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Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Wow!!!! Fabulous!!!!! It was simply awesome!!!!! Loved it!!!! Keep them coming......lolz....

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

it is probably the most enchanting piece i have read yet

i was bewitched in the web of words you weaved

drawn like a moth to the flame
who thought would feel warmth

but felt no remorse when burned to cinder...

it was fiendishly sensual....

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shona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

omg.........its superb yaar.........
Wat a OS........brilliant

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uzmam1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Oh wow!!

superb stuff!! congrats on a great start!!! 😉

please could you add me to your pm list!!

thankx

Uzma xx

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Love14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

wow its soo😛😉 romantic

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Priya

@--Priya--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

That was brilliant left me absolutely speechless! But im a teeny bit confused, is this an FF or a one shot? Coz it has both in the title, if its an FF I would love to read more, it'll probably be in flashbacks then, probably how both Maan and Geet overcame all the difficulties.😛😉 And if it is just a one shot then please do add me to your PM list for the next one shot. Cheers,

Priya

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Julie

@JULIEL

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

awww ... that si soooo beautiful!!! loved it!!

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Khushi

@blueangel1308

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

👏.
thank you everyone for the comments, reading them was great......i should be updating another os soon.

Edited by blueangel13 - 15 years ago

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Jhankaar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Really a wonderful piece....

It seemed so magical.... each word drew a different yet connected picture in my mind....

I didn't realised when I started reading it and when it got over.... I was just transported into another land while reading....

I would like to know that the words that you wrote in Hindi is of some song or a poem or your own creation.....

Please add me to your PM list....

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Khushi

@blueangel1308

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: JhankaaR000
Really a wonderful piece....
It seemed so magical.... each word drew a different yet connected picture in my mind....

I didn't realised when I started reading it and when it got over.... I was just transported into another land while reading....

I would like to know that the words that you wrote in Hindi is of some song or a poem or your own creation.....

Please add me to your PM list....

loved your comment, thank you.
the words are from one of my favorite songs, its semi-classical style song from the movie kurbaan. its called rasiya, singer is shruti pathak.

Edited by blueangel13 - 15 years ago

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