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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

just adding in 5 min



Waitingggggggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
after watching yesterday episode my Prediction...
WEEKEND SPECIAL




OS PYAR
Maan: when she will listen me she will always do what she will think he rush home...changed his clothes
Dadi : beta where are you going ?saw him going out of home with car Keys
Maan: to Hoshiyarpur
NT : who was drinking water drop the glass
Dadi: why ?
Maan: to bring your bahu. he walked out
DadI: why she ...Maan was not there to answer her

nt: dadi yeh veerji kaha ja raha ha
Dadi to bring y bahu.. she walked to her room
nt: did i hear correct? yeh hum pagal hogai ha... hum ko har waqat kyu Geet ka khayal aata ha.
Geet in bus MAan in car...
BACKGROUND MUSIC
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtwXToELynI[/YOUTUBE]


(listen)

Sham bhi koi jaise hai nadi
Lehar lehar jaise beh rahi hai
Maan: pagal ha yeh bilkul agar kuch hogaya iss ko ( he drive on high way)
it was getting dark
Geet: in bus i will talk to Miss RR i will ask her to take case back .he will not go in jail she grab the taveez in her hand
Koi ankahi, koi ansuni
Baat dheemi dheemi keh rahi hai
Maan: for me why she want to put her self in trouble.. pagal ha... he recollect her "Suniya"
Geet: how much he care for me Babaji un ki hafzat karna
Kahin na kahin jaagi hui hai koi aarzoo
Kahin na kahin khoye hue se hain main aur tu
Both prayed at same timeKe boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
geet open window fresh air kissed her face ..smiled i will save him
Maan open window put his hand out. to touch the breeze.. i will reach before she will get there.
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein
Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai
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Suhani suhani hai yeh kahani
Jo khamoshi sunaati hai
Maan: reached before he searched the bus stand the bus had not arrived yet
Geet: i am sure Maan ... oh Geet Maan sir will be not here....
Maan:i hope i have not missed her ...she can't take care of herself her family wild.
Geet: babji bus mujhe ko yahan koi dekha na she reached bus stop covered her face.
Jise tune chaha hoga woh tera
Mujhe woh yeh batati hai
Maan saw her coming out of bus he hide himself behind a tree as she passed him he grab here arm and pull her to him.
Geet: aap?
Maan: tumhara damagh theek ha Geet
Geet: why you came here Mein samhal leti?
Maan:chup aik dum chup drag her to car sit in
Geet: Babji phir naakh per ghusa
Maan : started car ... tell me is there any hotel.
Geet: hotel aur yahan Sir ...
Maan: what you said?stare in anger
Geet: i mean... shy Maan. but sir we are alone yahan per to dadi ya office ka staff nahi.
Maan: i like when you take my name
Geet: i am just your fake maghater.
Maan: bus tum sub kaleya to real ho na
Main magan hoon par na jaanu
Kab aane wala hai woh pal
Geet was silent she was playing with her duppata.. Maan could feel her restlessness..
Maan:Geet tumahra woh dhaba kahan ha jis ka khana 5star hotel jaisa ha
Geet: aap mujhe ko taang kar raha ha
Maan: nahi i am hungry mein lunch bhi nahi kiya ha
Geet: woh tou mein bhi nahi kaiya..rub her stomach..i am hungry too.
Jab haule haule dheere dheere
Khilega dil ka yeh kawal.Maan:smiled as he succeed to make her talk .."pagal akeli aarahi thi"
Geet: aap haas kyu raha ha.... mera mazak urarah ha
Maan:nahi tou rasta bato.
Geet :turn left...woh ha ...i will go and get.. she tried to jump out of car
Maan: grab her hand Geet you will not go out i don't want any one to see you here.
Geet: but..
Maan: placed his finger at her lips ..chup mein har baat tumhari nahi manoo ga
Maan:came back knocked at her window she got frighten..Maan noticed that
Geet open window...kya huwa
Maan:colud see pain in her eyes..what to order?
Geet: ask them to give you what all they have?
Maan Ok.. he walk back ..after 10 min he came with plates ..."it smell great"
Geet: .aap mera dil rakhna kaleya karaha ha na Maan.
Maan as she called him Maan...nahi he had a took a piece of roti and dip in Dal ..started eating hhhmmm delicious Geet really it is better than a 5 star.
Geet : stared at his face.
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Maan: Geet khao na...he was busy eating he made a nawala brought closed to her mouth but put in his.
Geet:shocked
Maan: smiled.
Geet:there is only one plate
Maan: aab to mein tumhara apna hoon tum mera jhoota khasakti ho ..
Geet open her mouth in shocked Maan placed a nawala in her mouth.
Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein
Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na

