First FF **Tum Bin** Part 2/3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi this is my first ever FF on Geet. I read sooooo many- actually all the FF ever written on this site and they all are BRILL. Lol😆

Its only my 8th day on the Geet forum and I loved it. Soooo?welll I wanted to write my own version. I really want maan to find everything out? and I can't wait lol. So I am writing my own and sharing it with you.


Well this will start from 6th august I hop u lot like it. Pls do comment. :D xxx and also don't forget to press the LIKE button. :D😃😃😃

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Part 1 pg 1

part 2 page 2
part 3 pg 3

pappa ji... Kae hu rahai muje... I can't think about him like this! I can't! May kase. I have no right to love anyone. No right. I have no right to hurt someone with my painful past. I can't. That night Geet couldn't sleep well. She constantly thought about Maan that night. She was confused. She sat up on her bed, looked at the clock. It was 3:00am "pappji muje kay hu rahi hi... Me aisa ku soch rahi hu. Pappa ji.." there was tears on her eyes, rolling down her soft pale skin. She was in unwanted pain. "geet tu so ja. Teri aur is baci ki lie ae bohat buri baat hai. Geet soja na. Baat soon. Ap so ja." she non stop fought with her self. She couldn't seet still anywhere. None stop getting up lying down. Maans thought haunted her all night. By the time she fell in to deep sleep it was 5:00 am. Only 2 hours left in tell she woke up again.

Geet... Geet... GEET! Utto...
Geet: kun! Kun.. Kai. She was still half sleep. The voice made her jump. "kun" she slowly gradually opened her eyes...

Geet utto... Geet!

Faintly a face appears infront of her. "sirrr ap." still not in her sense. "ha.. Apko tamiz naam ki koi chees pata hi."

Maan: tamiz my foot... Tumko bakt ki kabar hai. Do you know what time it is? He was furious. Timed with anger.

Geet: "ha..." She lazly looked at the clock.. It was 11am. "hi rabba ..pappa ji..." She jumped out of her bed. "Si..sir... Sir.." her voice was shaking. "I am sorry... Au kaal raat.."

Maan: "hurry up geet... Humko meeting attend karne hi. Get ready fast."

Maan noticed her eyes. It was bright red. He knew straight way she didn't sleep last night. "geet tum tik tho ho na."

Geet: "ha...ha! Ha mai tik hu." she wasn't listing to maan. She was lost in her thought. Her tummy was rumbling.

Maan: geet... We r leaving in an hour, so please take your time."

Maan was tenses due to geet. She didn't look healthy at all. He walked out of the bedroom giving geet plenty of time to get ready. He slowly walked downstairs. As he walked downstairs.. All the stuff noticed he looked tensed. All the stuff gazed at him as he lazily walked down the stairs.

Tasa: sahsa! Oppes I mean maam... Ae DD? looks so down. What's wrong with him?
Shsha: muje kai pata.. Do I look like his secretary?
Tasa: oops silly me.

Shsha: she walked towards MK and tried to wake him up from his thought: "MK... What's wrong. U look down.

Maan: kuch nahi. Get everything prepared for the meeting. Me and geet going together. And also fix my appointment with Mr.Mehaita.

Sasha: but MK..
Maan: "jo kaha ausai karo. Jaldi." he walked out.

Tasa: shasha.. I mean mam.. DD tu gai. Both gazing as DD disepeared.
Shsha: to may kai karu. She was angry.

Geet came down after half an hour. She looked around. There was no maan. She slowly walked towards pinki and asked for 4 files that she needs to take for the meeting.

Pinki: tu tik to hai na geet. Tu raat Bhar soi nahi ka? She was worried about her.
Geet: au me bhat Perisian thi. Aur pata nahi kai... Before Geet said another word adi gave her a shout from the back. "geet... He laughed. Au MK tumari bhar intejar karrahi hi." he laughed again.
Geet faced pinki again tujai may baat mi bata ti hu. Ab jau... Otherwise he will be mad at me again. Anyway I am already late."
Geet left the office in hurry. Shsha and tasha looked at her in great surprise. She was too busy at work that was set by maan.
Tasha: maam... aj kal geet buhat man Mani karne lagi hi.
Shasha: gave her a evil glare.
Tasha: deki na tim se nahi... Shasha walked way before shasha could finish her sentence.


Maan was sitting in the car. Very disturbed. he was lost in geets thought as usual. He didn't complain. Neither resisted. "what's wrong with her? She is so quit. That's not like her. Kai au mera... Nahi. She doesn't know. I am sure."
Geet was standing outside the car. Hesitating to go in. "ai papa ji aeb me key karu. Jitni iski dur jana cati hu, utnahi app mujko iski pass lekar ati hai.... App kay cathi ho paapa ji." she was really worried. Hesitating to seat next to maan. Suddenly the window opens..
Maan: "geet tum andar aogi... Ya mujko jabar dasti karna parega?"
Geet: she was shocked at his word. "hi rabba... Sir ae app kai bol rahi hai."😆
Maan: "GEETTTTT..."😆

Thanks Jennifer
pls do comment. :D and also LIKE LIKE LIKE... lol ( if u do)...
i am so exited to read all of urs comments. :D xxx😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice beginning, looking forward to other updates.
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Hey nice start..looks interesting.. do continue soon.
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hey great part
plzzzz do continue
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Ahh ty so much. Really glad u lot liked it. I wasn't really sure if it was a good start or not. But ty xx:D
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a gud start please continue and add me to ur pm list

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great ff
plz continue soon
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reserved😆
i have to go to bed now😆
my dad is yelling😉
please add me to ur pm list😳
it was wonderful👏
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part 2




As the meeting finished it was 5:00pm.
Maan: geet if you want you can finish now... Or go back home. (he completely forgot geet living in his out house.)

