FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 26

Originally posted by: muskanp

thanxs guys...thanxs for all ur support & love

wondering how to make it nice for the week end...

kya karoo..yeh maan bhi na...

put me in so much of trouble...

how do I bring the romance back...2 more parts...please...

shall try to reduce the intensity..or tears...😭😲

but how..this maan really deserves it...may be a dream sequence..

but still dos'nt make sense..every body is sad sad!!

how can any one have a pleasent dream...

shall work out something..soon

love

muskan

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actually i m lovin tis types of updates, so plz keep them on 4 a while, excited 2 see maan hurting himself wid d glass.

maan hugs the chart & says offcourse papa loves u..loves u more than his life..
& kisses the paper...

part 75

he hugs the paper & starts crying..he could feel how geet would have
been doing all this alone ..always..& he was never there with her
he hated himself..he hated thought of neglecting geet when she needed him the most
he threw the lamp & broke it...his hands start bleeding..
he remebered how geet hugged him in the gym..& he snaped her..
he could't take that in his self ego..he did'nt even realise that geet had
hugged him for the first time..how he ruiened his own budding relationship
he remembered how geet did'nt want to fight..she was wanting him to understand
that their relationship was moving a step further &
he sabotaged every thing in their relation..maan pushed away the things on the
dressing table & went to punch the mirror with his bleeding hand..
geet came & held it..maan looked at her eyes...he feared to see hatredness..
but was suprised to see pain..& concern for him..
geet - aap ko yanha nahi aana chahiya tha..(she looked away)
yeh kaya chezse phela ke rakhi hain..(her eyes were restless)
she ruthlessLY bins the stuffs..& tears the chart..she was ruthless & angry
maan - holds her hand ..yeh kya kar rahi ho geet..tum mera gussa in pe kyo inkal rahi hoo
geet - nahi main aap pe gussa nahi hoon...mujhe naphart hain in sab cheeze so se
maan - kyun geet ..yeh to tumne.khus(he paused)
geet - nafrat hain mujhe..in sab se nafarat hainn..
(she really looked annoyed & aggitated)
maan - geet...(he was scared to see her so ruthless)
geet - mujhe har woh cheeze se nafart hain jo aap ko pareshaan kare..
(that was real pain & anger in her eyes..turning into hatredness
like she was obsessed)
maan - lekin..(he was speechless and worried)
geet - dekho na..main karne kuch jathi hoon kuch aur ha jaata hain
(her voice turned softer & melo..in pain..)
maan cups her face in his hand..geet looks away..she notices his hand bleed
maan sees how her eyes started watering looking at his hand bleed..
she ran to get the first aid..she made him sit on the bed &
she cleaned the wound & tied a bandage
geet - yeh kya karthe rahethe ho aap...maine aap ko mana kiya tha na yanha aane se
maan - kyu..kyu geet tumne mujhe yanha aane se kyu mana kar rahe the..
geet - wow main..(geet looks away..)
maan - main kya geet..abh to kha do jo tumhare dil main hain
geet - nahi ..mujhe pata tha aap pareshaan ho javoo ghe..(maan wondered how does she
so selflessly loves him & can't see him in pain even after wat he has said..
maans guilt killed him...)
maan hugged her from the waist...she was standing next to the bed
he rested his head close to her heart...he could feel her heart beat heavy &
stressed..she could feel his tears wetting her dress..her heart..geet ran her fingers
on his hair.. pushing his hair behind...that touch made him feel..so nice & relieved..
she rested her chin on his head..& held him closer..reassuring him..
geet - aap ne dinner kiya?
maan turned his head for a no..hugging her..
geet - chaloo main kuch bana dethi hoon
maan - nahi..(tighted his grip) mujhe chhod kar mat jaavoo
geet - aap bhi chaloo..
maan gave a faded smile & followed her to the kitchen
geet was heating up the dinner...
maan - tum baheto I will do it..please don't stress ur self
geet - nahi mujhe karna do....
maan pulls the plate from her hand & hurts his wounds
geet - aap kabhi bhi meri baath nahi suntha...
stares at maan..their eyes meet..maan looks into her eyes..&
he could'nt stoping falling in love with her all over again...
geet looked away & served the food...her looking away was not usual..
maan noticed that..her eyes did'nt shy away..but they avoided his..
before maan could try eating with his wounded hands..geet pulled the plate
& fed him...she helped him with water..maan was admiring geet
& wondered how and why she is holding back so much of her pain deep within her..

as they went to the room..geet was finding difficult to climb the steps..
maan took her into his arms..& laid her on the bed..
he tucked the spread & cuddled up next to her...

next day
maan got up & was looking for geet...
he went to the kitchen..she was preparaing breakfast
maan - geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho..?
geet - aap uth gaya..(she continued working)
maan - geeeet tum yanha kya kar rahi ho(strin voice)
geet - ji main nashtha ready kar rahi thi..
maan - doctor ne tumhe rest karne ko kaha hain..
geet - nahi I am fine now....
maan - u r not fine
geet(snapped back) - maine kaha na I am fine..just let me do my work
maan was taken a back with her rudeness...he let her do wat she wanted to..
he went to the gym & worked out..
while practising his kicks & punches..
maan could'nt stop thinking about geet..snapping him..
her being abnormally normal...he trusthed a punch in the air..
sweating & panting..maan was reminded about how she did'nt react to his touch
his hug..his kiss..& how she is pretending yet to be fine...
maan fell..on the floor stressed..pulled his sweaty hair back
maan - why geet tum mujhe se itna door kyun ja rahi hoo..
jitna mai tumhare kareeb aana chatha hoon..tum uthna hi door ja rahi hoo..
tum pas nahi aathi thi ..samjh gaya tha ki tum sharmathi hoo..
aise door javoo ghi to main kaise sambhal aapne aap ko...

precap
geet taking care of krish