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Posted: 14 years ago
Opti. Well potrayed emotional updt. You are the best
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Opti...
I m in total love wid ur scene writing...
Maan and Geet situations r so realistic here...
I read ur scenes recently and could not wait b4 reading all the updates...
Please add me to ur pm list...
Thanks
Sakshi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zaqxsw

Hey Opti...

I m in total love wid ur scene writing...
Maan and Geet situations r so realistic here...
I read ur scenes recently and could not wait b4 reading all the updates...
Please add me to ur pm list...
Thanks
Sakshi

Thanks Sakshi. I'll let you know when I update next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read the whole FF. It took me a while but it was so captivating and you have great writing skills.

Please add me yo your pm list. Would love to know what happens next.

Thanks

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lov26

Just read the whole FF. It took me a while but it was so captivating and you have great writing skills.

Please add me yo your pm list. Would love to know what happens next.

Thanks

Thanks. Will let you know when I update next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Liked the updates
Maan's past was really painful
Liked that Maan directly said to Geet that Dev was his brother witout any delay
Maan wuld hav killed Dev if Dadi wuld had cum
Dev was such a jerk now he is putting all his blame on Dadi n Maan
I hate him
Liked the way Geet came rushing towards Dadi n helped her out
Maan was broken but liked that Geet supported him
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Good that he cleared Geet's misunderstanding
Now lets wats Geet's reply
Update soon n do pm plz
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Liked the updates

Maan's past was really painful
Liked that Maan directly said to Geet that Dev was his brother witout any delay
Maan wuld hav killed Dev if Dadi wuld had cum
Dev was such a jerk now he is putting all his blame on Dadi n Maan
I hate him
Liked the way Geet came rushing towards Dadi n helped her out
Maan was broken but liked that Geet supported him
Do u lik jackfruits best purposal strt evr😆😆😆
Good that he cleared Geet's misunderstanding
Now lets wats Geet's reply
Update soon n do pm plz

Thanks Afsha. Glad you liked the story so far. You'll get Geet's reply in the update afer next. The next one will be about the devils.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Continued from here:

Note: Although this half baked fanfic is titled Maaneet scenes for want of a better word, this update will focus on the two devils. Had to bring them in for the sake of continuity. Will get our beloved Maaneet in the next update.
In the meantime, in another section of the Khurana House there was a fiery fight between two of its residents. Dev, who was oblivious to what happened to his Dadima after he left her and his elder brother by the pool following the unceremonious showdown he had with them, had entered his room to be greeted by Naintara, who flew at him in rage.
"How dare you drag me into the muck, Dev," she blasted him, holding him by his collar, her eyes nearly popping out of her head in her anger.
"What's gotten over you, woman? Have you gone crazy?" he asked, astonished by his wife's strange behaviour.
"Yes, I have gone crazy, staying married to a loser like you who hides behind his wife."
"Hide behind my wife? What do you mean?" asked Dev, hoping she had not heard him at the pool.
"You very well know what I mean, Mr.Dev Khurana," she bit out the words, her using his full name clearly indicating how angry she was with him. "Don't feign ignorance," she wagged her finger at him. "I heard you blame me for the mess you created in Geet's life."

Dev realised his wife had overheard his verbal exchange with Dadima. He tried to smoothen her ruffled feathers by turning on his charm.

"Come on Babes. Don't take this seriously, yaar. How was I to react when my bro suddenly confronts me with his knowledge of our dark deeds? I tried to lie my way through but he couldn't be fooled."

"Just because you got caught why did you implicate me too? What was the need to tell Dadima that I had hatched the plan? Now how will I be able to face her? She always had a good impression of me. Thanks to you, that's gone now."

"I only told her the truth. You saw what my bro did when I lied to him. You were not the one who was on the verge of getting her jaw broken. I was."

"What makes you so sure Maan veerji knew about my role in this? If you had kept quiet, at least I would have remained free to save your hide, had you got caught. By opening your big mouth you have ensured that both of us will be counting the bars in the prison."

The mention of prison made Dev very nervous."Don't blame me for everything, darling. You were the mastermind of this devious plan. It is because of you, I am in trouble."

"Oh, I am the one responsible for your troubles, am I? Let me remind you Mr.Dev Khurana, if it hadn't been for me, you would have already been locked up in prison by now for not paying up your debts."

"How very convenient of you to forget that I ran up those debts to satisfy your avarice. So you are the root cause for everything," he said accusingly, pointing his finger at her.

"So now you are pointing your finger at me, are you?!" she screamed and unable to contain her anger any longer she lunged at him, digging her long fingernails into the bare portion of his chest which was revealed in the lose bathrobe he wore.

Dev was shocked by her ferocity as he looked down to see the marks left by her nails. He pushed her hard and she fell back on the bed with a thud.

Before she could get up, he pinned her down and said in a pleading voice, "Come on, there's no use quarrelling amongst ourselves. We need to put up a united front if we have to come out of this."

Naintara was about to retort but stopped herself as she knew he was right. Both of them sat side by side on the bed, their heads buried in their hands, silently contemplating their next course of action.

After a few minutes of thoughts, Naintara lifted her head up and snapping her fingers, she said excitedly, "I know what we'll do. I have a distant uncle who is a leading criminal lawyer here in Delhi. My father had done a lot for him so he owes me a big one. I'll arrange for our anticipatory bail through him."

Dev was relieved to hear this. "Darling, I always knew you will have a solution to all our problems. What will I do without a smart wife like you," he praised her.

Ignoring his flattery, Naintara quickly dialled her uncle's number. Over the next half hour she briefed him about their deeds and sought his help out of their troubles. When she replaced the phone, she broke into a broad smile.

"I guess we can sleep in peace. My uncle will take care of everything. It is a good thing that we had kept the entire affair clandestine."

Dev still had his doubts. "Despite our precautions, don't know how bro came to know of it. Would he not testify against us?"

"I doubt it, Dev. Not after your clever manipulation of your brother's and Dadi's emotions. I saw how guilty both of them looked for not helping you when they could. You keep that up. Don't let their conscience ease even for a minute. You are very good at emotional blackmail."

"Then why do we need the anticipatory bail?" he asked in confusion.

"Well, that is just a precautionary measure if either of them wants to play by the rule of law. Better to be safe than sorry, " she replied.

Dev smiled for the first time after the confrontation. Heaving a sigh of relief, he hugged his wife and said.

"Thanks, darling. Let's catch up on some sleep to face another bright day, then."

He led her to the bed, switching off the light on his way.

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful...........

both these devils are unrepentant of their deeds....
hope to see a lot of drama in upcoming updates
it was a brilliant update
plzz continue soon
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: revav

wonderful...........

both these devils are unrepentant of their deeds....
hope to see a lot of drama in upcoming updates
it was a brilliant update
plzz continue soon
reva

Thanks Reva. Yes, both the devils are unrepentant and all set with their next move.

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