Geet: paappa ji... Look he don't even want to drop me round the house. Dust danav.

Maan: geet...
Geet: na it's ok... Ummm... You can drop me here... I need to do some shopping.
Maan: oh... Ok... (he was expecting some other answer.)
Geet quickly got off leaving all the meeating files behind. Maan looked at in great concentration as she disappeared in the hopping maal.

Back at kk mension:

It was 10pm... Maan was moving up an down the room....he was tensed. He kept rubbing his hand... Sweeting. "where is she?"

His nonstop urge and worry brought dadi in his room...
Dadi: maan... Maan! H wasn't listening. MAAN!
Maan: oh dadi... App.
Dadi: ka hua? Why so worried?
Maan: "nahi oh...g.... Word was stuck In his through.
Dadi: g....e...et, she teased.
maan: kuch nahi... Dadi ap jay.

Dadi left without teasing him.

Maan: "app ka karu?... Ae kaha. He started moving up and down again across the room.

Its 12:00 midnight... Maan was furious. He wasn't still sleep. He looked roared but stayed wake just for geet. He already went to the shopping center and it was close. He was outside now. In garden... He hard some noise. He looked from behind the bush. It was geet and pinky. Both laughing. Maan took a deep breath... Thank god ae tik to hai. But he was furious... He was worried sik here and she was laughing. That haunted him.

Pinky: "are that was amazing.
Geet: yep... The checkup went really well.
Pinky: not about that silly... I meeaan the foooood.
Geet: she laughed
Maan couldn't stop staring at her. She looked beautiful. Elegant... Soft...
Pinki: "I am staying round yours, do you think maan sir will be alright with it."
Geet: ha ku nahi. Now it's min. Anyway sir it's the one who gave me the job it's maam. So
Pinki: "pher bi."
As they spoke they disappeared the out house. Maan was furious.. at the same time relif. Now his word wAs stuck on the checkup. "KIski checkup... Doctor? Why" she looked fine to me.
Next morning: geet and pinki in the kitchen:

Pinki: can you make your lovely allo ka paratha.
Geet: kk... Per..
Pinki: please...
Geet: fine

The smell of the paratha covers the whole kitchen and started to leek out... To the balconey. Maan walled in early he came upstair unwillingly... He didn't even knew why he is up there... He peked through the kitchen door... The food looked delicious and most of all geet.

She slowly walked up towards him... And slowly whispers sirrrrrr..............
He loped at her with puppy eyes and garbed her close to him... He was lost in her eyes.

Sirr...sirr... SIRRR... Both geet and pinko shouted at the same time.

Maan: he jumped. Ha... What... Tum.... (he looked at geet with great surprise.)
Tum.
Pinky: ha sir kal....
Maan: come downstairs we have lots of work to do.
Geet: par sir... It's only 7! We start work at 8...
Maan: ha yea... No ( he was mumbling. Lost it. He wasn't sure what he was saying.) well today u 2 will start from 8...I mean 7... It's tht clear. (his voice tone increased.)
Geet: yes sir.. I mean sorry sir.
Maan walked downstairs.

Geet: paapa ji... Why you brought me here. Now please be nice and get me another job... So I can leave.

Whole day was very busy... Geet tried his best to get another job while maan just couldn't stop concentrating on geets beauty. After everyone left... Maan staid behind 10 minutes extra for geet... To talk... But at the end he lost it. He didn't have the courage to even say a single word.

As maan left the office the phone rang. It was one of the company that offered geet another job as a secretary. Company arranged an appointment after 3days at 4:00pm. Geet was extremely happy at the same time worried. It's at office hour and geet had no idia how could she have a day off.
She wAs worried... She didn't want maan to know the truth. Neither dadi. She only staying Intel dadi feels better again. She looked at the pice of paper and started talking again... Pappa ji... Please.....

Next day: at office:geet slowly walked towards maan. Shaking... Thinking how she should start the conversation.
Geet: sirr...
Maan: (he was busy with his work..) yes... Not looking at her.
Geet: uummm...
Maan: I don't have whole day! Are you starting or not... Still not looking.
Geet: sirr ummm.. I need a day off this Thursday.
Maan quickly looked up with a shocking face.
Geet: only for 2 hours... Her voice sqeek.
Maan: why?
Geet: oh.. Me... Au...
Maan: I am waiting!
Meantime pinky came Along.. "sir ae phil. Geet looked at pinki...
Geet: it'd pinkis birthday...
Pinki was shocked..
Pinki: per... Geet...
Geet: yes... That's why. She pinched pinki...
Pinki: ouch....
Geet: yes that's why me and her going for a special lunch... And uncle ji...
Maan: ahh... His face soften... "per... Why pinki didn't ask for any hours off?"
Pinki was still confused standing in between them like a ball...
Geet: au me... She was scard that's why I am asking!...
Maan: and you r not?
Geet: au... Yea... Me bi... She couldn't speak any more.

Geet in her mind: pappa ji kitni karus boss di apne.... Asking for 2 hours off but asking questions like I am going way for months....

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