Maaneet scenes-update on Pg 142 (28/11) - Page 57

Naicee....waiting for the day they will show this on screen as well!

I dont know how i missed your FF.. please add me to your pm list..

I read all the updates in one go and loved it.. Beautifully written and i loved especially when Maan was beating Dev black and blue 😊

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

wow Thats Awesome.....👏......

Loved it...❤️....

Loved the way U described the action sequence.........

Loved the way Maan Punched Dev.........

I hope Daadi understands and Trusts Geet........

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Pls Update Soooooooon

Thanks Sireesha. I'm not good at describing action sequences but then I had to do it here because of the gravity of the situation.

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

wowwww
that is really awesome... maan in action.. it was too good
love it
now story is very interested
plz contionue soon opti
thanks dear for such a great maaneet scenes update...
thanks ones again

Thanks. Looks like everyone is eagerly waiting for the show Maan to throw in a few punches at Dev, but they are delaying the inevitable.

Originally posted by: shradhav

Naicee....waiting for the day they will show this on screen as well!

😍

Great update as usual...Thanks for the PM, Opti!

I guess after what they showed today, the wait will be longer. Hope the day comes though.

Originally posted by: Lov26

I dont know how i missed your FF.. please add me to your pm list..

I read all the updates in one go and loved it.. Beautifully written and i loved especially when Maan was beating Dev black and blue 😊

Thanks. Will let you know when I update next.

Originally posted by: -Zoya-

Awesome!!!
Loved it!!!
Continue soon!!
Daadi ji!!!
Tussi thodi dair baad nai aa sakte si???

Thanks Zoya. Lets see what Dadi's arrival will do to this encounter.

awesome part.loved it.
good work maan.
dev deserve it.
uff y dadi came now.
update soon.