FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 100

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
great parts, really feel sorry for geet that she has so much pain hidden inside her, but im sure maan will do his level best to remove all the pain 😃 cant wait for more now
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...........geet is just awesome....
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it 😊
Though read the update in the morning but didn't had time to comment as I was already late for college 😛
I am just loving how Maan is taking care of Geet 😊
Geet is fabulous, knows Krish teachers so well, working with them on the worksheets and the play 😊

I hope you update soon 😊
And I am sure your update will be as rocking as today's episode was 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di

For Part 93
update was too romantic n u written it beautifully
loved thae way Maan tried to relieve all the moments wid her
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di

For Part 94
update was awesome, fabulous
lyked Geet n Krish meeting........so sweet
plssssssssss cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina




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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Muskan

will you be updating in some time?
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet(wispered to maan) - yeh sab krish ke teachers hain..few taught him in 8th will also
be taking his classes in 9th...
every one appriciated geets initiative on the work sheets
maan had nothing to say but to admire another side of his undiscovered wify..

part 95

as they were about to leave..
principal - all the parents should show similar interest in their kids..
I am sure then no kid will feel bad going to a hostel..
I am glad geet even though krsih is in hostel..u check all his work every day
now days parents don't have time to talk to their childern on a daily basis..
thanxs for ur time Mr.Khurana..

they sat in the car ..& maan looked at geet she still looked upset about leaving krish


he tried to make her feel lighter..changed the topic..
maan - poochna padega kya? khud nahi bologhi???
geet - nahi woh..main
maan hugs her & cuddles her ...woh sab kya tha..play..work sheet..checking his work???
geet - aap yanha se chaliya main bathathi hoon
maan starts the car..
geet - actually krish was finding it difficult to concentrate & practice his stuffs
ghar main to I used to be with him...
so I hired a software guy to make a webpage which had question answere things..
maine kuch nahi kiya..I just desinged roughly..& that guy did a great job
objective types hain...the more u practice..the more u know ur subject..
maan - umm
geet - krish could practice it when ever he wants & I could check it when i am free ..
how many times he has logged in & wat he has answered correctly ..
questions were based on the topics that are covered in the class every day
so I used to cordinate with his teachers..they liked my idea..& implemented ..
maan - yaar tumhe aise ideas aathe kanha se...
geet - maa hoon..na ise liya aajthe hain...aap kya hain..bichari ko hostel main dal diya
result aacha nahi hoga to phir mujhe hi gussa karo ge..
maan looked at her ..he always knew he was blessed to have her...he thanxed god again & again
he kissed her hand..
maan - aur woo play ???
geet - woo to kuch nahi..she laughed herself...
maan - baathvoo na..(challo hassi too)
geet - actually really silly idea tha..they loved it..
maan - aacha..
geet - they were thinking about the usual ..shakespear stuff..
I told them to makes a masala typical hindi movies type with..songs, action & melodrama
with all music to potray the scenes and situation all pre-recorded....not much dialogues..
kids will also enjoy & won't be stressed memeorissing the dialogues..
maan - u actually suggested that to the principal(with his eyebrows lifted)..tum bolene
se phele soch thi ho bhi yah nahi?
geet - maaaan
maan - nahi nahi..
geet - ise liya I did'nt want to tell u...see u r making fun of me now..(geet looked away in anger)
maan - nahi aise baat nahi hain..(maan smiled....)
its been 4hrs since they left shimla..they stoped near a cafe..
geet was still grumphy...maan tried to make her smile but she did'nt..
they went into the cafe...maan excused himself to the washroom..
geet - yeh loo..babaji..mujhe yanh bitha kar khud washroom chalegaya..
itna deer lagtha hain kya...
waiter - ur order maam
geet - orders herself a tea & coffee for maan
maan - and a dark chocalte cake please (geet turns her face)
geet ..geeeeet..maine to aise he kah diya tha
geet - kya..?
maan - kuch nahi...(aab kise baat ke liya naraz hain..iska kuch pata nahi chaltha..he mumeres)
geet looks at him from corner of her eyes...
waiter gets the drinks & cake..
maan takes the spoon tastes the cake..geet looks at him..she looks at his lips
dipped in choclate & his tongue licking it ..she looked way & sipped her tea
he cuts another portion & got the spoon close to geet..
maan - it is really yummy..she opens her mouth & he feeds her
geet looks at him..maans eyes were tasting her lips..tracing her every small moment
geet wiped her lips & saw maan was still admiring her..&
sipped her tea & looked away..maan smiled at her
they sat in the car..& were about to leave..looked at her..strangley..
moved his hand pointing at her lips...she wipped it on the left side with her thumb
maan nodded a no she wipped at the right side..maan smiled & looked away..
she got angry & pulled the sun visor...the moment she opened it there was a shower of
red rose petals on her..it slidded through her head..touching her cheeks..fell on her lap
& there stuck a note..she pulled the note & looked at maan he smiled looking away..

as she read it in her mind...maan repeated it loud..
"Phool Khilkar Udaas Hai,
Samandar Ko Aaj Paani Ki Pyaas Hai,
Ek Baar Aap Muskura Do Sanam,
Kyonki Khuda Ko Duniya Ki,
Sabse "Khubsoorat" Hansi Ki Talaash Hai."

muskura do na please...geet takes the petals from her lap & throws at him..
maan - geet geet..yeh kya kar rahe ho..& holds he hands
she smiles ..maan moves closer...she breathes faster..she could hear her heart
zooming up..he released one of her hand & pressed the her seat..to lay her horizontal
the seat went down slidding down & he bend along..on her..and moved to her side of the seat
she could feel his heart thuding near her heart..she looked away..he left her other hand
& moved the petals that settled on her hair..one at a time..every touch was running
current through her..he picked each petal & kissed them..& caresed her cheeks with his
geet - yeh kay kar rahe ho (she wispered)
maan - umm
geet - aap in petals ko kyu kiss kar rahe ho?
maan - i am just feeling their touch which just touched u...
geet - maaaan...she put her hands around his waist..& pulled him closer
he slipped from his elbow & rested on her..she reacted in a jolt..
her hands snaked into his hair & back..& she passiontely kissed his neck..
maan maoned..geet & that lit the fire in him..he kissed back...they kissed eachother
& pulled back..maan looked into her eyes took the lips into his..
she could taste the choclate cake..she smiled..her tongue played along for a while
tasting each other...in passion

precap
home sweet home..

.today's episode was too good...maan lifting sleeping geet was my part 92..me so thrilled
hope u all like this part..please do comment..really motivates me
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved hope I am first
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you so much, Muskan 😊

Awesome update 👏
Geet has been taking a very good care of Krish 😊
Loved the rose petals wala part and those lines were really beautiful! 😊
Really enjoyed the update!
You made it rocking like today's episode 👏 👏

Thanks for the update 😊
Love
Shivangi....

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