SS Pee loon... Part 2 Page 2 aug 27

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Hello everyone, I writing an FF after such a long time soo if its not upto your standards I apologizes already. This FF is inspired by one song that is very close to me, (Pee loon from Once Upon A Time in Mumbai) This FF is not going to be that long since college starts this coming Monday and I cannot have any kind of distractions anymore'. Soo less talking and I should start with part 1 rite? Lolzz'. Okkk here it goes'

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Starts from where Geet reads Pari's letter and Maan calls Geet's name.
Maan: "GEET"
Geet thinking to herself "geet you have to stop this, whenever he says your name your heart stops beating this is not the path you want follow."
Geet is just standing not taking steps backwards but for the first time she was walking towards where Maan was waiting for her in the middle of the room. Maan has this weird experisson on his face that you cannot even read what he is thinking about or what he wants to talk to Geet about.
Maan sees from far that Geet is holding a piece of paper that she is trying her hardest to hide, but Maan being Maan touches are arm ever so slightly and makes Geet forget whatever control she had in herself. After reading the letter that Pari left Geet, Maan torn the paper into pieces he was just staring at her trying to look for answers in her innocent eyes. And Geet was standing there just looking at the face that made her forget everything, those meaningful eyes which expressed more than words or a book could tell. After what seemed like hours and hours Geet finally composed herself and she tries to go away from there, just when she was about to leave Maan holds are aachal and pulls her towards him, she comes crumbling in his arms.
This time Maan is not going to let her go that easily, he holds are soo tightly, just when Geet thought there couldn't be anything else that could go wrong music starts. Maan started slow dancing with Geet, he is holding her by her waist while Geet has her arms around his neck. It was like they hold are letting their grove and music tell one another how much they mean to each other. By the time the song came to an end they both were holding each other very close, their lips were so close to each other, they could feel their warm breath, they could feel their heart beating really fast. And that's when their lips met their soul-mate. The kiss was so gentle, the kissed expressed nothing more than their pure love for each other.
Just when they both were lost in each other Dadi comes in and finds them kissing each other.
Dadi: "hmmmm"
Maaneet were so lost in each other that they couldn't hear anything besides their heartbeat.
Dadi: "cough" "Maan"
Maan finally came to sense it was Geet who was having hard time. Maan and Geet both looked together where Dadi was standing. Maan started blushing, while Geet looked a little lost, yet blushing while looking at the floor and nothing beyond that.
Dadi: "So should I take this as Geet is my would-be bahu?"
When Geet heard that she was shocked yet it felt perfect weirdly she thought.
Maan: "Haan Dadi, Geet is the one who I am going to marry no matter what anyone thinks"
Dadi was a bit confused when Maan said that, but she was too excited to yet that confusion over come her happiness.
Dadi: "Maan I am so proud of you, and so very happy with the fact that you have chosen the girl that I wanted you to be with."
Maan grabs Geet's hand takes her to where Dadima is standing and they both bend down to take her aashirwad.


Precap: Geet and Maan standing at a mandir praying for each other.


let me know if you guys like it or not

Edited by nir_jaanu - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg like it?
I utterly loved it....omg!!!!!!
please add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luv it luv it luv it luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

simply awesome!!!
cant waif 4 tha nxt update!!!!!!
im sooooooooo excited
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Thank you both desigurl953, LuvRagvir, rinky70, and iqbals4ever for actually taking your time out n reading it i guess you guys are the only ones who read it :) but the next update while be specially for you guys :) it will be up either tonight or tom morning :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love it!!!!😉

Maan and Geet caught in the act 😉 😳 and that too by Daadi 😆 😆 😆

Damn it...a little too late or else I would have a part specially dedicated to me
LOL...please add me to your P.M. list if possible and update soon! 😃

Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This was so sweet and innocent. I enjoy innocence in relationships. Loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dats was superb!!!

continue soon!!!

n pm me wen u do so!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg I realy lovet plzz pm and update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome back niru! leki yeh kya! itna sa part.. bas? : (
not good yaar...i want more.. i expected a longer update from u! lol.. btw i love ur SS so far.. and plzz next update should be longer.. varna mera belan ks days se nahi nikla.. ; )
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Originally posted by: phool527

welcome back niru! leki yeh kya! itna sa part.. bas? : (
not good yaar...i want more.. i expected a longer update from u! lol.. btw i love ur SS so far.. and plzz next update should be longer.. varna mera belan ks days se nahi nikla.. ; )



Ohh... man binu you are here... so that means i m going to get hit by belan one of these days I knw it... man 😔 lolzz... just kidding WELCOME :)))))))))))) kya karu yaar i just wanted to see if people like it or not if they don't like it i didn't wanna write a long update and it goes for waste coz I haven't wrote anything in like sooo long you know that........ i stopped writing in KS like long long time ago i cannot just start it like that lolz z 😊 thank you babe 😊

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Love it!!!!😉

Maan and Geet caught in the act 😉 😳 and that too by Daadi 😆 😆 😆

Damn it...a little too late or else I would have a part specially dedicated to me
LOL...please add me to your P.M. list if possible and update soon! 😃



Thank you so much Ayesha... 😊 don't worry I will still dedicate too every one of you guys who commented on the first part promise 😊 will that make you happy lolz 😊 I don't have a P.M. list but I will pm you guys no worries 😊........

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

This was so sweet and innocent. I enjoy innocence in relationships. Loved it!



thank you soo much.... i like innocence in relationships as well I think innocence in a relationship brings favor 😊

Originally posted by: anufa

dats was superb!!!

continue soon!!!

n pm me wen u do so!!!!



thank you soo much I will pm you when I update 😊

Originally posted by: lody

Omg I realy lovet plzz pm and update soon



[B] thank you soo much I am actually going to write the next update right now...

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