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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

This is so beautifully written! 👏

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mjht_lover

@mjht_lover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wow yaar good job!

the way you described the scene so well done....i mean the scene portrayed geet just as she's in the show and maan just as he is in the show....

i got goosebumps reading the scene...soooo beautifully done 😊

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

@MaankiMariam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

omg iv got butterflies in my stomach bcoz of your OS...its left me speechless...it was soooooooooooooo gud...iv jus read it twice n im ☺️ 😍 absolutely fantastic xxxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Hailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.........

*Thud*

gets up 30 mins later.......

ahem that was.... well that was... *dazed and speechless* ☺️

that was hawtttttt!!!!!!!!!!

very very sensual and passionate......

the whole OS was written very well.........*thumbs up*

by the end of it i was left wanting to read more......

Fab job hun..... absolutely fab.....

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Sofna

@Sofna

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!

This si simply suprbbbbbbbbbbbbb!!!

😍😍😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Durga A.
This is so beautifully written! 👏

Awww ty very much 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mjht_lover
wow yaar good job!

the way you described the scene so well done....i mean the scene portrayed geet just as she's in the show and maan just as he is in the show....

i got goosebumps reading the scene...soooo beautifully done 😊

Thank u 😊 Im glad that their characters remained in place! So happy u liked it! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: neha2005
hot!!! loved it!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Mariam...x
omg iv got butterflies in my stomach bcoz of your OS...its left me speechless...it was soooooooooooooo gud...iv jus read it twice n im ☺️ 😍 absolutely fantastic xxxx

😆 Wow it had the effect on u? Thank u 😳