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MAan: saw her eating from his plate.. he smiled...Maan it is late we have to go Back.
Geet; stop eating you will not meet her.
Maan: MSK ka kuch asool ha Geet
Geet: mujhe ko pata ha ... she shakes her head
Maan : what you want to say.. he got angry grab her hand
Geet: try to remove his grab ..ka aap kaise kai baat nahi sunta ha..
Maan: hmmm..
Geet: leave my arm i will not run
Maan: left it aise baat nahi ha Geet..
Geet: tou kaisi Baat ha si... stopped Maan.. turn her face on other side.
Maan: what you want to say?
Geet: kabhi dosro kai baat bhi maana kara aap.
Maan: kya baat mano mein tumhari
Geet: met her finish the case or let me handle it.. beczo of me for how long you will suffer
Maan: bus Geet ab aik aur shabd nahi...
Geet: mujhe ko jana da if you can't listen me why i ?
Maan: aagra tum ghari se uthri to mein
Geet tou kya.. she try to open the door.
Maan: bend to stop her their head bang ..
Geet: ouch
Maan: shouted tum ... rub his head ... maarna ka bhoot shoq ha tum ko to jao .Mein kon hota hoon tum ko rokna wala
Geet: could feel his eyes moist ..& there was pain ,concern...love..( kyu aap mera hafazat karta ha)
geet blow her duppata cupped his face & press it on his fore head...
Maan: choro mujhe ... try to move it
Geet: kaisa chor mein aap ko....... murmur
Maan:kya.. stared in his eyes
Yeh kaisa samay hai, kaisa sama hai
Ke shaam hai pighal rahi
Geet: Magatar hoon aap ki
Maan : pagal ho ... he stared car...
Geet :aap ka leya....in her heart.
Maan: where we can spend night?
Geet: at my friend's home
Maan:agar tumharia ghar walo ko pata chal gaya tou.. i can't take risk.lets camp
Geet: that will be very safe..Made face.
Maan: it is better we go back.
Geet: stop the car at once...so you will not meet...Miss paused
Maan: he didn't stop yes i will not meet her as it is against my rule..
Geet: ok if you will not meet her i will be not your Maghatar.. she turn her face on other side
Maan: stop the car with a jerk.."Geet meri taraf dekho"
Geet looking out.... turn her back towards him
Maan: acha dekho nahi tou meri baat suno
geet placed her hand on her ears...
Maan Geet bus karo yeh natak .. he grab her hands... saw taveez ..Maan yeh tumhara paas kaha se aai ha. he took it from her
Geet: hold her lips .
Maan: excellent don't talk to me i will take you back home
Geet turn on radio
Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante
Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhare Bina.....
echo in car....
Maan :looked at her .. she try to close the radio it was stuck.
Geet : aap kai Ghaddi bhi aap ki tarah ha.
Yeh sab kuch haseen hai, sab kuch jawan hai
Hai zindagi machal rahi, jagmagati jilmilati
Tumhe Koi Aur Dekhe To Jalta Hai Dil ( maan enjoying her irritation)
Badi Mushkilo Se Phir Sambhalta Hai Dil ( Geet iss kai kaisar baqi thi)
Kya Kya Jatan Karte Hai Tumhe Kya Pata( she at last closed it uff)
Yeh Dil Bekaraar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante( maan turn it on again...)
Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina
Geet why are you teasing me Maan
Maan closed it say you will talk to me
Geet: if you will go to court then...
Maan: stop the car ... Munshiji was there he had camp a tent for them. he got out of car..." socho ga".
Geet :theek ha mein bhi aap kia Maghatar bana, or baat karna ka bara mein socho gai

(Palak palak pe khwaab hai
Sun yeh hawayein gungunaye
Jo geet lajawab hai)
she started walking towards the road
Maan; grab her duppata.. started pulling it towards he.
Geet jana da mujh ko.
Maan: pull her more close he grab her from her waist...
Geet: maan chora mujhe ko
Maan: pehla kaho tu mujhe se baat karo ga.
Geet: ha karo ga
Maan : came more close.. his breath touch her neck
Geet: chora mujhe ko
Maan: aab kaho ka tumeri Maghatar ho
Geet: ha mein aap ki maghatar hoon
Maan:he turn her around their eyes met in moonlight.
Geet: chora mujhe ko
Maan: kaho ka tum ko mujhe se pyar ha ... she was under his magical spell .
Geet : didn't heard him properly... Ha karti hoon
Maan:smiled say again..pull her more close
Geet: ha karti ho......she then realized what she had said but it was too late as she was in Maan arms he was walking towards the tent
Maan:mein bhi pyar karta hoon tum se..... i was dying to hear that Geet
Geet :woh mein
Maan:he K*** her... to stop her for telling more lies.
Geet lost in front of Maan's love..& he didn't gave her time to react
the atmosphere was calm and peaceful....Moon & stars witness their PYAAR...

Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein
Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na
Khushboo ki kirne, dheeme se gaaye

i hope i didn't bore you guys on the weekend.... sorry for blunders
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina



<font color="#000099" size="3">Waitingggggggg</font>


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waiting for comments ..................long one
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Hi Naddiya

wooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
awesome, fantastic, mind-blowing yaar
so Geet confessed her love to Maan.............lovely
do write more

Luv
Naina


Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg...bore? No way yaar....this really made the weekend bearable.....thanks a lot....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigurl953

Omg...bore? No way yaar....this really made the weekend bearable.....thanks a lot....

thx dear it was just a try sweetie... me and my thinking
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

<font color="#660066" size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hi Naddiya

wooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
awesome, fantastic, mind-blowing yaar
so Geet confessed her love to Maan.............lovely
do write more

Luv
Naina


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he cleverly made her say that....
i hope my this OS was better than my old OS
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: naddiya26



he cleverly made her say that....
i hope my this OS was better than my old OS



u written both OS was superb dear...so don't worry
u r a good writer n i really enjoyed ur writing very much

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kool_Naina



<font color="#006666" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">u written both OS was superb dear...so don't worry
u r a good writer n i really enjoyed ur writing very much
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thx dear my readers comments will tell i am waiting now for there response .. you all liked Zara se OS the most i think
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanq so much Dear for the Lovely weekend treat
Loved it

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