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nice OS..if possible continue it ...

yaar...😊..

bore ????? u must be kidding

naddiya.... loved it.. awesome.... i know it is just an OS... bt i wanna say.. pls continue..

hiii genius....so clever of maan to make geet say she loves him....just loved it.....do write more....waiting for the next one....

awww Geet confessed .... Maan is so smart .... he made her confess.... I loved the hamen tumse song .... but the other song I had not heard before .... the lyrics went with the story and was apt .... but sorry did not like the song .... so didn't hear it fully....

I loved this OS a lot the best part of course was Geet's confession and then the feeding part was awesome

hey Nads ur writing is awesome .... and it is no where near boring ...I could not log on to my IF account .... it always gave me error.... i don't know if it is IF problem or my computer .... still it logs me off after sometime and shows error .... so that is my long story why I could not reply earlier .... I did read it at work .... but did not get time there to reply... so I hope u have forgiven me ..... and pls do continue ....

oops forgot to write about the first one dard .... wow that was really awesome .... it really was very emotional and the whole time I was reading I kept on doing self talk like Nads make Maan stop her and not let her go .... Maan is so sweet even after knowing that she is pregnant he went and stopped her awww 😳... I could see the pain in Maaneet's eyes when u were describing their dard awesome work ... keep writing 👏

Originally posted by: jamoshi2507

awww Geet confessed .... Maan is so smart .... he made her confess.... I loved the hamen tumse song .... but the other song I had not heard before .... the lyrics went with the story and was apt .... but sorry did not like the song .... so didn't hear it fully....

I loved this OS a lot the best part of course was Geet's confession and then the feeding part was awesome

hey Nads ur writing is awesome .... and it is no where near boring ...I could not log on to my IF account .... it always gave me error.... i don't know if it is IF problem or my computer .... still it logs me off after sometime and shows error .... so that is my long story why I could not reply earlier .... I did read it at work .... but did not get time there to reply... so I hope u have forgiven me ..... and pls do continue ....

oops forgot to write about the first one dard .... wow that was really
awesome .... it really was very emotional and the whole time I was
reading I kept on doing self talk like Nads make Maan stop her and not let her go .... Maan is so sweet even after knowing that she is pregnant he went and stopped her awww 😳... I could see the pain in Maaneet's eyes when u were describing their dard awesome work ... keep writing 👏

thx dear.
fro leaving comments.
that song is from a new movie. i dont know why it inspired me so i added.
no prob dear life is full of probs.

about dard .
it is very close to me . i really cried while writing that.
missed you