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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
awesome update!!
cant wait for the next part!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
hi shaila!! luv ur ff cn u add me 2 ur pm list :) plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Thanks 4 great n awesome update👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏 Shalu...!!!!!😉
Geet is cry badly bt changes her feeling 4 Maan...!!!!😭😭😭
Maan is upset n have weird feeling....u know hu Geet is peggy n all...!!!!😲
Devtara ki tou Baara baaje gae...!!! hehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Dev bhabi...bhabi....bhabi...!!! lolz hehehe🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Dadi is so calm n happy....narrating story as grandmother of young kids....!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
i know...having so much work aur uper se TEST ...I hate it...!!!!😡
Take ur tym babes...!!😃 bt Nov main every day 1 long ...messive update...!!!! hehehehe 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update!

Thanks for finding time to update this during your many exams 😊

Thanks for the PM as well and please update as soon as it's convenient ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI ADD ME TO YOUR PM PLZZZZZZZZZZZ. THANKS 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi,

I read your FF,
Fnatastic thought!👏👏

Please add me to your PM list,
and haan please update soon,

Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Enough of crying people and please save your tomatoes and bananas and chappals coz I'm gonna update this FF real soon
My exams just finished yesterday and like I promised,more regular updates are heading ur way
Okay,sorry for the weird emoticons I'm using...just wanted to try them out.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi galz...how's life? Well,I had written out the part and was going to post it yesterday but was having flu and cough...was quite sick and annoyed so I thought I'll do it today but today,it's even worse.I have got a fever of 39.1 degrees celcius and am quite behaal right now but I thought I should cheat ur feelings by not updating coz I promised to start giving updates from this weekend coz my exams are over.Okay, enough of my bak-bak.

Part 6
Recap ~ Devtara find out that Geet is from Hoshiarpur.Nt is furious but Dev is cool about it.Maan sees Geet crying and enters the ward.Geet stops crying.

Scene:Maan and Geet in the ward.

Maan - Bas aise hi hasti raho.Kabhi bhi un aasuon ko mat bahana kyunki tumhe dukhi dekh kar mera dil bhi rota hai.Aaj tak aisa kabhi bhi nahi feel hua mujhe .My life depends on you.Tumse barkar mere liye koi bhi nahi lekin tumne mujhe apna shayad kabhi mana hi nahi.Tumne mujhe apni zindagi ka itna bada sach batana zaroori nahi samjha!Kyun?Yeh kaise hua?Kya tumhe laga ki main tumhara saath nahi dunga tumhari mushkilon mein.Main jaanta hoon ki tum aisa koi bhi galat kam nahi karti jisse mujhe dukh pohocta.

Geet eyes brimmed up with tears, threatening to spill over any moment. What he just said so easily truly touched her heart.How could this man be so nice?How can he believe her so much and support her even when her own family abandoned her?The answer was simple - He loved her unconditionally,despite all her flaws.

With a lump in in her throat,she finally let her voice escape the boundaries of her mouth.

Geet - Woh..woh
Maan - Haan Geet,bolo! Daro mat!
Geet - Aap mujhe chod to nahi denge sachai jaanne ke baad?
Maan - Geet! tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi ho! Main hamesha tumhare saath tha aur sada rahunga! Koi tumhare saath kuch bhi bura kaise kar sakta hai.Koi tum jaisi masoom ladki ko kaise chod sakta hai.
Geet - Par usne toh mujhe chod diya.Bilkul akela
Maan - Kisne Geet?
Geet mustered all her courage and narrated her tale full of agony.She didn't tell Maan their names though. She broke into tears.
Maan was flabbergasted.He couldn't imagine anyone doing such a vile act to his Geet, inflict so much pain on her.It just killed him on the inside to even think of the endless line of problems Geet faced. He was fuming and would've killed that beast who did this to his Geet. Maan felt the tears landing on his hands and saw his love pouring buckets of tears from her hazel eyes. Instantly,he engulfed her into his masculine arms,wanting to suck all her pain from her.
Maan- Geet,tum mujhe ek baar batao us kamine ka naam...main usse kabhi nahi chodunga!
Geet - Nahi,Maan..sir!Yeh meri ladayi hai.Main yeh akeli ladungi! Thank you for all your help and I have to go my own way.I can't trouble you anymore
Maan - Tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya keh rahi ho! Main tumhara saath kabhi nahi chodunga aur main yeh mushkil se bhari jung tumhe akele toh hargis nahi ladne dunga!Tum bhool gayi ho kya ki tumhe har pal koi na koi sambhalne waala chahiye hota hai aur main woh banne ke liye taiyyar hoon. Jee raha hoon toh sirf tumhari khatir. Geet tum mere saath aisa kaisa kar sakti ho,apne saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho?
Geet - Maan sir,main aapko aur takleef nahi dena chahti.Aap please mere nazariye se sochiye.Main galat nahi hoon.Main nahi chahti ki meri waje se aap par koi ungli uthai.
Maan - Wah,Geet,wah!Ek hi pal mein paraya kar dia?Kya tum nahi jaanti ki main tumse pyar karta hoon ya phir tum yeh maanna hi nahi chahti!Bolo Geet!Tumhe kya lagta hai?Main nahi jaanta ki tum bhi mujhse itna hi pyar karti ho jitna main tumhe karta hoon.

Before Geet could respond,he went out of the room to his dadima who was in the doctor's cabin.He barged into the room.
Dadima - Maan aap yeh kya kar rahe hain?Hamari khandani anghuti kyun utaar rahe hain?
Maan- Dadima,relax.Main aapki bahu ko propose karne jaa raha hoon.He told her about all that happened to Geet.She was awestruck,seeing her grandson's heart of gold.
Within minutes,he arrived in her ward once again.He carried her out of her ward,in full bridal style, into the corridor,which automatically grabbed everyone's attention.

Please Geet,main tumhari har mushkil mein tumhara saath dena chahta hoon.Zindagi ke har modh pe tum haste hue dekhna chahta hoon. Main apni har saas tumhe dena chahta hoon.Main apni poori zindagi,har ek din aur raat tumhare naam karna chahta hoon.(Geet was once again crying)Nahi Geet,in aasuon ko mat bahao.Tumhari zinfdagi tumhara intezaar kar rahi hai.Main tumhe tumhari saari khushiyaan laotane waala hoon.Maan grabbed the knife from her fruit basket in his left hand and took the ring in his right. Geet Handa,will you marry me? Would you like to become Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana? You have two options marry me or kill me because I will die without you anyway!

His proposal was playing again and again in Geet's mind.''Hayye babaji.Yeh maan sir ne kya keh diya.Kya inhone socha bhi ki yeh shaadi koi accept bhi karega?Dadima accept karengi ek pregnant ladki ko apni khandan ki badi bahu ke liye?''she thought to herself as she stepped back. She received the biggest shock of her life.Maan,Maan Singh Khurana was proposing to her!

That's all for now!
So what do you think? Will she accept his proposal?
Sorry for such an idiotic update but I am not really feeling well so please bear with me!😊Thank you and don't forget to comment.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I will send out pms when I have updated the other Ff too..Sorry guys..I am not feeling so good so I will send later or tmr.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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abhi dekho na..you're not feeling good..and i've got the flu..what a timing..and we both updated our FF's today...😆😉

Chooo chweeet...I'm in heaven right now! 😆

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