OS PYAR at pg 8updated Weekend special(prediction) - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

lovely update

but it was too short

i wish it was longer

dear i am updating next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

It was well written..can i know too when u will update..Or just PM me when u do..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mchopra

It was well written..can i know too when u will update..Or just PM me when u do..

dear i wrote next part but IF is not letting me add 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2
Suhani suhani hai yeh kahani
Jo khamoshi sunaati hai
Maan: reached before he searched the bus stand the bus had not arrived yet
Geet: i am sure Maan ... oh Geet Maan sir will be not here....
Maan:i hope i have not missed her ...she can't take care of herself her family wild.
Geet: babji bus mujhe ko yahan koi dekha na she reached bus stop covered her face.
Jise tune chaha hoga woh tera
Mujhe woh yeh batati hai
Maan saw her coming out of bus he hide himself behind a tree as she passed him he grab here arm and pull her to him.
Geet: aap?
Maan: tumhara damagh theek ha Geet
Geet: why you came here Mein samhal leti?
Maan:chup aik dum chup drag her to car sit in
Geet: Babji phir naakh per ghusa
Maan : started car ... tell me is there any hotel.

check below
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Geet: hotel aur yahan Sir ...
Maan: what you said?stare in anger
Geet: i mean... shy Maan. but sir we are alone yahan per to dadi ya office ka staff nahi.
Maan: i like when you take my name
Geet: i am just your fake maghater.
Maan: bus tum sub kaleya to real ho na
Main magan hoon par na jaanu
Kab aane wala hai woh pal
Geet was silent she was playing with her duppata.. Maan could feel her restlessness..
Maan:Geet tumahra woh dhaba kahan ha jis ka khana 5star hotel jaisa ha
Geet: aap mujhe ko taang kar raha ha
Maan: nahi i am hungry mein lunch bhi nahi kiya ha
Geet: woh tou mein bhi nahi kaiya..rub her stomach..i am hungry too.
Jab haule haule dheere dheere
Khilega dil ka yeh kawal.Maan:smiled as he succeed to make her talk .."pagal akeli aarahi thi"
Geet: aap haas kyu raha ha.... mera mazak urarah ha
Maan:nahi tou rasta bato.
Geet :turn left...woh ha ...i will go and get.. she tried to jump out of car
Maan: grab her hand Geet you will not go out i don't want any one to see you here.
Geet: but..
Maan: placed his finger at her lips ..chup mein har baat tumhari nahi manoo ga

check below ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan:came back knocked at her window she got frighten..Maan noticed that
Geet open window...kya huwa
Maan:colud see pain in her eyes..what to order?
Geet: ask them to give you what all they have?
Maan Ok.. he walk back ..after 10 min he came with plates ..."it smell great"
Geet: .aap mera dil rakhna kaleya karaha ha na Maan.
Maan as she called him Maan...nahi he had a took a piece of roti and dip in Dal ..started eating hhhmmm delicious Geet really it is better than a 5 star.
Geet : stared at his face.
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Maan: Geet khao na...he was busy eating he made a nawala brought closed to her mouth but put in his.
Geet:shocked
Maan: smiled.
Geet:there is only one plate
Maan: aab to mein tumhara apna hoon tum mera jhoota khasakti ho ..
Geet open her mouth in shocked Maan placed a nawala in her mouth.
Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein
Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
where is rest...
but good one.. So we came to MAAN at last..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aaaaaaaaah! Must say this is the best OS you've written till date 👏

This is AMAZING! Loved the 5 star hotel comment and this:

aab to mein tumhara apna hoon tum mera jhoota khasakti ho ..


I really hope the scenes are similar on Monday... ⭐️

Thanks for the P.M.! Once again, love it.... 😃 😃 😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
cool one naddiya....you are aweosme yaar....keep up the great work....I must say truely a dazzler....keep posting for the weekends honey!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wonderful.....update update update soooooooon dear

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