the way daadima explained.

Daadima: goes on talking about how she wants the wedding to be as soon as possible. She can't wait anymore what if Maaneet decides to change their decision. Daadima goes to her room to let her family and friends know about the good news.

Geet tells Maan that she will go to the outhouse. Maan just nods.

Maan is in his room sitting on his bed thinking about everything that took place. He cannot believe that he will be getting married to Geet. There is a part of him which is thinking if he is doing the right thing or not. Maan's phone starts ringing and he takes his phone out to look who is calling and it was Daadima.

Maan: "Ji Daadima"

Daadima: "kya aap mere room aa sakte hai Maan I have to give you this important."

Maan : "ji daadima"

Maan goes to Daadima's room and sees that daadima has all these jewelry and sarees what on her bed.

Maan: "Daadima yeh sab"

Daadima: " yeh sab humrahi bahu ke liye hai. Is me se koun sa color suit karega Geet ko?"

Maan sees this white saree and he can imagine Geet in that white soft and simple saree on her making her look like a hur pari. Daadima looks at the saree that Maan picked she thought "yeh toh hum ne bhi yahi choose ki thi Geet ke liye."

Daadima: "Maan yeh saree aur zaverat Geet to de dena she has to wear this tom, since we are having a pooja and your engagement tom morning."

Maan: "engagement daadima?"

Daadima: "haan kyun aap ko engagement nai karni?"

Maan: "nahi nothing like that Daadima."

Daadima: "theek hai toh go give this to Geet' aur haan don't stay there ;) "

Maan: "Daadima''.."

Maan goes to the outhouse and just when he enters Geet's room he sees that Geet is wearing her white night suit and trying to dry her hair. Maan goes close to Geet and in no time he is standing right behind Geet. Geet turns and she has her hair on her face a little bit when Maan sees that he is just drooling over her goes close to her if that was even possible and removes her hair and touches her face ever so softly and soon he was just started kissing her forehead, her both eyes, and than her cheeks, than her chin and than Geet and Maan both don't take it anymore their lips met and it seemed like their lips found what they were searching for, for the longest time ever. While all this Maan dropped the saree and jewelry that he got for her.

Precap: Maan and Geet exchanging rings'!!!

PS: sorry guys if my updates are not upto your standards and if my hindi is not perfect I have hard time writing it sometimes.

PPS: next update might be up tonight maybe!!! And I would like to dedicate this update TO EVERY SINGLE PERSON WHO READ MY SS

Thank you soo much for reading... 😊

Edited by nir_jaanu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Woow realy lovet wating for ur next update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kya niru.. again u gave such a short update.. very bad.. lol.. but gotta admit that was awesome as usual.. man we can onl imagine maneet making out in FF's.. LMAO.. we have become soo besharam i tell ya.. and yeah u better update fast..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsum!!!

maan loosing control...m luving iT!!!


update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW...THIS IS WONDERFUL YAAR...WHAT IS UR NAME
I AM SHAILA....

I am too excited for the next update
please update soon and thanks

PS; You didnt know what does OS stand for right?
OS = One Shot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I'm very happy to see you dedicated to all of us 😃

Undoubtedly I loved this update...sorry I couldn't read/comment sooner...

Maaneet engagement? Can't wait...
Maan will be mesmerised when he'll see Geet in her white sari 😆

He has little control as it is... especially when Geet's hair's wet 😉 😳

Thanks for the P.M. and keep updating ⭐️

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiee... nicely written ya... well d precap mentioned dat--- Maan & Geet praying for each other... when is dat happening??? nex part...
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Marking this as discontinued in the Geet Media Centre ... if you decide to re-start then please drop me a PM.😊

Geet Dev. Team.

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